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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing Ты to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Ты truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Ты start posting. It can be as little as a bio, или as big as an entire Статья series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no еще than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he или she is in, can pull out another trick out of his или her hat.
4. If Ты absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his или her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Болталка and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Ты have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Далее день you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own или is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Последнее outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, или claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Ты must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, или so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Ты do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot или stabbed in the heart, then pop up минуты later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull или flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to или dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to или dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing или potential character is a Mary Sue, или if Ты suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Ты can take link. If Ты want, Ты can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Ты were curious, which Ты probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Ты want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do Ты have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
added by Robin_Love
posted by DiscordYJ
 T^T
T^T
Name: Catalina Azure Liberty

Alias: Cobalt

Race: Caucasian

Nationality: French/American

Species: Half Spirit

Civvies: Varies

Costume:Doesn't have one.

Powers: She can make things die and cause things to live.

Apperance: Long blue hair with a light shaded streak down the middle of her bangs. She has fair skin and green/blue eyes.

Personality: Quiet, Content, Calm, Scared, Sad, Alone. But she also is annoyed easily and untrusting. (ONE WORDED RESPONSES)

Abilities/Skills: She was a gymnast, so she can do flips and tricks, and she is some-what skilled with knives, blades, and swords.

Background: Catalina...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Ashley in civvies
Ashley in civvies
Events of before and during the fire.
Ashley had just finished with a mission. Jaivus was her temporary bodyguard by Kaya's orders, he had just picked her up from her phone booth in her blonde wig with blue jeans and shirt
"Let's get ice-cream." She says with a thumbs up. He didn't answer but rather turn and continued walking down the road. She rolled her eyes and ran up behind he pulling his hoodie down. Jaivus turned to her exposing his sapphire eyes.
"Please.."
"You really are annoying." He replied, in a low tune walking away from her. She walked briskly pass him grabbing his hand.
"Ashley...
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posted by Blitz359
////Sigh....there's, like, one или two еще parts after this one.////////

Richi looked up at his friends, his eyes empty and cold, as if the огонь that once fueled his emotions had finally snuffed out. They glanced over at the two bodies in the shadows by the corner, and an audible choke escaped from his mouth. "We're done here." stated Richi, his words monotone and meaningless, and he stepped away from the decapitated corpse. Before Richi could say anything else, a long beep emitted from the remains of Giovanni's metal suit. Without warning, the ground under the teens began to tremble and rumble,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Frostbite aka Kaya Ashley's older sis
Frostbite aka Kaya Ashley's older sis
"Do Ты have any idea how hard I worked to get it like this." Aquapoint yelled, as Artemis and Mafia hit the ground. Mafia rubbed her head, "She worried about her hair and not her partners."
"At least Ты know what i have to put up with." Artemis said, as she and Mafia stood on their feet and backed up to Aquapoint.
"I'm going to turn Ты into a popsicle Sparky!" She yelled. Artemis and Mafia looked down at the protégés both astounded by her words.
"Wow you're pretty ticked off about your hair." Mafia said.
"You're not turning anyone into anything kid." The blue head male сказал(-а) firmly, "Look I...
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"Ugh, that girl is still confusing. Even after five years." Nye got up, holding his untouched coffee, and walked towards the door. He went back to Jennifer's place and handed her his coffee. "Here, I didn't sip any of it."

"I wouldn't have minded if Ты did," she said, taking it and drinking a little. "So, who did Ты go to meet? David? James?"

"Charlotte." Her eyes grew wide, because she knew who he was talking about.

"Why would Ты go to her?" She whispered.

"Because she's the only who'd be able to figure it out."

"That's not true. Ты could have gone to-"

"No," he interrupted. "I couldn't."...
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posted by khanna266
Victor swung a kick to Ari's face,and missed"You call yourself an experienced fighter?"she questioned him,but he ignored her and dropped an ax kick onto her knee,"That barely hurt,maybe we should train when Ты actually learn how to fight,train with someone else your no challenge,and I only take challenges,"she сказал(-а) as she walked away",Victor just stood there."What do I do i'm supposed to help save the world.when i don't even know how to spar anymore i used to be great at sparring in my past life."he said,then he heard a familiar voice,"Pray for help."it was Rei,"We should go to church together...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 JD
JD
Name: JD ( Jared Dammon Morse)

Alias: none

Age: 18

Appearance: dark wavy brown hair and rich blue eyes, always wears snapback.

Personality: JD is a very nice and funny guy to get along with, he hasn't met one person whose had a problem with him. He is very understanding and will do anything for his Друзья and loved ones.

Powers/Skills: he has the ability to see the potential of people. basically he can see what they can fully do and have that others may not. (ex. he would be able to see someones skills, way of thinking, and talents)

Relations: owner to Shane

Civvies: jeans, a sweater, converse,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Conrad Civvies
Conrad Civvies
Name: Conrad Bolivar

Alias: none

Age: 15

Appearance: dirty blonde hair and clear light blue eyes, touqe или beanies, usually has head gear.

Powers/Skills: he has the ability to turn translucent and turn others translucent by touch (etc. holding hands), he can walk through walls and objects in his translucent state. He has skills in balance as he hovers on a hoverboard when invisible for quick get aways ( skateboard skills). Combat skills but he usually uses combat in his favour by being translucent when fighting.

Personality: Conrad is a laid back person who often doesnt really care what happens....
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 Weeheee
Weeheee
((PART 2))

Ты stared hard at the four keys in your hand. The cold silver cools your hot palms. Closing your eyes Ты think over the options Ты have: Blade, Phoebe, Becca, или Silver. Over and over Ты go through the Список until Ты finally reached your verdict. Narrowing your eyes Ты go over to Blade. Ты couldn't let her suffer any more. As soon as Ты unlock the restraints Ты can hear her gasp a thank you.

Blade stared at her, still, impaled hand. Slowly she tried to pull her member off, but the нож was jagged, pulling her hand off was doing еще damage than before. She could feel the...
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posted by Blitz359
As the fighting sounded out in the corridor ahead, Richi looked over at his companions. "Can Ты guys fight?" Jenna glanced over at Richi with a look of both annoyance and concern and replied, "Duh. I'm not sure how effective we'll be though. Something's been weakening Sean and me since we've been in this dungeon." Sean silently nodded in agreement. "Feels like Dampening Magic." Richi bit back a curse as the fighting seemed to get closer. Before he could say a word, a guard came flying out from around the corner and was embedded about 2 feet into the brick wall. Five еще guards came running...
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posted by Robin_Love
She turned away from the clear glass, walking towards the door. She had known this would happen. She had to warn him against the Назад plan. The door opened and they stood face to face. He examined her face.
“We've been found out?”
“No.”
“Just him then.”
She nodded, even though it wasn't a question. He scowled and raked a hand through his hair. She watched him calmly. He took several deep breaths then spoke again.
“We need to clear out of here.”
“And do what?”
“He has already been....revealed. We can't risk that of us.”
“He won't tell.”
“Perhaps not. But she might figure...
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 Maxine
Maxine
Maxine grabbed a root пиво from the fridge and plopped herself down on the couch, dreading the event that would take place in Rene’s apartment in a few minutes. The red head came out of her room in leggings, a sweatshirt, and boot slippers, then picked up the bowl of попкорн in the кухня and set it down on the таблица in front of the couch. She went to the DVD player and put in their first movie: Finding Nemo. Maxine groaned when she saw the movie choice, making Rene giggle as she went to her spot on the couch. Just when the movie was about to start, Amara came out of her room in footie pajama’s...
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posted by Robin_Love
 For those who Любовь red-heads
For those who love red-heads
Name: Jackson Rider
Alias: J-Rider
Occupation: Shadow hunter
Powers: shadow manipulation, agility, fire, combat expert
History: Jackson grew up with Dylan in the orphanage. He was adopted before it was burned down, but his foster parents were abusive. He ran away and his fully developed powers acted upon his emotions. He accidentally started a огонь in a nearby town before he was found by his long time friend. Dylan introduced him into the Shadow Corps, where he was mentored and trained. He has become an expert in destroying shadow realms, only beaten by Dylan himself. Jackson and Dylan have an...
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Everyone still stood in Rene’s apartment, besides Zack, when Tess walked in.

    “Dammit, I though no one would be here.” Quickly she went over to Rene and shook her. “Rene! Wake up! You’re Rene, not Cosette!!” Blade pulled Tess off of Rene and threw her on the floor. Rene woke up quietly without anyone noticing.

    “Tess, we can’t do that to her!” Blade whisper shouted.

    “And why is that?”

    “Because she’ll get utterly confused, sad, and she’ll have no idea what the hell anything is!”...
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DragonAnimations, the owner of the Red Revenge character and series, announced today that the series would be reaching it's finale in the series' sixth book: The Legend Falls.
Red Revenge, who has only been around for a single year, has published a total seven and a half Книги (after the full release of What Matters?), completed a four-episode stand-alone season of Becca vs Revenge* (the series was voted to Отменить by readers) and several one-shots (some involving characters belonging to different owners).

In July of 2012, Dragon Animations issued a re-boot of the Red Revenge series due to the...
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posted by Blitz359
The escape plan didn't work out as planned.

As the gang began to make their exit, two gunshots rang out, and someone cried out in pain. "Scotch!" Valeriya exclaimed. She crumpled, and behind her, the thug that Aryess had left alive was standing with a pistol raised and a smirk on his face. "One down..." he muttered to himself. In an instant, where his head used to be was but a spray of blood. Throwing his sword on the ground, Richi knelt beside Scotch as she lay bleeding. The others ran over too, concerned for their injured teammate. "Two gunshot wounds," Richi noted, "one to the stomach, the...
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posted by White_Lightning
 Swordsss!
Swordsss!
Name: Christopher Adams
Alias:Avenue
Powers/skills: -No powers.....but, he is swordsman and a expert marksman.
-Field tactics
-Hand to hand combat
-Can make bombs and explosives
Past: Chris was дана up for adoption when he was born, his parents failed to tell their later on kids that had on older sibling. Upon returning later on around the age of 21, he realized both his parents had passed. But had two remaining siblings, Brendan and Crystal.
Others: -Musically inclined!
-A lot еще social than Fang. He's a social butterfly!
-Picks on Fang еще than Crystal.
 Christopherrr~
Christopherrr~
posted by Blitz359
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Several hours later, the trio stepped out of the airport and into South America, specifically, Rio. Without hesitation, Richi set off for the nearest hotel to set up camp, but as he took his first couple steps, one of the girls spoke.
"R-Richi?" The voice сказал(-а) shyly. It was the violet-haired girl's voice. "W-why are we in Rio?" He stopped and turned to look at her, his eyes softening for the girl's sake.
"I'm going to go find a couple Друзья hiding out here. Ты guys are going to the hotel while I'm out. My problems aren't your business, so Ты have no reason to follow me." At this,...
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"Damn, it's dark." Nightingale noted to her comm as she walked into the sub-basement.

Lights flicked on one by one with a deep, echoing sound. Standing in the middle of the clean, white, utterly empty basement was Red Revenge. Nightingale's dual pistols were aimed at the Black Hero in the blink of an eye.

"You're on my property." Revenge stated in a 'Im the boss' tone. "Stand down."

Nightingale hesitated a секунда еще before dropping the pistols into the low riding holsters on her hips. She'd changed her costume. Black body-armor with yellow highlights and markings. Her same weapons were in place...
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