True Writers Club
Присоединиться
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by sadiebugz00
Chapter 2 (BTW, I'm just copying and pasting from Word, so it may look like I don't have paragraphs, but I do)


2
ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective

A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But, if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees him hobbling after me. I’ve never really known why she despises him. I open the door as she says, “Why is Butt Mutt still here, babe?” she asks, not really caring if Carter could understand her или not.
“Don’t call him that, please!” I say for the millionth time.
"Whatever. Just get rid of that thing as soon as possible. Preferably today. If not by tomorrow, we're over," she replied manipulatively.
“Fine. How about we go right now. I figured out a place that I can drop him off at. It’s called the Sonaran Desert или something like that.”
“First of all, there’s NO way I’m getting in your wimpy little truck with that… thing. секунда of all, I believe it is the Sonoran Desert.” She Ответы arrogantly.
“Okay, then. I’ll be back in an час или so,” I reply, “stay safe.”
“Whatever…” she retorts blandly.
Sometimes I wonder if she really does Любовь me… Anyone could easily see that I Любовь Carter and no matter what they think they would make sure I was happy… Maybe she’s just using me for the little money that I make that she always gets a handle of to buy a new pair of shoes. Why do I even doubt myself?? Of course she loves me! It wouldn’t make sense; she had been dealing with me for a whole год now! I haven’t known anyone else that has stayed in a relationship that long and tolerated me. She’s a keeper. I just know it in my heart. I whistle to Carter twice, signaling it was time to leave the house. He hurriedly runs out the front door and approaches my truck. I will be the first to admit, it isn’t the best truck. Its cherry-red paint is chipping, and the engine is pretty rusty. However, it works just fine, for its old age of 21. It’s an old GMC. For some reason, Jess really hates it, and is horrified by the idea of being trapped in the old thing with sweet ol’ Carter. I open the door, motioning for Carter to jump in.
He tries to jump in at first, but then I realize that it is way too high for him to reach. I gingerly lift him up into his seat, and then switch sides to hop into mine.
I put the key in and listen to the old thing rev up. Luckily, she seemed to be cooperating today and was running nicely.
I pull out of my driveway, but pause to look at the front of my house. It most definitely doesn’t have the best curb appeal on the block, that’s for sure. It clearly hasn’t been painted in at least two decades, and what used to be glorious white paint, is now tinted yellow. The only plant life I have is dead leaves from my neighbors’ trees, dead grass, and a whole bunch of weeds. The only way I manage to escape the griping of my neighbors is by weekly spray-painting my трава a nice shade of green and buying fake Цветы and burying them into the dry dirt.
I pull away from my shameful house and out of the neighborhood full of perfect front yards with flowers, trees, garden gnomes, and perfectly painted houses.
I look over at Carter, and see that his tail is wagging. I instantly feel twice as guilty. I have to. I think, I need Jesse in my life. She’s the best girlfriend I’ve ever had. There’s gonna be some way that’s he’s gonna make that place his home… Sadly, he probably thinks we’re going to somewhere fun… I just feel so malicious doing this to him!
We drove for an час или so as we finally approached the road that enters the desert, and I turn onto it. Carter looked around and started whimpering in the softest tone I had ever heard. It was one of those moments that made me regret leaving him in this desert. After all, I hadn’t done a whole lot of research on this place. For all I know, Big Foot, the Abdominal Snow Monster, and the Boogie Man might live there! It’s a pretty low probability level, but… it COULD be possible!
The silence was just too awkward for me, even though I was just riding in an old truck with a dog. I decided to turn on the radio so it doesn’t seem so awkward. All of the sudden, Drive By by Train comes on and makes me feel twice as guilty, because it’s about someone telling the other person that they’ll never leave them.
So, I switch the channel, and I Won’t Give Up by Jason Mraz came on, a song about someone who loves the other person so much that they won’t leave them. I switch the channel again, and Somebody That I Used to Know by Goyte comes on. I decide to turn the radio off, because every song was too awkward, еще awkward than the silence.
I look over at Carter, who seems thoroughly confused by all the changing of Музыка and silence. I could’ve sworn he had shifted his head to his head and he had a glint in his eye that seemed like he was thinking, “What was that for, man? Those were my JAMS!” I chuckle to myself. You’re going crazy, I tell myself. You’re just hallucinating.
We drive for about 30 минуты along the straight road into the desert, not turning once (I figured I would get lost) before I found a good spot. In the distance, Ты could see a pack of coyotes, so I figured it was the PERFECT place to drop him off.
I open my door, counting on him jumping out over my lap as usual. He succeeds in jumping straight over my lap and out the door. I quickly slam the door closed, pull the truck into reverse, switch into drive, and slam the pedal so I wouldn’t have to look at his face, which was most likely not the most happy или trusting face that I would ever see. The only thing I could think as I was speeding away was, Don’t feel guilty… It’s for the better.
posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take Ты to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
continue reading...
posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. Ты know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your Вопросы and comments!
added by sawfan13
Source: Twitter или Photobucket
added by alicia386
After days of debating, I decided to post some of my first attempt at fan-fiction. In this case the "Silent Hill" franchise. For those of Ты that have never played the games, Ты could always look up spoilers for them, since this takes place in the game canon. Anyway, here's the prolouge & Chapter One, please Комментарий and let me know what Ты think! :)
_______________________________________
PROLOUGE:TOLUCA COUNTY, MAY 2001
Frank was asleep when he heard the knock on his door. After forcing himself out of bed, he looked out to see someone he hardly ever saw. Nathan and his father. Nathan was...
continue reading...
posted by rory2011
she slept for three hours near Kat ,the ground felt harsher and colder than before ,but Kat's body made Hayley feel worm
she felt the door opening and someone is walking over her ,he grabbed her strongly ,she opened her eyes screaming " mom ... mom ... please " she was trying to escape from Mac's hand but she's too young and small to fight a 36 years old man
Kat finally felt something ,her head was killing her ,she can hardly stand cause she Остаться в живых a lot of blood ,but all she wanted is respond to her daughter's scream
after she stood up she can see very clear ,she saw Mac taking Hayley ,she heard...
continue reading...
posted by rory2011
Hayley was lying on the ground without any Переместить ,David was watching his daughter being tortured between Mac's hand

he slapped her three times then he hit her head with the Стена ,in somehow ,Kat could get out of Mac's hand ,she took three steps back but everything she was seeing is dark with red and black vision ,she couldn't run away или find a way out cause her head hurt her so much
Mac walked fast after she stood away ,and he pushed her against the Стена
he was holding something in his hand
" let's see if Ты can handle this " Mac сказал(-а) , he looked at Kat for a минуты then he looked at David...
continue reading...
I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces by pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Фэнтези :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered by my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why Ты bother, Des. Your voice is weak...
continue reading...
One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will Переместить on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
Chapter 1


Warren poked his head slightly above the covers, noticing
the blinds were up, Показ a bright and sunny day. He slowly peaked at the clock, trying not to look at the walls around him. 11:03am. Crap. He closed his eyes, using his senses to go downstairs for what was left of breakfast. He grabbed his old baseball bat that Sam had дана him in a chance to try to get his little brother to become "normal" and used it as a walking cane. He had tapped into his hearing, smelling, and feeling senses to the point where if he did loose his eye sight, he could live. If only I could loose my eye...
continue reading...
posted by sadiebugz00
Realistic Fiction

Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip


Anne's point of view

I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.

He had каштан hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Ты looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place...
continue reading...
Chapter (19):
She walked into a unfamiliar kitchen, where three people sat around a small table, "Morning" she said, "Nice of Ты to Присоединиться us.." сказал(-а) a girl with pale hair and bright green eyes, "Shut up Suse" she said, "Lily please respect your sister" сказал(-а) Laura Gellar, she walked to the таблица and settled Далее to her father, "What's for breakfast?" she asked, "Pancakes,and if Ты don't want any cereal" replied Jonathan, "Mom, can I have two блины please" she asked, "Sure, Susie could Ты please put some for your sister?" replied Laura, "of course" сказал(-а) Susie with a forced smile and she put...
continue reading...
Chris: Welcome to Total Drama Adventure

= theme song =

(Team Zoey)
Mike: Эй, Z-
Gwen: STOP.
-------------------------------------------------------
*Chris walks into the kitchen*
-------------------------------------------------------
Private: CAN I PLLEEAASSE Присоединиться THE OTHHA TEAM????!!!!!
Chris: Well sure but you'd have to be replaced.
With Rico.
Private: Oh sure!!!

(Team Triumph)
Private: Эй, Crystal I'm on your team now!
Crystal: Great.
Heather: *sigh* Another stupid bird on my team...
Skipper: HEY!!!!
Crystal: Эй, don't talk bad about me and the cute one....I mean.....................
Lindsay:...
continue reading...
posted by Problematic129
Part 4!!!!!!!! Thanks to Ты guys, I made another one! Again with lovely inspiring freedom pictures, and it has to do with the title, i hope Ты enjoyed it. I found some of these pictures on tumblr and we сердце it, both great websites and really inspiring. I don't own any of these, but I hope Ты enjoy this and it inspires you, it sure inspired me.
I'm going to make another Inspired soon, so look out. Hope I'm inspiring Ты my lovely readers and writer's. Write on and live on!
I don't anything (especially the pictures). Enjoy!
 Katniss and Peeta
Katniss and Peeta
We share it everyday,
Oh yes we do.
They are the treasures of the world
That we use.

It's not gold,
Zinc, copper, или silver.
Oil, not even close.

They are
Courage, determination
How women could have their rights
Today

The treasures of the world
The one and only place
Where Ты can find people
Of different color and sex

Where Ты can find blacks,
Asian, Syrian, and Australian
Oh the people of the world
The treasures of the world

The treasures of the world
Use them wisely
Do not leave them in chains
For the people Ты break
They will break Ты back.

Oh the treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
 Different sexes and Цвета come together to walk the Relay
Different sexes and colors come together to walk the Relay
added by h3rmioneg
Chapter 14: Convicts See All and Hear All

It was around the afternoon. We were simply driving around town trying desperately to come up with a plan. Our Назад ideas weren't all that good. Many of the ideas included us going to look for Dr. Hyde since he was our main suspect. Raven and I shot down that idea. If we did go and find Dr. Hyde, what would that accomplish? Dr. Hyde is a villainous man. I am sure he wouldn't be able to be fooled by spies in training. We would end up getting zero amount of information from him. He knows me and Raven. He knows what side we have chosen. Darrell was...
continue reading...
Remembering the Past, Hope for the Future
by hgfan5602

I sat there, at my desk, Далее to my bedroom window, thinking about the past events in 2012...and remembered the time...when I was at Relay for Life. It would not be soon before I, myself, passed from cancer also. My doctor сказал(-а) that I would only have a few months left, so I decided to make the most of it.
Our team had raised $6864.88 for cancer patients across the globe. We had all been preparing for this one special time. I was walking the Survivor's Lap, and watched as all the survivors of cancer walked a lap together. It was so cheerful!!!...
continue reading...