can Ты give me a opinon

i want to make a Манга well first i cant figur out a tital for it and секунда i want your opinon on whats it about

its about a girl named tay tay that got a huge crush on this boy named yukio who plays hockey. Then this virus comes around tokyo getting people ill but they are close of makeing a cure but they need one thing. its a magic red stone thats relly powerful. then tay tay figers out she is a neko and shes the only one who can get it but this evil team that is called the darkness who ben at the bouttom of the sea for 300 years waiting for the red stone to arive so they can use it to rule land and sea. now its a race to get it