Please Комментарий your opinoin should i make еще или do Ты like it???

Hey, I wrote a fanfic but no-one seems to be Чтение it. I'm hoping it just cuz they can't find it. Please could Ты read it and tell me what Ты think?

It was a normal день in Destiny Islands.The sun was shining and the residents were as happy as ever.But when Kioka woke up,Destiny Islands had changed forever.Some of the ideas from this fic came from my Назад fic but I'm ditching that one.

As the fallout occurs, the story closes on Zexion's reflection

The final battle of the story.

Xenmas reports something that forever changes everything.

A день that belongs only to LarSon

Axel attempts another assassination.

A huge шведский стол, фуршет explodes in Twilight Town.

Zexion and Jason go on a mission together.