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posted by 1-2vampire

right. ohkay. my best friend is dying. but in some way i knew it was going to happen. through my poems :S yu may b like urgh heres a fuking fake goodbye but please im not joking! HELP ME! :'(

ohkay, i wrote this poem a день before my frend started Актёрское искусство weirdly and another a день before she found out she had pancreas cancer.

poem number one:
Closest of strangers,
Time takes it's toll
Keep close to your loved one before they can fall.
No еще of the laughter
Only the clock ticks away
Ever so slowly the thread shall fray
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly their smile fades away.

poem number two:
Nearer and nearer death comes along
Through the path where it doesn't belong
Don't waste your time
Keep close and shine
Be there until their Smile is long gone.

:( im not faking, PLEASE tell me what is happening to me. :( i gtg Livane's waking up.

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1-2vampire btw when it ses "time takes its toll" i meant to put "death takes its toll", i got confused

jem_ I think you were using what's called your intuition. Your six sense. Some freaky things happen in this world, I don't know what to tell you... I only thing I can think of to offer comfort is to tell you that you are not the only one. And these "coincidances" are nothing to be afraid of. P.S. Maybe you should take intruction from your poem. Maybe your subconcious, intuition, six sense or whatever you want to call it was picking up on things somehow and you should maybe listen to it. Like "Keep close and shine. Be there until their Smile is long gone." being your friend's sunshine.being there for her and staying with her long after she's to weak to put up a facade of happyness. I hope any of this was some help. I'm very sorry about your friend. :( I wish her well.

1-2vampire thank you. I'm happy to say that she is still alive. The doctors are saying its a miracle that she's lasted this long. They don't know but they think she might pull through. They're not sure, though. (i have more poems ive written buh yuno)

1-2vampire About a day after that comment, she died. I took your advice, jem_, thank you.

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Broken Dreams Chapter 30

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"You have no idea what I've gone through!" the girl tearfully screams at me.
"You're right. I don't. I have no idea what you've gone through, but that doesn't mean I don't care," I say calmly.
"Why would Ты care? Ты don't even know me."
"And Ты don't know me. How would Ты know that I don't?"

Kayla hesitates a little before answering.

"Because sometimes, not even being related to someone is enough to make them want to care. My own goddamned mother didn't even stick around long enough for me to remember what she even looks like!"
"Growing up must have been pretty awkward."
"You have no idea,"...

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Другой мир High: 7: Just the Mail Man

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Hayden p.o.v
I sat there staring out into the cold city, one of the quirks with flying is Ты can go anywhere. I sighed and lay down; the floor was cold at the Empire state. “Why would I try to Kiss her?” I asked myself. I shook my head. “You’re an idiot Hayden” I told myself. She didn’t have feelings for me after 3 days what the hell was I thinking? I asked myself again. Did I even have feeling for her? I mean I’m an Энджел I can’t do the things that most human boys can do. I sighed and got up; the sun was starting to come up, not that anyone in the Другой мир slept. I looked...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 5

posted by BellaSwan636

Tia

When it comes to relationships, I'm no idiot. I could totally see what was coming. But come on; who didn't?

The new girl and Shaun. Plus he didn't like attack her или anything when she sat at his table. What was so special about her, anyway?

Sure she was pretty, but there where way prettier girls, who'd each thrown themselves at him, (he wasn't that bad looking, actually) he'd ignored since freshmen year.

I flicked my hair over my shoulder. I could see she liked him too, she'd looked around the cafeteria yesterday and looked way disappointed when he wasn't there.

So I waited a little after...

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Gods: Chapter 6: Love.....ugh

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Later on that день when I am in my bedroom and Ethan is downstairs watching the game. I lay on my постель, кровати doing nothing but thinking. I hear my name being called I get up and walk downstairs. Ethan is at the door, someone is asking for me. I start to walk towards the door and see Adam he sees me and smiles I smile back. Ethan turns and sees me his expression is anger, he walks away. I walk up to Adam. “Hey, I didn’t see Ты at school today” he said. I wondered how he knew where I lived and why was he here. “Ah yeah I’m a bit sick” I сказал(-а) putting on a husky voice. “I see that anyway,...

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Green Eye Blind chapter 2

posted by TheHiddenCane

Selfless acts were uncommon in her universe... all human contact she'd gotten the last few months were Japanese tourists that wanted to capture the bad side of the city on their nice little holiday, by means of escaping the shopping malls, crowded museums and crammed amusement parks that were drowning in bliss and manic happiness.
Yeah, she was the bad side of the city... she was the part that was better left unseen and little people actually saw it. Some of them actually asked for her permission! Why? What would she do? Sue them? She was a stain on the face of society, something like a pimple...

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The Powerful Word, "Because"

posted by Pushkin319

THE POWER OF BECAUSE

You're standing in a long line to pay for your groceries. Which sentence do Ты think will get Ты through?

1. "May I go ahead of Ты please?" Put on a really sincere face.

2. "May I step ahead of Ты please, because I'm really late for my doctor's appointment?"

Using the word "because" will get Ты closer to 'yes' in almost any circumstance. Why? Because your request is followed by a reason, an explanation for the request. If the request is reasonable, then why not say yes?

The word refers the listener to some background, some circumstances, a framework related to the request....

Heaven and Hell

posted by ashesandwine

I'm not sure if I'll keep this going but if I do, I'll post it on my spot and here:) I still remember posting my first story here! I after sent it to my spot where it's still going, but this was the first place and I thank Ты all for receiving it:) Thanks! So I hope Ты like this one too:)

"I Любовь you..." Was the last thing I heard from him, as the blade went through his throat in one gracious move. That was it... All that I had ever fought for, all that I knew and loved, Остаться в живых in one single move! I was Остаться в живых in the darkness, trap in the sorrow and blood...
"I'm sorry..." Was the last thing...

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Poem: A was an Artist

posted by emmett

A was an Artist who wasted his talent
B rode a Bicycle and was very gallant
C was a Conductor with a musical ear
D was a Drunk, addicted to beer
E climbed Mt. Everest and achieved his goal
F was a Fireman and slid down a pole
G was a Glutton and ate what he got
H was a Hunter, a very good shot
I was an Ice skater with brand new skates
J was called Jane and couldn’t pay the rates
K was a King who ruled all the land
L was a Lady, a white перчатка, перчатки on her hand
M was a Milkman who turned молоко into cheese
N was a Nanny who made the children say please
O mined Opals and sold what he got
P was a Princess who bought...

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Last part of me... chapter 1

posted by Rob_patt_fan

hey... so this is my new story... I don't like the other one! So... I started this one! don't forget 2 Комментарий and rate!

Something was missing. Something big, like my heart! I couldn't find it. I got up from my own screams. I couldn't breathe. He wasn't there to hold me in his cold hands. He wasn't there anymore. I doubted if he would ever come back. I was thinking of everything I could do to get to him. Tears came down of my face and dropped on my подушка as I tried to stand up and go to the bathroom. Charlie was already downstairs so I hurried and made him breakfast. I didn't eat anything like...

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Любовь Ты Always-Chapter 1

posted by Office_001

A little peak of sun shone in his window, yes! It was Saturday; Jake Scott loved Saturdays because these were the days when his mom, Terri, and he would go to the park for a picnic. Jake was so excited for today that he slept in his clothes though the were now wrinkled but he didn’t care. Creeping down the hall way quiet enough as to not wake his mom Jake went and made himself his Избранное cereal. Jake usually had his mom help him get his cereal because he was seven and short that he couldn’t reach the cabinet, but he wanted to surprise his mom, he wanted to make his own breakfast today....

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The Poetic Works of C.M. Wishine

posted by OneFoggyNight

(Please do note that these are poems I wrote in like two минуты so yeah they might not be that great...)

***You'll never be alone***

Even through the toughest times
Someone will always be there
If Ты have Друзья
You’ll never be solo
Even if it doesn’t go right
Even if Ты think Ты might die
If Ты have friends
You’ll make it to the end
Even though it all seems to fade
Receding in the darkest night
Having friends
Makes it all go away
Times may be bad
Times may be good
But if Ты have friends
You’ll never be alone
______________________________

***No Going Back***

Believe not this lie ive told
I am not...

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Three possible introductions for Sisters (working title)

posted by housefrk

For those of Ты who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that Ты like the best, let me know in the Комментарии или in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...

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A CURSED STORY:chapter 2

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an час I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...

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Today's a Остаться в живых Cause - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Give away to the morning

Light is here

Look away from the mourning

Is she gone, is she still...?

And let the день go ahead

Without you

Find a place, a dark space

To hide you

What’s a day, a sunny day

To you?

Fade away, let the your rainclouds

Guide you

There goes the downpour

Long gone your hello...

Find it in you

To make that last stand

It’s a silent drive

It’s her very last one.

Here come the clear skies

There goes your fare well...

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Bleed - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Find the casual sun day

Starting with the stumbling wake-up, the strained smile

Smelling the hurried breakfast, bile up her throat

Shrinks away from it, queasy, holding her stomach

Never letting it leave her, the emptiness filling up

Inside her, determined to make it last

Heavy textbooks never all that’s holding her down

Uncertainty sawing through her, the only thing filling

What she considers a burden, but how could hunger

Be so cruel?

It’s drilling into her, snarling, never dulling

Never letting up, just a little longer

A little longer...

She dry heaves, it’s a tiny stall

And the walls are closing...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 3

posted by Bella_Swan3

If Ты spend your life wishing to die, willing to end it yourself, even, and the chance was given, would Ты take it? If Ты had chosen that fate, when your breath became slow and painful, would Ты still wish that on yourself? In the shadow of death, would the reality of it dawn on you, when it was just too late?

A life of darkness was not one worth much, to Taylor.

She had been so desperate to die. Willing to do it herself, had it been possible.

She lifted the нож to her bared forearm.

The flat, cold edge of the blade pierced the pale skin of her wrist. She felt no pain from it.

The midnight...

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missing chapter 3 restrictions.

posted by kayleebabee

The flight from New york to Rome took an excrutiatingly long time to land and all the while i was getting еще and еще annoyed with Edward. "as soon as we land we will run to Volterra okay." I muttered quickly braiding my hand through Edwards and sighing contentedly.
"I know that it's just what if we are too late?" his voice broke on the word late.
"we won't be i promise." I didn't know if that was true but i was trying to soothe him i better not voice my true opinion out loud. I half dragged a depressed Edward through the terminals and growled sharply as I saw the bright sunlight outside.
"Oh...

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missing chapter 2. Race.

posted by kayleebabee

Edward and i made the flight to new york with moments to spare.
while the girl scanned our passports through the database i tried to call carlisle. Again.
"Edward your growling stop it." i muttered to low for the human woman to hear.
"right sorry do Ты think we will make it in time?" his words were cracked and strained in his effort to keep it together.
"I hope so Edward, I really do." i sighed delicately.
we got to our seats on the plane edward was muttering a stream of profanities.
"It is faster than running." I tried to placate him.
"i know that." he hissed at me.
"Hey don't take this out on me."...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 2

posted by Bella_Swan3

She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening by the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 2-part one

posted by summerfrog

Chapter 2:Getting to know him
Murphy
I spent break alone in the библиотека tiring to find a book I've wanted to read for a while-Pride and Prejudice.
It would have been nice to spend break with Savannah,catching up what all happened during the summer,but she had to spend it with her Популярное friends. I never liked them and they have never been nice to me. I was always too shy and geeky, I guess.
Stacey was the head of the group,the team captain. I remember when I met her-in third grade. She pushed me down to get to the swings first on the playground. That doesn't matter anymore, except that she...