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The Meeting of the Minds, an Enchantress and Hades fanfiction

posted by sturmelle15

Chapter 1:
Hades had arrived in Asgard and once he saw where he was, it reminded him of Olympus. "Well, well, well. Who do we have here?" asked Hades, making his way over to Enchantress "Can i help Ты with something?" asked Enchantress "I was kind of wondering if Ты wanted to have your way with me" сказал(-а) Hades "Ooh. I like that in a man" сказал(-а) Enchantress "And i like that in a girl" сказал(-а) Hades (Later that night with Enchantress and Hades) "You know, Ты remind me a lot of a certian sorceress" сказал(-а) Hades "Do i? And who would that be?" asked Enchantress "Maleficent. I don't know. Ты just remind me of her" сказал(-а) Hades "I can see why Ты think we're similar" сказал(-а) Enchantress "The one thing i would like most for Ты to do for me is to help Loki claim the трон and overthrow Odin and Thor" сказал(-а) Enchantress "Sounds like a plan" сказал(-а) Hades "Good. We'll start the first phase of our plan right away" сказал(-а) Enchantress (Later with Loki, Enchantress, and Hades) Hades and Loki wore black masks and outfits to avoid being seen. "What about your mask?" asked Hades "I have no need for one. Besides, nothing conceals this beautiful face" сказал(-а) Enchantress "How will Ты get in without a mask?" asked Loki "Easy. I'll put my sedcuction skills to the test. Thor and Odin will be too busy to stop me. At that point, Ты and Hades will sneak in while they're too busy looking at my beautiful face" сказал(-а) Enchantress
Chapter 2:
Pain and Panic were in the трон room of Asgard reviewing the plan with Loki, Hades, and Enchantress. "So you're telling me you're planning to take over Asgard?" asked Pain "I sure am. I'm a couple еще steps closer to taking the трон from Odin and Thor" сказал(-а) Loki "Now, listen here, Ты two. I'm counting on Ты two not to let Loki down" сказал(-а) Hades "We promise boss" сказал(-а) Pain and Panic at the same time "Good" сказал(-а) Hades

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kristenfan10109 It's good but I would just get rid of your first line and go straight into the story to be honest it's a little harsh please don't take this the wrong way I'm not to rude in my opinion that just isn't the best way to start a fan-fiction. Everyone is going to have there own opinions, likes and dislikes despite wether they like it or not you should write it reguards especially if your passionate about it.