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posted by BookWriter
The blood was shed
It will never be the same
Feel the intruding lead
That hangs my head in pain

The drainage not on my hands
But flows down my back
It was only in the sands
Where Ты planned your attack

Executed without flaws
With no issue at hand
Ты dug deep with your claws
Into a faceless land

Your face full of lies
When Ты greet me at that place
I see through your disguise
And reject your embrace

The wound Ты try to heal
Is now a gaping maw
Your words can never conceal
The true Цвета I saw.
added by southern-belle
posted by Edward901
nobody understands love,
nobody really believes.
Ты can't put a price on the way people make Ты feel,
but Ты can always say:
i Любовь you
but what does it really mean?
those three small words?
to many people it's just
i care about you
isn't that easier to say
than make someone believe
you'll always be there for them
that they are the sun, the moon, the stars
that they will be the person that Ты want to be the last person to see before Ты die?
is it so hard to NOT make someone believe
that Ты will always be there for them
that Ты will be the one that they need
for life
for eternity
forever?
Далее time Ты say
i Любовь you
mean it
because if Ты don't
your just hurting yourself
and the person that Ты say it to
posted by Edward901
this will be the last chapter i post... the rest you'll have to read in the published book when it's done being written and comes out



Music was playing when I could feel again. Abigail was lying on my постель, кровати with me, playing with my hair.
    “Bobby will be Главная in two hours. I called him when Ты stopped responding to me.” I recognized the song, it was Bobby's favorite. He had told me that I was who it reminded him of.
    I looked away from Abby, ashamed. “I can't believe how selfish I am. He was finally where he wanted to be and I dragged him away...
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posted by Ангелы
the time we have is so very precious...
Ты can blink или turn and it is like a whole lifetime has passed
a fiend whom has helped me in so many ways has, in a blink of an eye it seems
has gotten older and i have trouble seeing that time has passed so quick
even now the newer Друзья and family it seems change in a blink
Ты are left wondering where was i when did all of this change........
in the день to день routines of life sometimes Ты can forget how precious life, friends, family, even your pets, and just people Ты meet can just be so different; the Далее time Ты really take the time to...
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posted by elanor260
I wrote this a few months ago. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Black Roses

At the end of the day, the sun slowly set, painting the sky in a brilliant радуга of colors. She looked across the golden field, staring at the horizon. Her expression was that of one who is looking for something, but cannot figure out quite what. A slight breeze stirred the tall grass, creating the semblance of waves. Her hair moved slightly as she looked down at her lap, and the three black Розы that lay upon it.

The Розы meant something, of that she was certain, but she did not remember, not yet. It had been...
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This is a poem I wrote today, 7 May 2008. Feedback/analysis is welcome.

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My eyes have been thirsting for you
These long lonely years
My ears have strained to hear your voice
The boy's enthusiasm for his lover
Has not sagged but rather swelled
With deprivation

Memory paints you
Perfect in wit, charm
Desire

Today I saw Ты briefly, from afar
I had to avert my eyes
Lest I be consumed
My ears heard your distant laughter
Through all the other noise
In that crowded place

I know that memory lies
But still I shivered
With longing and remorse

Today I also heard of the other man
Now in your life
Somewhere...
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So one may или may not recall that a few months ago, I Опубликовано link that I wrote in my high school years and my freshman год of college. The purpose of this was to compare it to the work I was required to do in my Поэзия class (a pre-req for the creative Письмо track of the English major). Since I recently discovered that I was accepted to the track (yay for me!), I decided it was time to post the results of that Поэзия class to compare to my other poems.

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sapling

fingers curl like dead leaves and grip a
fleshy branch which tickles

lines of stories etched in arching
looping whorls rub against...
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posted by Edward901
Rulers of Darkness

Hunting. The best word in a vampire's vocabulary.
    “Ready?” Abby asked me expectantly.
    “Ready.”
    Our eyes dilated and all of our senses were down. I crouched low,listening, the world no longer had any secrets. Wind rustled leaves, a storm was coming in a couple of days. A deer grazed peacefully, not what I wanted. Abby attacked a grizzly. Nope. Finally, I heard it. A pack of gray wolves.
    Wolves were my Избранное drink. They always hunted in a pack, a canine family. Something that...
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posted by Edward901
this is part of my book that i wrote... tell me how it is...

Rulers of Darkness

I sat there, watching, waiting, listening for the sound of Abigail calling me. She didn't, she just stood outside my door letting me cool off.
I smiled, I'd wait for her to decide to talk to me, patience was one of my best abilities. Of course, I had to learn patience while others were секунда nature, but time had perfected it.
Abby waited, but her toes tapped impatiently on the other side of the door. I heard her sigh and knew I had won.
An involuntary victory smile formed on my face as the door knob turned....
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posted by Cinders
Preface: I wrote this in tenth grade, when I was sixteen. So it was about four years ago... Comparing it to link which was written four weeks ago, it's interesting to see the changes in those four years. I would Любовь to discuss that. I've updated it for Fanpop, editing and tweaking it from the original which can be found link.



It was probably nothing different to little Ellen, munching ever so innocently on a good-tasting set of keys in the corner, surrounded by blocks and the spilt contents of her poor mother’s purse. Mrs. Shaw had neglected to put the кошелек out of her dear child’s...
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posted by appleco
The Mona Lisa

The Mona Lisa is one of the worlds most famous art pieces but at one point it was stolen by a man who thought that Italian paintings should be shown in Italy and not France so… when he was all alone in the room where the Mona Lisa was so he took the painting and stuffed it under his smock. It took a week for the museum to find out that the painting had gone missing. I think that ever since this painting went missing museums have еще security then they did then to protect еще thefts.
I think that this connects to chasing Vermeer because “the lady writing” it on the go and Calder and Petra think that it is not безопасно, сейф just like how the Mona Lisa wasn’t безопасно, сейф in the museum in France. I think that defiantly Calder and Petra would be helpful.
added by HuddyBrave
Source: me
posted by HaleyDewit
Bella
My name is Bella and there’s something I need to tell
I’m dating this cute vampire, he’s just hot as hell
He’s fascinated by my none existing mind
And I fall apart whenever I stare in those liquid topaz eyes

Edward
My name is Edward and there’s something I need to say
Bella’s gonna freak when she finds out I’m gay
But I can clearly understand what she sees in me
Because have Ты ever met someone this perfectly

Bella
I used to live in Phoenix, but now moved to this rainy place
I keep whining about it and I always have the same expression on my face
I’m just a little girl who’s helpless...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Close your eyes and try to sleep
Don’t let these words disturb your dreams
Don’t think about the pain Ты have caused
For there is nothing Ты ever did wrong

Make a wish and pray it will come true
Because what Ты did will come back to you
Let these words sink into your brain
For this is for everything Ты ever did wrong

Are Ты happy
To make people run away from you
Are Ты satisfied
When Ты make a girl feel blue
Are Ты proud of yourself
When Ты make a girl crawl back in her shell
Now, all Ты bitches, Ты gotta tell me
Are Ты happy


Open your eyes and look inside yourself
How would Ты feel if someone...
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posted by HaleyDewit
I'm funny,I'm cheerful,I can make Ты smile
I would do anything for you,I'd walk a thousand miles
But Ты killed the sparkle in my eyes
When Ты started to tell all your lies
So grab your stuff and leave my life
I won't be the one to sacrifice

Turn around and take a very good look
'Cause you'll never see me again
You can give it your very best shot
But I'll never let Ты in
So walk away and leave my life
I won't be the one to sacrifice


I'm broken,I'm sad,I wanna make Ты cry
I'm a mess,I confess,I want Ты to tell me why
I wanna push Ты through hell,like Ты did with me
I wanna cause Ты pain,so bad you...
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posted by HaleyDewit
They say we should stick together
Create a chain and never let go
But I’m not gonna act like a hypocrite
‘Cause I’m fed up with your over-dramatic show
Your criticism doesn’t make any sense
It’s nothing but a bunch of crap
And I doubt I’m on my own in this one
I think a lot of people will Подтвердить that

You wanna start a fight?
Let’s not hesitate
But I’m not the one to underestimate
You wanna start a war?
Let’s have it started
But I won’t be the one left broken hearted

You must be so frustrated
You must be filled with hatred
Living with only a brain cell или two
Knowing you’ll never fit...
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This a video i found on Youtube and I thought it was a good video for the spot Video made by:"xsunnychristinax" on Youtube
video
Музыка
Любовь
death
classical
sad
suicide
cry
tears
posted by BuffyFaithFan1
CHAPTER ONE: PEACE OFFERING

CAN Ты TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF?" My mom asked me at the front door.
"Mom, I'll be fine!" I told her.
"Are Ты sure? I can stay Главная with Ты and Jared if Ты want." She asked again, and this time it sounded like she was hoping I'd say "no, don't go...stay here with me and tuck me into постель, кровати and tell me stories to go to sleep to."
"Mom, go! Have a great time! We will be fine!" I сказал(-а) and Jared shook his head in approval.
"Alright!" She сказал(-а) and she kissed my forhead once more, did the same to Jared, and then out the door to her taxi that awaited her she went. Jared...
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posted by SMackedLove
 My black rose
My black rose
I AM!

I am not nice but I feel.
I wonder but I don't know
what about.
I hear people talking but I never know what they say.
I see many thinks but never know what I'm looking at.
I want people to look to the past but not dwell on it.
I pretend to be something I'm not.
I fell things i cant see.
I touch and the smoothest things feel rough.
I worry that the день will never end.
I cry but tears never come.
I understand that not ever ones the same.
I say something i don't mean.
I dream but only see blackness.
I hope that someday someone we'll see through my shield I put up and see me.
I am not nice but i feel.
I am who I am!