Red riding капот, худ

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope Ты like it. Send me a prop. tell me if Ты like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I сказал(-а) with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who Ты think he is Chris.” I сказал(-а) annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do Ты look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in еще pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET Ты жопа, попка UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

I shifted away from him, pressing my back as far against the car door as it would go. The small Космос was too close and his scent was overwhelming.
"Why?" I whispered. His eyes crinkled for a moment and he looked at me, his silver eyes stirring with hidden emotion.
"I'm not sure. The same reason your Jacob has one with you. It's not something we can control,"
"You can't have one with me. I Любовь Jake," He didn't flinch but I saw the deep hurt in his eyes. My сердце stuttered. I didn't want to cause him any pain. His hand slowly moved up into the air and I didn't stop it.
"I'm sorry Renesmee....