Джейкоб и Белла

Эй, guys, my name is Karly and I've decided to write my own Фан fiction. Okay, imagine Edward never came back because Alice never told Roslie anything, so Edward never assumed Bella died. And now it's just Jacob and Bella. Here's the start of my story- lengthy by the way- and let me know what Ты think или any ideas Ты have that Ты would like me to add in. I appriciate all thoughts negative или positive. :) Thanks. :)

*Full Moon*

    The piercing shrill of my alarm clock woke me up out of my deep sleep. I threw my arm at it hitting the buttons, hoping it was snooze. I sat...