marlanido great job like i said b4 yor a good writter:)

llrulez thanks but i didnt write the whole thing. its me and two other people. i just re-posted it here!!

Percy99Jackson awesome and nice bit of a change to my pov.

llrulez your welcome.i made it more interesting for ppl to read!!!

Percy99Jackson :P

Percy99Jackson ;)

llrulez Jack I just watched this kid fight a 60ft all on his own and I just did nothing but stare. "Did-did you see that?" I whispered to Skye still staring at him. "Mmmhmmm." was all she said. I didn't have a clue what to say so, I ran to the big house to tell Chiron what had just happened. By the time I got here all I could say was, "Drakon-kid-tooth-eye-water-lake!!&q­uot­; taking a deep breath before each word. "Well come on then to the lake!" shouted Chiron, "Aww come on I just- I just," I collapsed under Chiron's gaze, "Ok, ok fine I'll go. By the time we got there 5 more campers had appeared and all looked deathly pale as the saw the darken shell. I didn't know Paul well, he was a new camper and started this year. He was a powerful demigod being the son of poseidon but how he knew that a Drakon's week spot is its eyes I don't know. Chiron walked up to Paul and started to speak to him I couldn'thear what was being said but I guess it was about the attack. "Jack," Chiron said, "Take Paul to the infirmary the rest of you go to your cabins. I took Paul to the Infirmary without a word spoken and told some of my siblings what to give him. I then decided to my cabin to have some rest when out of nowhere the Minotaur cam bursting out of the woods grabed me and legged it out of camp! "Help! Help!" but no one came, brilliant I thought absolutely brilliant!

llrulez skye: as soon as jack left there was a loud scream of agony.this time it was from a monster.i rushed out of the cabin and ran towards the direction of the sound.i was just in time to see a boy fall 60ft into the lake.jack was already there.the boy stood up and started walking towards us.then suddenly jack ran off somewhere.i wondered where?i was still staring at the guy with my jaw wide open.he walked to me and snapped his fingers in front of my face. "wha-what just happened?you were there and falling!how did you do that?" "eh!it was a piece of cake!" "piece of cake?where?"my eyes widened.i realized that i was starving.i hadn't eaten since jack was sent to the infirmary.he grinned."paul" "skye.your new right?"we shook hands and then chiron suddenly appeared with jack.he started talking to paul.then he told jack to to take paul to the infirmary.i was heading back to my cabin when i heard someone yell'HELP'. "oh my gods!whats with all the screaming lately??!!"i groaned and ran out of my cabin for the 2nd time that day.i followed the sound again and reached the camp half-blood gates.i saw jack who hanging upside down.then i saw the huge hand and the Minotaur."skye!HELP!"jack screamed as he disintegrated along with the minotaur."jack!"i yelled and fell down on my knees."why does this have to happen to me!!"i muttered in dismay.

llrulez Jack When I was kindnapped by the Minotaur I was expecting to be taken to the underworld. What I wasn't expecting was to be playing poker in the back of a van with monsters. Have you ever seen the painting of dogs playing poker, it was exactly like this. They even gave me a hat. It turned out that these monsters had been kidnapped to. Gaia was trying a stupid "I will take over the world" thing that never works. Anyway back to the poker game, I was up against two Cyclopes, three telkhines ( I think that's how you spell it) and lastly the Minotaur himself. Gods it was cramped. The other monsters decided against eating me halfway through the trip as they decided we were all in the same boat. When we arrived we got out and found ourselves in the middle of a forest. Damn those trees were big. It was then I decided to try something. "Hey guys I just need to go to the bathroom, I won't be long." "How do we know that you will come back?" the youngest Cyclopes asked, "Um...because you guys are my new best friends!" "Yay!" the Cyclopes said. I sneaked into the woods then making sure that they couldn't here or see me, I legged it. I took out my arrow key chain and rubbed my finger along the shaft. It immediately turned into my Drakon bow, but this time a quiver appeared on my back. So I took out an arrow only to see it have no head. "Tell it what type you want." said a voice in my head. So I said "celestial bronze," it turned into celestial bronze. "Imperial Gold," gold and it turned into an imperial gold arrow head. Hm, let's try "Celestial bronze with rope tied at the end." it worked. I then put it into my bow and fired it way up into the trees where it struck a branch. I pulled it and it seem to hold my weight, I turned my bow back into a key chain and started to climb. By the time I got to the top it was sunset, so I pulled up the rope found what looked like a massive slingshot and I weaves the rope between the two making an uncomfortable but unseen bed. It was best I slept here one I wasn't on the ground which means Gaia and two I was out of the way of monsters. I lied down and immediately was out.

exmo33 Hi! I didn't know u were doing this! Just to let you peoples know I write jack!

llrulez i thought you knew!!!

Percy99Jackson guys i have wrote a bit in the build a story llrulez have a look

llrulez ooh!i found it!moe ppl wrote after that.read it!!

llrulez skye i was on my knees cursing myself for asking for adventure,when suddenly a hand came upon my shoulder. "frowning is not going to make the situation any better you know!!"i looked up to see paul smiling at me.i stood up and brushed some leaves off my jeans."i dont no what to do?jack could be lost or hurt or something!!"i wailed. "its alright.we'll find him!i talked to chiron and he asked us to see the oracle." "ok come on! there's no time to spare!"i said running to the big house.i was eager to hear my first prophecy. i creaked the door of the big house open.it was big as usual.to my surprise no one was there."that's strange!chiron and Mr.D were here just a second ago!"paul seemed to read my thoughts. "come on!to the attic!"i said desperately.we hurried in to the attic but no one was there either."heyyy!wheres the oracle?"paul said.i slapped my forehead and then started rubbing it cause i hit it too hard."what?"paul asked."the oracles not a dead mummy anymore!! remember?its rachel!"i said."huh?.....oh yeah!!now i remember!!lets go find Rachel!"we rushed out of the attic just as fast as we came in.on our way out i dashed into some one."watch where your going!!"the person said and walked past us into the big house.then i realized that it was none other than rachel! "hey hey hey!hold your horses rachel!"i said grabbing her wrist. "what do you want skye?"she sighed.i let go of her wrist. "we want a quest!"paul blurted. "you dont just ask for quests!you get one when you need one!"she said. "bu-but jack missing!"i moaned. "yeah and so is percy!"she said.the whole camp has been sad since Percy Jackson,son of Poseidon mysteriously disappeared.i didn't know him much as i was new but he sounded like a nice guy.every one worshiped him.it not like he saved Olympus or anything,i thought to myself. "rachel.help us!"paul pleaded "ok fine fine"she cleared her throat,looked up and closed her eyes.she stood like that for a few minutes. "isn't this the part where she tells us the prophecy?"i whispered to paul."i think so."he shrugged."shhh!"rachel said and cleared her throat again.we waited there feeling very weird as rachel stared at the light bulbs with her eyes closed."eh!i got nothing!"she said after a long minute of pure awkwardness. "what do you mean?"me and paul yelled together. "well..nothing is coming to me"she said. "what do you mean nothings coming to you!!??"we said together again. "im sorry!i cant help it!"she defended her self."now if you'd excuse me ive got to get going!"she said walking towards the attic. "wha-so you just gonna leave us here!"i said "sorry!"she said trying to be as polite as ever. "great now what do we do?"paul said equally disappointed. suddenly rachel spun around,green smoke pouring out of her mouth,circling her.then she spoke in a raspy voice, camp half-blood is under threats, "under threats??"i asked paul "shhh!"he pointed at rachel.talking to paul i didn't hear the next line. earth wont rest until two she gets. lightning,water,wisdom and thief must travel to the land with no snow,no hail.just grief the son of the sun must be retrieved lest earths rage be forever unleashed. at the last words rachel collapsed but paul managed to catch her.he lifted her and put her on a couch,in side the big house. i followed him in. "now what do we do?"i asked him. "we gotta tell chiron"he said in a serious tone. "ok.you watch over rachel and ill get chiron.oh and try to re-collect the prophecy because i dont remember everything!" "ok" he said."you better hurry up."

llrulez Jessi I was sitting in the forest by myself. Okay, what’s a 13-year-old doing in the forest alone? Especially in a forest full of monsters? Thinking. I was thinking. It’s something I always do; my mom being Athena. Besides, the monsters wouldn’t come after me. I knew how to take care of myself. I used to not be able to; though. Oh gods, I thought. Now is not the time to think about… about; Arianna. I tried not to let out a sob. It didn’t really work; though. At least I was alone. But back to Arianna. See; she was my sister and best friend. We did everything together; and she took care of me. I loved her so much. Her friend, who happened to be a satyr, Jake told her about Camp Half-Blood. She agreed to come; only if I could come too. Gods; we both loved each other. She was the best sister ever. Why’d she have to d- A noise in the bushes snapped my attention away from my thoughts. Quickly, I reached my hand up to my hair and pulled down my bobby pin. I clicked the little owl on it and it transformed into a small but lethal weapon. My dagger. The sound in the bushes got louder. Slowly I stood up and got in the position to attack; when out popped Elizabeth. I sighed in relief. “Oh gods, Liz (can I call you that). You scared me.” She smiled. “Glad to see you too. Thought I’d find you here. I think we may have been given a quest.”

llrulez Jack I woke up expecting to find myself in the tree top but instead was chained up to a wall in some underground dungeon. "Aww, come on!" I shouted. I really shouldn't have said that. "Ah, son of Apollo you are awake." said some type of dirt monster. He unlocked me from the chains (which really hurt) and lead me through a corridor and into a room. There waiting for me was Gaia. "Um hi." I said. "Hello jack. I have come to make you an offer." she said "Really? What on?" I asked though I new what she was going to say. "I want you to join Jack. You are a powerful demigod, more so than you think." "Wow Gaia I'm flattered, but sorry no can do." "This is your last chance Jack, don't mess it up." "Sorry, still no." she seemed to get angry at these words. "Fine, then you can't live but before I kill you I will put you through pain." "When you said pain, did you mean shopping pain, or physical pain?" I couldn't help but ask. She smiled at this. I heard the monster behind me get something out and before I new what was happening my arms were held up above me by metal chains. Uh-oh. I heard the monster laugh. Suddenly I felt a searing pain in my back. I didn't cry out. I didnt want to give them the satisfaction. I was being whipped, and it hurt like hades! Gaia just nodded head and it happened again and again and before I new it I passed out to get away from the pain.

llrulez skye we were all sitting around the table ,in the big house,to discuss the prophecy.i was sitting opposite chiron(who was in his wheel chair).i was representing the hermes cabin.on my right was paul(poseidon cabin)on my left was Elizabeth,the only daughter of zeus.she was a really good friend of mine.rachel was sitting next to paul.she was only here because she was eager to know if the prophecy involved percy.all around the table,the different cabin leaders were sitting and most of them were talking to each other. chiron cleared his throat. no one heard him. he cleared his throat again.this time paul noticed and banged his hand on the table.everyone was quiet.paul nodded to chiron. "what did the prophecy say?"chiron asked.i felt everyone's eyes on me.i looked at paul.i gulped and said,"camp half-blood is under threats"everyone gasped. "earth wont rest until two she gets"paul continued. "lightning,water,wisdom and thief must travel to the land with no snow,no hail.just grief" "the son of the sun must be retrieved lest earths rage be forever unleashed."paul concluded. "lightning,water,wisdom,thief. Zeus, poseidon, Athena, Hermes."chiron said."who will go?" "im going !"i said."my friend.my quest."i reasoned.chiron nodded. "im going too"paul said."im the son of poseidon" "two more to go"chiron said. "ill go"Elizabeth volunteered.everyone looked at her."i want to go and besides there is no other child of lightning"she said. "one more"chiron said. "i want Jessica to come" Elizabeth said everyone looked at Jessica. "what?"she looked at Elizabeth.they stared at each other for a while.its like they had telepathy.they were some how communicating with each other without talking or moving.well,after all they were best friends!i thought.that reminded me of me and jack. "im coming too!"jessica interrupted my thoughts. "okay"chiron said."lets continue" "the son of the sun."paul said."that must be jack ,son of Apollo" i nodded,"but what about earth wont rest until two she gets?"i asked. "percy!"rachel jumped out of her seat and said loud enough for the entire camp to hear."this makes perfect sense!"she exclaimed."earth wont rest until two she gets! Gaea which is earth wants two.the 2 are percy and jack!"she grinned happily."chiron?"she looked at him to see if she was right or not. he nodded slowly.the Aphrodite leader gasped. "for now lets get on with saving jack"he said "bu-but percy?"rachel said "percy is a powerful and experienced demigod.i think he can handle him self a little longer.im sorry rachel. annabeth is already on his case."chiron said softly rachel sat down.her face was pale with no color except for her red hair.i pitied her.i would feel the same way if jack was made second.but chiron was right.although jack is a really strong fighter he was still new to the demigod world. "so jack is kidnapped by gaea?"i asked chiron. he looked at me,"yes.and she will go to all extents to get what she wants"he said "what does she want?"i asked "that is still a mystery"chiron said.well,ill have to figure that out myself,i thought. "she most likely would want to take over the world"rachel said sadly."they all do" "any way"i said changing the topic "where do we go?" "land with no snow,no hail"paul said. "i know the prophecy but what does it mean?"i snapped at him. "it could be a desert?"Elizabeth said. "no!" it was jessica who spoke. "not the desert.i think its the grand canyons in the USA."she said "but it snows in the canyon."paul said. "haven't you heard the news?something was wrong with the weather and it stopped snowing there since last year."rachel said.her wise eyes twinkling in the light.we all couldn't agree on one thing. "the grand canyon"chiron said. he was deep in thought and didn't want to be disturbed."tomorrow you will leave at dawn."he said. "ok"i stood up."tomorrow we meet here ,half an hour before dawn to discuss battle strategy and everything else." everyone got up and left.i started for the door when. "skye?"chiron called "yes chiron?"i turned around "take care of yourself and everyone.this is no ordinary quest.it is very dangerous."he said.i studied his eyes.chiron was very wise.he is like a father to most of the people in camp including me.i took his advice. "i will chiron.i will"and with that i walked out of the big house.i if only i had known that it would be the last time id ever walk out of there again.

llrulez Jessi Gods. I am so mad at Elizabeth right now. I didn't really want to go on that quest. Why would anybody want me there? I think the better choice would have been Annabeth; but she's looking for Percy. I sighed and started to pack my things. I didn't have much to pack; but I just wanted to get it done before tommorow. I packed ambrosia and nectar, rope (you never know when you'll need anything. Annabeth's been on enough quest's to teach me that), an extra dagger (though I patted my bobby pin just to make sure I had it), and 2 extra camp t-shirts. Seeing that I was done; I headed out to the training arena. I saw that I wasn't alone. "Hey Skye," I said. She turned around, "Oh hey. Nervous about our quest tommorow?" I shrugged even though I really was. I'm glad Elizabeth wasn't here. We understand each other better than we do ourselves.

percy4forever Wow. Who is that Jessi person?! She seems pretty amazing. Whoever came up with her must be a genius ;)! Haha! Just kidding ;).

llrulez i think you should know her pretty well... :]

beezybee dude, sweet story. I think it is awesome. like the picture too. You need to have a very creative mind to come up with a story like that. YOU TOTALLY ROCK

sparkles3 i wanna add a person!! Juliette Angel daughter of Hecate shape shifting sword that can be any weapon long strait black hair, creepy all black eyes, middle height, strait teeth, and a long scar down her arm. likes to freak people out by magically unattaching her head, fight, kill evil stuff, be crazy if you ask her about the scar on her arm, she will use her powers to humiliate you

llrulez @beezybee and sparkles3 - i didnt write the story my self!and there is much more written after this... here is the link .check it out!! http://www.fanpop.com/spots/percy-jackson-and-the-olympians-books/articles/130591/title/read-amazing-story

charolet1 Wow. THAT was awsome.

llrulez that?.....