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posted by 1-2vampire

right. ohkay. my best friend is dying. but in some way i knew it was going to happen. through my poems :S yu may b like urgh heres a fuking fake goodbye but please im not joking! HELP ME! :'(

ohkay, i wrote this poem a день before my frend started Актёрское искусство weirdly and another a день before she found out she had pancreas cancer.

poem number one:
Closest of strangers,
Time takes it's toll
Keep close to your loved one before they can fall.
No еще of the laughter
Only the clock ticks away
Ever so slowly the thread shall fray
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly their smile fades away.

poem number two:
Nearer and nearer death comes along
Through the path where it doesn't belong
Don't waste your time
Keep close and shine
Be there until their Smile is long gone.

:( im not faking, PLEASE tell me what is happening to me. :( i gtg Livane's waking up.

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1-2vampire btw when it ses "time takes its toll" i meant to put "death takes its toll", i got confused

jem_ I think you were using what's called your intuition. Your six sense. Some freaky things happen in this world, I don't know what to tell you... I only thing I can think of to offer comfort is to tell you that you are not the only one. And these "coincidances" are nothing to be afraid of. P.S. Maybe you should take intruction from your poem. Maybe your subconcious, intuition, six sense or whatever you want to call it was picking up on things somehow and you should maybe listen to it. Like "Keep close and shine. Be there until their Smile is long gone." being your friend's sunshine.being there for her and staying with her long after she's to weak to put up a facade of happyness. I hope any of this was some help. I'm very sorry about your friend. :( I wish her well.

1-2vampire thank you. I'm happy to say that she is still alive. The doctors are saying its a miracle that she's lasted this long. They don't know but they think she might pull through. They're not sure, though. (i have more poems ive written buh yuno)

1-2vampire About a day after that comment, she died. I took your advice, jem_, thank you.

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Любовь Ты Always-Chapter 1

posted by Office_001

A little peak of sun shone in his window, yes! It was Saturday; Jake Scott loved Saturdays because these were the days when his mom, Terri, and he would go to the park for a picnic. Jake was so excited for today that he slept in his clothes though the were now wrinkled but he didn’t care. Creeping down the hall way quiet enough as to not wake his mom Jake went and made himself his Избранное cereal. Jake usually had his mom help him get his cereal because he was seven and short that he couldn’t reach the cabinet, but he wanted to surprise his mom, he wanted to make his own breakfast today....

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The Poetic Works of C.M. Wishine

posted by OneFoggyNight

(Please do note that these are poems I wrote in like two минуты so yeah they might not be that great...)

***You'll never be alone***

Even through the toughest times
Someone will always be there
If Ты have Друзья
You’ll never be solo
Even if it doesn’t go right
Even if Ты think Ты might die
If Ты have friends
You’ll make it to the end
Even though it all seems to fade
Receding in the darkest night
Having friends
Makes it all go away
Times may be bad
Times may be good
But if Ты have friends
You’ll never be alone
______________________________

***No Going Back***

Believe not this lie ive told
I am not...

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Three possible introductions for Sisters (working title)

posted by housefrk

For those of Ты who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that Ты like the best, let me know in the Комментарии или in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...

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A CURSED STORY:chapter 2

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an час I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 3 New Nemeses Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” сказал(-а) Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...

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Today's a Остаться в живых Cause - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Give away to the morning

Light is here

Look away from the mourning

Is she gone, is she still...?

And let the день go ahead

Without you

Find a place, a dark space

To hide you

What’s a day, a sunny day

To you?

Fade away, let the your rainclouds

Guide you

There goes the downpour

Long gone your hello...

Find it in you

To make that last stand

It’s a silent drive

It’s her very last one.

Here come the clear skies

There goes your fare well...

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Bleed - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Find the casual sun day

Starting with the stumbling wake-up, the strained smile

Smelling the hurried breakfast, bile up her throat

Shrinks away from it, queasy, holding her stomach

Never letting it leave her, the emptiness filling up

Inside her, determined to make it last

Heavy textbooks never all that’s holding her down

Uncertainty sawing through her, the only thing filling

What she considers a burden, but how could hunger

Be so cruel?

It’s drilling into her, snarling, never dulling

Never letting up, just a little longer

A little longer...

She dry heaves, it’s a tiny stall

And the walls are closing...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 3

posted by Bella_Swan3

If Ты spend your life wishing to die, willing to end it yourself, even, and the chance was given, would Ты take it? If Ты had chosen that fate, when your breath became slow and painful, would Ты still wish that on yourself? In the shadow of death, would the reality of it dawn on you, when it was just too late?

A life of darkness was not one worth much, to Taylor.

She had been so desperate to die. Willing to do it herself, had it been possible.

She lifted the нож to her bared forearm.

The flat, cold edge of the blade pierced the pale skin of her wrist. She felt no pain from it.

The midnight...

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missing chapter 3 restrictions.

posted by kayleebabee

The flight from New york to Rome took an excrutiatingly long time to land and all the while i was getting еще and еще annoyed with Edward. "as soon as we land we will run to Volterra okay." I muttered quickly braiding my hand through Edwards and sighing contentedly.
"I know that it's just what if we are too late?" his voice broke on the word late.
"we won't be i promise." I didn't know if that was true but i was trying to soothe him i better not voice my true opinion out loud. I half dragged a depressed Edward through the terminals and growled sharply as I saw the bright sunlight outside.
"Oh...

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missing chapter 2. Race.

posted by kayleebabee

Edward and i made the flight to new york with moments to spare.
while the girl scanned our passports through the database i tried to call carlisle. Again.
"Edward your growling stop it." i muttered to low for the human woman to hear.
"right sorry do Ты think we will make it in time?" his words were cracked and strained in his effort to keep it together.
"I hope so Edward, I really do." i sighed delicately.
we got to our seats on the plane edward was muttering a stream of profanities.
"It is faster than running." I tried to placate him.
"i know that." he hissed at me.
"Hey don't take this out on me."...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 2

posted by Bella_Swan3

She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening by the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 2-part one

posted by summerfrog

Chapter 2:Getting to know him
Murphy
I spent break alone in the библиотека tiring to find a book I've wanted to read for a while-Pride and Prejudice.
It would have been nice to spend break with Savannah,catching up what all happened during the summer,but she had to spend it with her Популярное friends. I never liked them and they have never been nice to me. I was always too shy and geeky, I guess.
Stacey was the head of the group,the team captain. I remember when I met her-in third grade. She pushed me down to get to the swings first on the playground. That doesn't matter anymore, except that she...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1- part two

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue или white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much еще than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a таблица that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw еще of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...

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Proper Blood

posted by genyva

New Smells

The smell. There was nothing like it the first день at school. I looked to my brother. This was our first school год in Maine. The weather was crappy all the time but it was worth it I am not really a night person. Whose to say I have to do everything like my parents. This is the new millennium not 15 hundreds.

My family is different. Other then the fact that we have lived for hundreds of years, we are also vampire. 40 years ago, the human world found out about our world. Slowly rights were made to fit our needs, and schools were open for the young and unadvised. Humans could fall...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Sixteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Sixteen

The Далее день and after Church, Sean came over to see the girls and while seeing him playing happily with the girls and with Boyd on the right side of her chair, Jamie was thinking about breaking Mac’s promise and going ahead with the ужин together with Sean but she couldn’t because she promised her little girl and don’t want to see her сердце being broken and so will Michael if he finds out about the ужин with Sean and his wife.

Also, when Sean turned to her and gave her a slight grin on his face before heading back with the girls, Jamie also smiled at him and after...

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My Story : Human, chapter 1

posted by sweetpea92

    CHAPTER ONE
    Ugh. I groaned internally as I woke up. My head was pounding, and broken Обои were swirling around behind my eyelids. I had no idea where I was, или how I had gotten here. I refused to open my eyes and find out, или give any other sign that consciousness had found its way back to me again. Not knowing exactly where and when I was was a dangerous business for me. Very dangerous.
    You see, the last thing I remember before the blackness hit, is that I was running…
    My legs were on fire. They...

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The last минута (prologue)

posted by nEvEr-tHe-sAme

The rain fell silently as I layed there waiting. Not like I had a choice though. But it had seemed еще like a nightmare than reality. This wasn't how I imagined it... I never even got the chance to say goodbye. Let alone even explain what happened. I needed to wake up... from this nightmare, I tried, but never could... never did.

Life lesson: I learned that trusting people isn't what it actually seemed. There's еще to it than Ты would ever imagine, I mean, it's not just trusting people, but it's who to trust. How can we tell? There might be some ways we think we can tell, but those ways......

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The Last Stand- Segment of Chapter 1

posted by DoctorSpud

Chapter 1

Artemis Galchowen was going nowhere fast. At the age of 23, he was fired from his job as a theatre consumptions stand steward. At the age of 24, he was living with his two cousins, who worked for the секунда most successful auto dealer in the nation. At the age of 26, he was kicked out of their house for destroying their $200,000 Mercedes while on a drunken rampage.
At the age of 29, he was working at a secondhand Манга book Магазин and also worked at IHOP for a few еще bucks. He lived at Cricket Slope Farms development in a tiny condo with his two supportive friends, Zeke and Megan....

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Broken Dreams Chapter 28

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

It feels like a piercing physical wound; to see her leave me again.

I cannot access the part of me that handles realisation. Serena called her Ashleigh. That child in her arms. Is mine.

My forehead is resting on the edge of the hard granite countertop, and I am trying to ignore the card that is currently lying right in front of me. I already know what is printed on it by heart.

Serena Meyer

Gaurdian Ad Litem, New York.

serenashleigh@mweb.com

And then a number scrawled on in her own handwriting.

**************************************************

Her eyes haunt me when I close my own. Everything...

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Destiny(Modified) by isabellaashley

posted by Isabellaashley

PREFACE

The woods were filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and there he appeared from the treetops of a nearby дерево and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers down my spine before slowly approaching me and my сердце was pounding inside my chest. I was vulnerable as there wasn’t anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to die here, alone. Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing...