Hi everyone I just got this from my editor...
еще will be added to this. But we will have to wait till he's done with the rest...

Anyways without further ado here's the editors edition of chapter 1!

SNOW
AN ALPHA AND OMEGA STORY

By Snow Wolf

CHAPTER I
LONE WOLF


I


It was a beautiful день in Jasper National Park. The sun was out and the radiance of the green трава shone in the bright morning light. A gentle cool breeze flowed through my fur, making my пальто sway from side to side. The storms had been brutal the past two days but no matter the weather, nothing was going to ruin this perfect day.

I was playing with my new friends, Jessie and Ryan. Jessie had grey мех with a white underbelly, her eyes a striking ice blue. Ryan's мех was golden, and he shared the same white underbelly as his sister, but he had strange turquoise eyes, a rare thing for a wolf.

We were playing Pin the Wolf. We chased around, trying to pin each other to the ground. As we laughed and fell about, we heard a voice coming from my newfound friend's den,

"Jessie! Ryan! It's time for your Alpha duties!" shouted their dad, Humphrey.

"Coming dad!" they barked in unison.

I looked toward them as they started to run off.

"I'll see Ты guys later for the hunt, I better go tell mom and dad what I'm doing if we're going to disappear for a few hours!"

Ryan turned his head back and with a sly grin, said;

"Sure Snow, I'll meet Ты at the hunting grounds before the sun starts to set. Don't forget!"

I smiled and nodded my sarcastic agreement as Ryan sprinted to catch up with his sister.

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I got back Главная and found mom and dad sitting at the mouth of the den, enjoying the sun. Rebecca greeted me warmly as I trotted up to them. Vincent stayed quiet but he was always like that.

"Hello son. Did Ты have fun with Jessie and Ryan?" she asked as she pulled me in to a comforting hug. "You look like Ты did!" she сказал(-а) with a caring smile forming on her muzzle.

"Of course, mom. Actually, I was going to tell Ты something -"

"Let's go into the логово, ден and talk about it Snow. I'm pretty sure whatever it is, the whole territory doesn't need to hear it."

Rebecca got up and went inside, and Vincent followed dutifully after her. Once inside, dad turned to me.

"We'll son, what is it? Did Ты get a girlfriend at last?!" he asked as he chuckled at his joke.

"DAD!" I exclaimed, giving a harsh перфоратор, удар, пунш to his leg. "You know I'm not old enough for that!"

He yelped playfully, pretending I'd hurt him badly.

"Ha ha, okay son, I'm sorry. What's the big news Ты have for us?"

"Nothing, I'm just going hunting with Jessie and Ryan so I won't be back for a few hours, that's all."

"That's it? I mean, that's fine son, at least you're helping feed the pack. That's all that matters. Just be careful, we don't want Ты getting hurt. Remember you're only young and not as strong as the other wolves."

I noticed my dad had a worried look in his eyes. He turned to look at mom.

"I don't think going inside for that was necessary Rebecca..."

"Vincent honey, I was only concerned for Snow. Now if Ты don't mind shutting your hole before I rip out your -"

"Honey, that's enough. I don't think Snow wants to hear this." he said, putting his paw over my mother's muzzle.

She pushed his paw to the ground, tapping it in annoyance as she pulled away from him, clearly miffed.

"Don't worry dad! I'll be careful. One день I'll be the greatest Alpha ever!" I beamed, as I moved closer to give them both a hug.

I turned and started toward the entrance to the den, but was stopped in my tracks by the appearance of three dark furred Волки with demonic red eyes.

"Wh-wh-who are you? What do Ты want?" I stammered, Холодное сердце to the spot.

Dad stepped in front of me.

"Get away from my son." he growled flatly under his breath.

Mom was in front of me too now, desperation and anger in her voice.

"You heard him! Get Остаться в живых now before I rip out your throats and tear your carcasses apart!"

The biggest of the three intruders laughed, and waived his paw at the other two, motioning them to attack. They responded instantly, pouncing at my parents giving them no time to react. They spun in the air and kicked their hind legs out, landing crunching blows with enough force to trigger an earthquake at each intended target. My parents. My flesh and blood.

Terrified, I hid in the corner and squeezed my eyes tight, wincing at the sound of crunching bone.

~

Although an age seemed to pass, and I desperately wanted to keep me eyes closed, I had to look, had to see what had become of my parents. I opened one tear stained eye, only to be horrified by the state my mother and father were in. They had been beaten badly, matted blood-stained мех hanging from their bruised and battered bodies. There was still some fight left in them however.

Seemingly tired of wasting his time, the pack leader of this group of evil hounds came at me all at once and struck me with his paw, claws fully extended, ripping into my chest as I screamed in pain.

Seeing their son injured so horribly, Vincent and Rebecca both screamed and struggled to get to their feet but were knocked down yet again by the two Животные that had attacked them so mercilessly.

"SNOW!"

"NO!"

"LEAVE HIM ALONE Y-Y-YOU MONSTERS!"

"PLEASE DON'T HURT OUR SON! HE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOU... PLEASE!"

They pleaded and they pleaded, but the Волки just walked away as one of them grabbed me by the scruff of the neck.

"MOM! DAD! HELP ME!" I screamed.

The волк who was carrying me by the scruff of my neck spoke in a muffled tone.

"Say goodbye to your precious parents kid because it's the last time you're gonna see them again."

"GO TO HE-"

I tried to finish my sentence but it was cut short when the волк hit me with a very hard object which seemed like the moon had just crash landed on my head. Everything started to fade into black as my сердце rate almost slowed to a stop, and I fell headlong into the abyss of unconscious sleep.

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{To be continued...}