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Эй, do Ты like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and Любовь in his eyes
made her feel безопасно, сейф
when she smiled
it brightened his день
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of Любовь
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
Любовь is like the wind
Ты cant see it
but Ты can feel it
Любовь folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

 twilight_lover9 posted Больше года
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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum еще stuff bout like Вампиры haha that would be interesting..
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posted Больше года 
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Ты could just go to the request a peom Вопрос and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
twilight_lover9 posted Больше года
Little_Cullen said:
Любовь it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual Письмо is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel безопасно, сейф and her smile brightens his day. I Любовь it. Keep it up!
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posted Больше года 
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thank-u so much
twilight_lover9 posted Больше года
twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
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twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
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it's a perfect poem about them.
posted Больше года 
Twilightpup said:
Its really good , Ты should make one about Bella and Edward
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posted Больше года 
emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! Ты should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow или Jacob and Renesmee или something!
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posted Больше года 
sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, Вампиры anything LOL KEEP IT UP HUN XX
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posted Больше года 
zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

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Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
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LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
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