Is this poem and good? it's called Dark Despair.

In the dark I die
Scared and alone
Keeping me in the dark
No one ever sees
That who they see
Is not the real me
So scared and alone
I die till I see
Ты come as the son of night
So I wait in my dark despair.
Can anyone save me
Does any body know
that I am dieing
and I am alone?
Save me
from what I have become
alone and broken
the life of me is draining
I have nothing
to live for
but I know that
I am holding on for Ты
I am holding on for that
I am dieing
please come save me
from my dark despair