This is my first Twilight Фан fiction. I started Письмо it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started Письмо it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.
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Unchained Melody
“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped или screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide open eyes, I wouldn’t be able to see him. I was somewhere else; somewhere very far away.
I was three years ahead of this moment. I was three years away from Edward Cullen. I was three years broken. I was three years older. My body leaning against a giant волк underneath the stars. My body was not cold and stone and my eyes weren’t black with thirst. I was me, Isabella Swan. It was a place where I never had to say goodbye to Charlie. It was a perfect place, except for the empty pain in my chest; La Push.
“Bella, are Ты alright?”
I felt warm hands press against me, but I still couldn’t see anything. I couldn’t see Jacob Black, and that scared me. What was happening to me? Was I really dreaming?
“Snap out of it!” He growled, “Wake up, Bella!”
I stroked the wolf’s long, shaggy fur. While I was here, I decided to talk to him. “Jacob,” I сказал(-а) and the волк looked up at me. “It’s going to be cold. It’s going to be very dark soon.”
He tilted his head in confusion, searching for the meaning of my words. I wanted to keep him at the moment and stay in this hallucination, dream, или whatever it may be. “You see, Jacob,” I explained, “I have to lose my sun and my air. It would be selfish for me to stay here with you. It would be selfish to choose this path. I’ve caused so much pain, Jacob. I know Ты have a shot at happiness. He doesn’t. I’m his only fate.” It was really hard explaining this to my possible future. “I have to go back now.”
The волк got up from beneath me and slipped away from my body. He let out a deep, lonely howl. My сердце shattered even more.
I felt the scene slipping away and my senses flooding back. “Jacob.” I mumbled.
“What’s wrong? Did something happen?”
“No.” I lied.
“You’re a terrible liar, Bella.” Jacob rolled his eyes. “Please, just tell me. I promise I wont --”
“Jake, I’m so afraid.” I confessed. My body started shaking as I remembered what brought me here.
“About what? Getting married?”
“No. Well, yes. But that’s not it. I’m afraid that one day...if my bad luck continues...something will happen to Edward. And who will stitch me up then? Who will save me?”
“Well, that’s dumb. Of course, I will.”
“Really. Do Ты honestly think Ты could still Любовь me?”
“What do Ты mean? I’ll always --”
“...When I’m a vampire.” I said, reminding him of my fate.
His face grew serious. “It wont matter. Ты know that. I don’t care how badly Ты stink. I’ll hold you.” He wrapped his warms around me.
I shook my head. “How long will Ты be mine?”
It was the wrong Вопрос to ask. It was cruel and thoughtless. This whole thing was wrong, though. I should be at the altar right now; Charlie walking me down the isle. I was almost there too. I was so close. Alice had just finished doing my hair when she walked out to check on things, when the fears attacked me. I was so afraid to be married, but there was something I was afraid of even more. Losing Jacob. I accepted the fact I had to say goodbye to him a long time ago...but I didn’t realize, until the день of the wedding, that I could never go back. Never. Even if Edward left me или if he died или something happened, there would be no one to go back to.
I had walked out of the room and saw Jasper. He had дана me a worried look. “Please,” I had begged him, “I need to go do something.”
That’s how I got here. Stranded in the forest. Somewhere between the Cullen’s and La Push. Jacob found me.
“I’ll always belong to you.” Jacob сказал(-а) carefully.
“Not when Ты imprint. And it will happen Ты know.”
“I doubt that.”
He didn’t deny that it would change things if he did, though. He knew just as well as I did that if he imprinted, he wouldn’t be able to save me when everything fell apart. And if I did choose him right now, he wouldn’t always be mine. Sooner или later, I would become just like Leah. Edward was the safest choice after all. Of course this had nothing to do with safe.
“I need to get back to Alice.” I сказал(-а) finally. “She’s probably looking for me.”
“Bella, before Ты do this,” Jacob grabbed my wrist and there was no point trying to break free. “I want Ты to think about all you’re leaving behind. You’ll never see Charlie again. You’ll never see any of your family. And you’ll never have a real family. You’ll never have children. Ты wont be able to do so much...And what if he accidentally kills you? Bella, Ты will become a murderer. A blood thirsty monster. Is this what Ты want?”
“But I’ll have him forever. And I Любовь him.” I сказал(-а) that as if it made all those other things meaningless.
“Sometimes Любовь isn’t enough.”
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Unchained Melody
“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped или screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide open eyes, I wouldn’t be able to see him. I was somewhere else; somewhere very far away.
I was three years ahead of this moment. I was three years away from Edward Cullen. I was three years broken. I was three years older. My body leaning against a giant волк underneath the stars. My body was not cold and stone and my eyes weren’t black with thirst. I was me, Isabella Swan. It was a place where I never had to say goodbye to Charlie. It was a perfect place, except for the empty pain in my chest; La Push.
“Bella, are Ты alright?”
I felt warm hands press against me, but I still couldn’t see anything. I couldn’t see Jacob Black, and that scared me. What was happening to me? Was I really dreaming?
“Snap out of it!” He growled, “Wake up, Bella!”
I stroked the wolf’s long, shaggy fur. While I was here, I decided to talk to him. “Jacob,” I сказал(-а) and the волк looked up at me. “It’s going to be cold. It’s going to be very dark soon.”
He tilted his head in confusion, searching for the meaning of my words. I wanted to keep him at the moment and stay in this hallucination, dream, или whatever it may be. “You see, Jacob,” I explained, “I have to lose my sun and my air. It would be selfish for me to stay here with you. It would be selfish to choose this path. I’ve caused so much pain, Jacob. I know Ты have a shot at happiness. He doesn’t. I’m his only fate.” It was really hard explaining this to my possible future. “I have to go back now.”
The волк got up from beneath me and slipped away from my body. He let out a deep, lonely howl. My сердце shattered even more.
I felt the scene slipping away and my senses flooding back. “Jacob.” I mumbled.
“What’s wrong? Did something happen?”
“No.” I lied.
“You’re a terrible liar, Bella.” Jacob rolled his eyes. “Please, just tell me. I promise I wont --”
“Jake, I’m so afraid.” I confessed. My body started shaking as I remembered what brought me here.
“About what? Getting married?”
“No. Well, yes. But that’s not it. I’m afraid that one day...if my bad luck continues...something will happen to Edward. And who will stitch me up then? Who will save me?”
“Well, that’s dumb. Of course, I will.”
“Really. Do Ты honestly think Ты could still Любовь me?”
“What do Ты mean? I’ll always --”
“...When I’m a vampire.” I said, reminding him of my fate.
His face grew serious. “It wont matter. Ты know that. I don’t care how badly Ты stink. I’ll hold you.” He wrapped his warms around me.
I shook my head. “How long will Ты be mine?”
It was the wrong Вопрос to ask. It was cruel and thoughtless. This whole thing was wrong, though. I should be at the altar right now; Charlie walking me down the isle. I was almost there too. I was so close. Alice had just finished doing my hair when she walked out to check on things, when the fears attacked me. I was so afraid to be married, but there was something I was afraid of even more. Losing Jacob. I accepted the fact I had to say goodbye to him a long time ago...but I didn’t realize, until the день of the wedding, that I could never go back. Never. Even if Edward left me или if he died или something happened, there would be no one to go back to.
I had walked out of the room and saw Jasper. He had дана me a worried look. “Please,” I had begged him, “I need to go do something.”
That’s how I got here. Stranded in the forest. Somewhere between the Cullen’s and La Push. Jacob found me.
“I’ll always belong to you.” Jacob сказал(-а) carefully.
“Not when Ты imprint. And it will happen Ты know.”
“I doubt that.”
He didn’t deny that it would change things if he did, though. He knew just as well as I did that if he imprinted, he wouldn’t be able to save me when everything fell apart. And if I did choose him right now, he wouldn’t always be mine. Sooner или later, I would become just like Leah. Edward was the safest choice after all. Of course this had nothing to do with safe.
“I need to get back to Alice.” I сказал(-а) finally. “She’s probably looking for me.”
“Bella, before Ты do this,” Jacob grabbed my wrist and there was no point trying to break free. “I want Ты to think about all you’re leaving behind. You’ll never see Charlie again. You’ll never see any of your family. And you’ll never have a real family. You’ll never have children. Ты wont be able to do so much...And what if he accidentally kills you? Bella, Ты will become a murderer. A blood thirsty monster. Is this what Ты want?”
“But I’ll have him forever. And I Любовь him.” I сказал(-а) that as if it made all those other things meaningless.
“Sometimes Любовь isn’t enough.”
At first the Список included Gus фургон, ван Sant, Sofia Coppola, and Bill Condon discovered by Hollywood insider Nikkie Finke who writes for Deadline Hollywood. Then the name Stephen Daldry surfaced discovered by the LA Times. Right after that MTV (there seems to be a pattern here, you’ll see in a minute) asked The Runaways director, Floria Sigismondi, if she were interested and she gave a polite and non-committal answer.
Now enter M. Night Shyamalan, director of the upcoming The Last Airbender that stars Jackson Rathbone. MTV put the Вопрос to him, and to our surprise M. Knight (can we call him just Knight?) was a apparently Фан of the first movie…who knew?
“”I would’ve loved to be– I Любовь the series, and Catherine [Hardwicke's] movie, it was one of my Избранное Фильмы of that year,” he said. “Really, I thought tonally, it was a perfect movie. I called her up after I saw ‘Twilight’ and was like ‘That was amazing.’ So I’m a big fan.”
i like the movie ebcause its fantastic and romance
.. i Любовь the Любовь stories in Фильмы :)
andd for this..and the actor play their roles good :)
what Ты think about edward,bella,jacob,alice,rosalie,emet, and for the others :)
what is your favourite twilight vampire??
why Ты like your favourite vampire?
do Ты read the books?
do Ты lovve the books?
what is your favourite book from twilight
what Ты think about edward and bella like a couple??
what Ты want to write about the movie,write here
give the ideas,and if Ты want suggest some play for twilight in this club :)
and invite Ты Друзья ;d :) to write in the Статья
.. i Любовь the Любовь stories in Фильмы :)
andd for this..and the actor play their roles good :)
what Ты think about edward,bella,jacob,alice,rosalie,emet, and for the others :)
what is your favourite twilight vampire??
why Ты like your favourite vampire?
do Ты read the books?
do Ты lovve the books?
what is your favourite book from twilight
what Ты think about edward and bella like a couple??
what Ты want to write about the movie,write here
give the ideas,and if Ты want suggest some play for twilight in this club :)
and invite Ты Друзья ;d :) to write in the Статья
10 Ways to Annoy Carlisle Cullen
10. Tell him only to address Ты in a cute English accent.
9. Call him Carlisle, but be sure to pronounce the “s”. When he corrects you, give him a weird look and tell him the “q” is silent.
8. Ask if blondes really do have еще fun.
7. Inquire as to what he actually does on his night shift on the hospital, with all the pretty nurses in the ER.
6. Instead of telling him to “get lost” in an argument, tell him to swim to France.
5. When he annoys you, respond with “times have changed, old man”.
4. Ask what type of superhuman power compassion is – what does he do in a fight? Любовь thy enemy to death?
3. Leap out from behind the стол письменный, стол in his study when he isn’t expecting it and spray him with Holy Water.
2. Call him McSteamy или McDreamy.
And the Number One way to annoy Carlisle Cullen?
1. Run around the Emergency Room screaming “I’ve been bitten! I’ve been bitten!”
10. Tell him only to address Ты in a cute English accent.
9. Call him Carlisle, but be sure to pronounce the “s”. When he corrects you, give him a weird look and tell him the “q” is silent.
8. Ask if blondes really do have еще fun.
7. Inquire as to what he actually does on his night shift on the hospital, with all the pretty nurses in the ER.
6. Instead of telling him to “get lost” in an argument, tell him to swim to France.
5. When he annoys you, respond with “times have changed, old man”.
4. Ask what type of superhuman power compassion is – what does he do in a fight? Любовь thy enemy to death?
3. Leap out from behind the стол письменный, стол in his study when he isn’t expecting it and spray him with Holy Water.
2. Call him McSteamy или McDreamy.
And the Number One way to annoy Carlisle Cullen?
1. Run around the Emergency Room screaming “I’ve been bitten! I’ve been bitten!”
10 Ways to Annoy Alice Cullen
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimeters shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever Ты can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When Ты go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what Ты will be doing in five минуты every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. email her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimeters shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever Ты can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When Ты go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what Ты will be doing in five минуты every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. email her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
With Eclipse on the horizon it would be fun to share our Избранное Eclipse quotes. Цитаты should be left as Комментарии and with a page number so we can all see them in context. So what is your Избранное line in Eclipse?
I Любовь it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
I Любовь it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
Today, The Twilight Saga: New Moon and The Twilight Saga: Eclipse звезда Tinsel Korey will be speaking to the youth before the Aboriginal Youth Night hockey game. The event is sponsored by True North Sports and Entertainment and the Manitobe Moose Hockey Club, and tonight's events will be called "Follow Your Dreams." According to a Последнее press release, "the concept is fairly simple in nature, the goals are to encourage First Nations Youth from around Manitoba to pursue their dreams through healthy living and a very specific focus on suicide prevention, due to the high suicide rate amongst First Nations youth." 2,500 are expected to attend from the 63 First Nations communities around Manitoba, and "Ti