What do think of my poem "Friends". I would like Feedback and Advice. Enjoy!

F-Friends shouldnt lie
R-R there when Ты need them...mostly
I-Important to Ты & me
E-Everlasting fun is what Ты have with them
N-No way to know if they are real или fake
D-Doing whatever being with them, to me they're special gems
S-Sparkling bright i know with them i will be alright.
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RiderOfTempest said:
its nice :) and true....

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THANKS!
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puja43 said:
it's really nice!! I like it.
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