FanFiction.net Article: Doppel Crossed chapter 20 The Gathering (8/10)(TVD)

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Doppel Crossed chapter 20 The Gathering (8/10)(TVD)

posted by HaleyDewit

Though visiting час was long over, it didn’t stop Stefan from sneaking into Elena’s bedroom. Elena had fallen asleep shortly after Bonnie had left. Stefan had expected Damon to be in the room, but Elena happened to be alone.
Stefan walked to the постель, кровати and sank down on it. Elena, sensing his stare, opened her eyes and frowned.
“Stefan?” she asked sleepy.
“It’s okay. Go back to sleep” Stefan hushed, regretting he woke her.
“No” Elena moaned and she sat up difficult. “I’m up” She cast him a faint, tired smile. “I’m glad Ты came”
“I had to come and see you, but I didn’t want to bother anyone” Stefan explained. “Where’s Damon? I figured he’d be here”
Elena shrugged. “He’s wandering around the hospital somewhere…Probably getting drunk” she mumbled, pretending not to care, but Stefan knew better.
“What happened?” Stefan asked.
“Why? What makes Ты think something happened?” Elena shrugged again, but cautiously looking away from her ex-boyfriend.
“Elena, don’t insult me” Stefan replied calm.
“Okay” Elena sighed, giving in. “Damon is mad at me, because I refuse to drink his blood”
Elena had expected half and half for Stefan to be furious. Damon feeding Elena his blood had always been a nerve from the past. But this time he stayed rather calm.
“I was wondering when that was going to happen” was all he said.
“You’re not mad at him?” Elena asked, a little surprised and also a bit disappointed. Wasn’t anyone on her side?
“Mad? Because he tries to save the woman he loves? Elena, if I were in his shoes, I’d probably be forcing Ты to drink right now” Stefan answered. “This time we don’t have an elixir to bring Ты back to life. If Ты die now, it’s for good”
“Yeah, I know that” Elena snapped irritated. “You’ll all have to let me go, eventually”
“Are Ты ready to let any of us go?” Stefan fired back. “Jeremy? Caroline? Bonnie? Damon? Letting go goes both ways, Elena. If Ты die, we’ll lose you, but you’ll lose all of us. Are Ты ready for that?”
Elena understood that Stefan meant well, nevertheless she turned her back on him. Stefan stood and walked out of the room.
Why didn’t anyone understand where she was coming from? Was she such a bad person for wanting to die, for wanting to give up?

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Three's a Crowd chapter 8 The Ferris Wheel (2/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

As she walked outside she bumped into Dean. “Oh, you’re back” she noticed indifferent. “He’s awake” she filled the brothers in. “He’s your problem now. I’m out” She pushed Sam aside and walked away.
“Are we allowed to go in?” Sam wondered, pointing at the door. “I mean, all of us?”
“Why don’t Ты two go first, then I’ll go find Meg” Jo suggested.
“Why?” Dean asked.
“Because she seems upset” Jo answered obvious.
“So?” Dean shrugged uncaring. Jo rolled her eyes. “Some guys…” she muttered between her teeth, before taking off.
Dean opened the...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 8 The Ferris Wheel (1/10)(SPN)

posted by HaleyDewit

Cas opened his eyes and rolled them to left. Meg was sitting Далее to his bed. He looked down and noticed he was holding something in his hand. He rolled his eyes to the right and saw the machines and the perfusion leading some kind of fluid medication into his veins. He frowned and tried to pull all threads out of his body.
“No, Cas, don’t do that” Meg tried to stop him. “You have to get better”
Meg didn’t understand. Medication или drugs was what triggered it. He wasn’t himself when he took them.
Cas opened his mouth to explain, but something entirely different was said.
“Get...

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Toxic Fanfic Reviews! Episode 4, Sonic, Tails, And Knuckles Go Fishing.

posted by deathding

Is it THAT HARD TO WRITE A STORY ABOUT A FAST HEDGEHOG!??!?!?!?!?!

The actual Название is called, "Sonic and Tails and Knuckles go fishing." which is just horrible grammar to ignore commas.

You know a Фан fiction is going to be AMAZING when there is even an error IN THE GODDAMN TITLE! >.<

Please, just shoot me now! I quit! I give up on my life, now please let me go!

......Fine, I'll review this....

Besides, it's not like me to do that anyways. BUT, I am warning you. People like this exist, people that write such horrid stories and call it a Фан fiction.... It blows my mind! And today, I crush one of the worst ones out there.

It's time to look at, "Sonic, Tails,...

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Clementine from "Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost"

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The Host Chapter 21 Light in the Dark (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

“We’re home, Damon” Elena said. She and Stefan were helping Damon reach the porch, something he’d rather do alone, thinking he’d recovered enough.
“I’m going to open the door” Stefan said. He let go of Damon and ran to the door and opened it. Then he walked back at Damon and Elena. When he wanted to help Damon enter Damon pushed his arm away.
“I don’t need your help” he сказал(-а) pissed, avoiding to look at him.
Stefan looked helplessly at his ex, but she gave him a ‘what did Ты expect’ kind of look back. She helped Damon enter the house and Stefan walked behind them like...

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The Host Chapter 21 Light in the Dark (2/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Damon almost let go and fell back, but Stefan tightened his grip on him and pulled him up. They were outside, standing in the wreckage that used to be Bonnies house. Damon jerked his hand and walked away from his brother.
“Damon, wait…” but Damon walked to Katherine, who came his way. She lay her hands on his upper arms.
“Are Ты alright? How do Ты feel?” she asked worried.
“Like someone who’s been tortured” he сказал(-а) with a faint smile.
“I’m sorry I wasn’t there to help you” Katherine said. “I had to keep an eye on Stefan”
“It’s okay” Damon reassured her. “Elena...

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The Host Chapter 7 The Hunt (8/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

When the door slowly opened Stefan raced to the door and as soon as Elena got in he slammed it. Elena started breathing fast when she saw the fury in his eyes. He’d been drinking human blood again. “Where the hell have Ты been?” Despite her fear Elena felt some anger too. “You have no right to act like a jealous boyfriend! Ты don’t own me!” she yelled. Stefan gripped her shoulders and shook her. “Where Ты with Damon? Answer me!” Tears rolled over Elena’s face. “Stop it, Stefan, you’re hurting me!” she sobbed. He let go of her and went with his fingers through his...

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The Host Chapter 4 Behind the Surface (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

A large bag of chips, a two liter bottle of cola and a television. еще did one not need to get over a heartbreak, right? He let himself fall in the диван, мягкий уголок and grabbed the remote controller. He pushed a button and the Simpsons came on. Homer Simpson was strangling Bart Simpson. “Ha, don’t Ты just Любовь a classic?” Jeremy looked aside and saw Anna lying Далее to him, her feet comfortably on the coffee table. She put her hand in the bag and took some chips. “I hope Ты don’t mind. Paprika are my favorite” she сказал(-а) and she put the chips in her mouth. “Is this your new strategy? Acting...

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The Horrible Truth cpt 2 The Time Travel part 2

posted by HaleyDewit

2009, San Francisco.
Piper was baking her famous печенье when Phoebe walked in in the kitchen. She stopped right in front of Piper. “Do I look like an idiot?”, she asked, expecting to hear no. Piper kept continuing her baking, when she said: “Is that a trick question?” She put the plate with baked печенье on the таблица and looked at her younger sister, who seemed to be upset by her answer.
“Hey, Phoebes, I was just kidding”, she сказал(-а) in laughter. “You’re not an idiot and Ты know it well damn too” “Good, ‘cause apparently Jason Dean thinks I clearly am”, Phoebe сказал(-а) really...

My True Любовь Chapter 16. Nessies point of veiw

posted by Twilightsauce

Эй, this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope Ты enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the Далее chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if Ты ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting Ты ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...

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Toxic Fanfic Reviews! Episode 3, The Pokemon Story.

posted by deathding

Might as well throw in a joke to cheer Ты up. But this won't prepare Ты for the HELL that awaits you.

Might as well throw in a joke to cheer you up. But this won't prepare you for the HELL that awaits you.

Wow, didn't even give it a title. Bastard. And this is just a warning right here, read it carefully. I will not be responsible for your 3DS if Ты threw up on it. I am not responsible for your suicide, или anything. SO,

DANGERDANGERDANGER!
WARNING, EVERYONE WILL FIND THIS AS THE WORST GODDAMN PIECE OF SCRAP METAL THAT HAS EVER EXISTED, VIEWER DISCRETION SO F**KING ADVISED Ты HAVE NO IDEA!!!!!!!!!

You can read my Избранное fanfiction reviewer reviewing it here! ^___^

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This fanfiction, and I CANNOT believe I am going to say this, but it is even WORSE than Creation Of A Dry Кости AND Faker.

QUADRUPLED...

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M.C. High School chapter 1

posted by Rosy_Posey

My alarm rang at 6 pm for high school of mistical creatures/students (a private and secret school). School starts at 8:30 pm for those who need to be shaded from the sun. the school is located in sunny californina near san diego.

i dragged my feet from my постель, кровати and headed down the hall to my sister's room to wake her up for our "breakfast" but to others it would be dinner. my mother had made pork chops with mash potatoes and peas. After the meal me and my sister went to go get ready. as we were about to leave we сказал(-а) good night to our mother.

The time was 7:15 and i got in my car to warm it up...

omg where is embers body!?

posted by cynder1

chapter 4
spyro and cynder were flying with sparx to where the 'incedent' took place ,suddendly sparx сказал(-а) 'there there!, thats where she commited suicide!' they all landed at the high cliff and saw how steep it was 'yep embers definately dead.' сказал(-а) spyro they then flew to the bottom of the cliff where they got a shock. embers body wasnt there 's-spyro? wheres embers body?' 'i dont know' 'its like she turned into dust' 'hey spyro we've got company!' a mass of grublins were heading right towards them and to be leading them happened to be ember in adult form 'e-ember?' spyro сказал(-а) 'the ember u...

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Three's a Crowd chapter 6 Death Wish (3/10)

posted by HaleyDewit

Meg took a bite from the waffle and frowned. “Did Ты put Шоколад in it?” she asked, looking up at Cas.
“Yeah, Anna told me Ты liked it as a human and since you’re human again…” Cas explained. “I wanted to do something nice for you”
“Hmm” Meg said, taking another bite from her waffle. “Seems to me that you’re trying to make up for something”
Cas bit his lip and sat down. He took Meg’s hand. “Yeah, I’ve been…quite a jerk to Ты yesterday. But…the pain…it was really bad” he tried to explain.
Meg pulled her hand away. “Yeah, I get it” she answered a...

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Doppel Crossed chapter 16 The Traitor (6/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Rachel looked around her before she pressed the колокол, колокольчик, белл of Ric’s loft.
“Rachel” Stefan сказал(-а) a little surprised, when he opened the door. “Come in”
“Are Ты alone?” Rachel checked. Stefan nodded and she followed him inside. “I need to know something” she cut to the chase. “How do Ты know I’m a werewolf?”
“It’s a full moon tonight and Ты were Актёрское искусство strange earlier” Stefan explained. “Plus I’m a vampire, I have learned to recognize them, even if they’re in human shape”
“Veronica will kill me if she finds out I’ve been talking to you” Rachel сказал(-а) scared...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 9 Complications (3/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Caroline was waiting in the doorway while Bonnie put on her shoes. They were going out for a walk in the garden.
“How’s life in here?” Caroline asked casual.
“ ‘s Okay, I guess” Bonnie said. “Little boring though”
Caroline scoffed. “I wish I could say the same” she mumbled.
“What do Ты mean?” Bonnie asked concerned.
Caroline shook her head. “Come on, let’s go”
Five минуты later they were walking through the garden. Caroline whistled. “This place really is beautiful”
“Caroline” Bonnie сказал(-а) a little harsh. “I know Ты didn’t just come over. There’s something...

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Dopple Crossed chapter 8 The Autopsy (4/10)(The Vampire Diaries)

posted by HaleyDewit

Stefan and Rebekah were driving. They had stopped to get their selves a late night snack and now they were on their way home.
“Can Ты try and call Damon for me, please?” Stefan asked, his eyes on the road. Rebekah conjured her phone and dialed Damon’s number, which Stefan had дана her.
“Goes straight to voicemail” Rebekah said. She turned to Stefan. “I’m sure he’ll be okay. He’s got that boy looking out for him”
Stefan shook his head. “Derek’s just a teenager. Damon was in no good shape when I last saw him. I think he might be really sick”
“Then let’s go check on...