Покемон idea for pokemon comic: the real reason Mewtwo hates Mew

flippy_fan210 posted on Feb 17, 2013 at 07:58PM
Mew:*floating twoards Mewtwo* guess what bro?

Mewtwo:*looks up* what do you want?

Mew:*pulls out a jar of dirt and starts singing the jar of dirt song*

(after 10 whole hours of Mew singing)

Mewtwo:What.............the........fu-

(their house explodes from Mewtwo's rage)

Mew:*pops up from the rubble still holding the jar o dirt* what's your problem? i was just telling you about my jar of dirt.

Mewtwo:*eye twitch*........that's it, I'm taking over the universe. Away! *flies away*

tell me what you think.
last edited on Feb 17, 2013 at 08:00PM

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Больше года flippy_fan210 said…
the comic series is called the legionaries. it's about the crazy lives of the legendary pokemon. me and my friend just randomly came up with this.
Больше года zeebem10 said…
Depends on what genre it's supposed to be. Comedy? Drama? I thought Mew wouldn't sing "The Jar of Dirt" song. Why does he have the jar of dirt? Why did Mewtwo overreact about the song? DETAILS! We need details and a plot. Even if it is random and supposed to be a comedy, it needs a plot. It had no plot. I would work on it. Not trying to discourage. It needs a base. That's all. I give it a 3/10
zeebem10 commented…
Okay. It had a plot. Больше года