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this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good или not before I Отправить it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear Любовь Ты once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Ты meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Ты is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Любовь is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Любовь is coming to its new close.
Цвета were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Любовь to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Любовь has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Любовь left it took Ты along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Любовь was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Любовь would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
Terrence moved slowly, watching where he placed his feet. He didn’t want to step on those certain floorboards that squeaked and risk scaring the small girl. He quietly picked his way across the floor, and stopped at the edge of the child’s bed. Gently, he placed a hand on her shoulder, and for a moment, his eyes became locked on the stark contrast of their skin tones. She was very light in color, almost a peachy shade. He was dark in tone, close to the color of chocolate. He smiled at this.

“Rosie,” He said, voice barely above a whisper. “It’s almost daylight. Time to get up, kiddo.”...
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posted by Me_Iz_Here
(Not a very creative name, I know)


ONE

I sat on the bed. Doing nothing. Nothing. Nothing. I looked at the clock. Friday, five-fifty-eight PM. Five-fifty-nine. Waiting. Waiting. сердце pounding. Counting seconds. Every week. Every week, SHE came. SHE would try to kill me. Then I would scream for help and they would come. Then I would get a lecture that nothing was there, possibly some treatment или whatever. Then Далее Friday at six, it would happen again.
Forty-five seconds. I glanced at the book. I brought it with me. That way, no one else would read it. It was old and leather-bound, and had pictures...
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 "Leonardo"aka Leo the Эмо :]"
"Leonardo"aka Leo the Emo :]"
Ugh,I knew today was going to be terrible but seriously,does she have to completely suck his whole face like that.I wasn't talking about Lulu and Joel,luckily Музыка was the only class I didn't have those two lovers.No,I was talking about my friend Abby totally lipping her boyfriend Gabe's face off.It was completely sickening.Our retarded teacher never looked back so they spent the whole forty-five минуты in class sucking faces.Juan had the same look I did,the look that make the whole school know that I drank rotten молоко или something.A look that would make the janitors get a raise for their...
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posted by Vixie79
In a world of his
she unloads his gun

She and he waits for this
he releases his love

In blue and green orbs
she gives him еще and more

A million miles away
A million years girl

In a black woven chest
he digs his nails deep

She trusts in him for what he does
live in a house in the suburbs

He kisses the pain with blood and light
sleeping it off in the morning

A million miles away
A million years girl

In her world of his
she unloads his gun

In a world of his
she covers the sun

A million miles away
A million years
A million years girl
posted by EmoKidSteven
Well Ты see
I'm not myself anymore
Well Ты can see
What I've done
Blinded myself
Остаться в живых my direction
In this times
That are getting cold
In this moment
To behold
And shine

Here's a poem
For all the loved ones
Here's a grave
For all the dead
Here's the oxygen
For all the living
Here's a tissue
For tears that are shed
I'm Остаться в живых now
I'm here now
I'm Остаться в живых here
By Myself
I'm gone now
I'm Остаться в живых again
I'm lost
By myself

Well take your houses
Take your money
Take the things Ты don't need
Live the life
You've always wanted
And then burn the memories
Take the good times and the bad
Take the happy maybe the sad
And turn, turn yourself around
I'm Остаться в живых in my own fairytale
Where I'm the winner
All over again
in my daydreams I've Остаться в живых all hope
All ambition
Looking and losing an only friend

I'm Остаться в живых now
I'm here now
I'm Остаться в живых here
By Myself
I'm gone now
I'm Остаться в живых again
I'm lost
By myself

I'm lost
I'm here
I'm Остаться в живых here
By myself

I'm Остаться в живых now
I'm here now
I'm Остаться в живых here
By myself

By myself
posted by twilight-rocks9
plz tell me if u like it или if i should write more.


And his hair I Любовь it!” my best friend Selene said. I make a gagging sound. “Oh shut up Gabs you’re going to be like this your boyfriend and I’m going to suffer.” she said. “You want to suffer then let me replay what Ты sound like.” I did a horrible impression of her. “Oh no I have to go bye gabby.” she said. When she got up she kicked sand on my arm. “Bye Lena” I сказал(-а) a little too late. I looked at the suns закуска, исправление, отражением on the clear blue ocean. I got up to go swimming when someone put their hands over my eyes and said...
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added by moodystuff449
Source: I made it.
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posted by flabaloobalah
CHAPTER ONE: "CARTER"

There’s one silent sensation of falling really fast and really hard. Then it’s over. Just like that. Somewhere off in the distance, a girl screams. Maybe she’s Далее to me and my damaged ears are playing tricks on me. или maybe she really is far away from here, wherever that is.
    A flame billowing over a folded up car flicks its vile tongue. The огонь reflects in the pools of blood and the bodies. Five bodies, and myself, still alive. Sirens wail and rescue teams and news vans swarm the scene. I moan and grip my chest, waiting for someone to notice...
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posted by Triscia95
“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I Любовь you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned кислый and full of anger. Nothing he did или сказал(-а) made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a секунда thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

He wasn’t...
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posted by Insight357
An Энджел
A Demon
A battle
Raging in
The night sky

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

The Энджел knelt down
On the cold winters ground
Spoke a soft prayer
Looked into the empty night air
Saw an image of himself

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

The demon summoned all his courage
And broke through the cage
He found no reason
He drew back his army
And walked to the Энджел in harmony
With a fanged smile
From the demon
A wicked gleam
From the angel
They made their truths

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

No battle
No challenge
Peace
Amongst two forces
Now bonded
Inseparable
posted by Nesrino
Once upon a time, there was a 15 год old boy named Will who loved sports as if they were his whole life. From the beginning of his first день at school, Will tried out for the Футбол team and they were amazed how talented this boy was at sports at such a young age. When Will became 12 years of age, he had won the scool over 20 awards for each soccer, баскетбол and Теннис competition they entered. He has also become very fit and well-built from all his exercising and sports, and seems to think that being fit was one of the most important things a person should accomplish in life. Will has always...
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posted by mars15
I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing Ты makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because Ты can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because Ты make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because Ты can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world Ты keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me Ты were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need Ты is
because I'll always Любовь you!


This was in my head so i just thought to write it
posted by funnyshawna
Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather еще depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The Музыка plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...
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posted by nimone
Let's be honest we have all at least once in our lives experienced the misfortune that is the power cut.

The power cut it'self may not be as intolerable depending on the circumstance. If Ты live in a place where it is sunny and there is a lot to do outside then Ты don't have much to worry about.
I for one do live in this kind of climate usually. This however was not the case yesterday!

Not only was it the only день of the week where everything is closed as it was a Sunday, oh no it was also pouring down raining!

I was forced indoors with nothing to do and it was really dark inside due to the...
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posted by irena83
Life,
priceless and important,
gives Ты the roads
and leaves Ты choices
of which your luck depends on.


This is your life
and Ты live it
wrapped by sadness
или happiness.
Who cares?


This is your life,
invisible for others.


Ты pick the road
and pray that the choice
is right,
but life loves Ты not,
that's Ты who Любовь
the joy of life.


Life,
priceless and important,
gives Ты choices,
unpredictable events,
grays and hope,
and life is all yours.


But, the Вопрос is
will Ты remain sane
even though your life
is cruel to your dreams,
will Ты remain sane
even when your life
is dying in your eyes.
posted by irena83
Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna сказал(-а) that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...
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