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Review of Breaking Dawn...don't read if Ты haven't finished the book

posted by jacob_is_amazin

I just finished Чтение Breaking Dawn and all I can say is WOW!!! I thought it was really good...for the most part. There is some stuff about it that bothered me. Below are my many opinions on the book.

First of all...I adored the Jacob section. I thought it was so sweet and sad. I loved when he was imagining Bella pregnant with his child and how he was upset that Seth had his arm around her. I liked it when he told Quil that he didn't see the faces of other girls anymore. All his chapter titles were great...my избранное were 'Why didn't I just walk away? Oh right, because I'm and idiot.' and 'What do I look like? The wizard of oz? Ты need a brain? Ты need a heart? Go ahead. Take mine. Take everything I have.'. I liked his Preface, too...'Life sucks, and then Ты die. Yeah, I should be so lucky.'. I really like Jacob's character...he's one of my favorites. But I was upset that he imprinted on Rennesme so soon...I at least wanted to see how Jacob would feel about Bella after she was turned into a vampire. He was annoyingly possessive about the baby. I didn't like how Bella was like '"Jacob was letting me hold her"' или something like that. She doesn't need his permission.

Second...the Volturi scene. Don't get me wrong...i am so happy none of them died...but I was prepared for a fight. I was all ready to be all sad and depressed for days cause Emmett died или something...but they didn't even fight. I got all sad when they were saying their good-byes and nothing happened. Plus I really wanted someone to just tear Caius's head off...he is so mean. I felt bad for Tanya and Kate when the Volturi killed Irina. I think the fact that there wasn't a fight made all the Назад preparation chapters kinda pointless...but still good. I'm happy they got their happy ending.

Thirdly...Alice and Jasper leaving. I was like "WHAT". I adore both of them so I was completely heartbroken when they left. I wasn't surprised when they showed up at the end because I knew they would. Alice wouldn't abandon them like that and I really don't think Jasper would either.

Fourth...Emmett's comments. LOL!!! He is great. I сердце Emmett very much. '"At least 'someones' scoring around here"'...priceless!!!

Fifth...Rennesme. I was upset that Bella got pregnant...partially because I knew right then and there that Jacob didn't have a chance. And Bella was so different while she was pregnant...and what the hell was with Rosalie?? I knew Rosalie didn't like Bella but I thought sacrificing Bella's life for the baby was an all time low for her. The birth scene was disgustly awesome...Twilight meets Saw. And I adored Rennesme after she was born...I thought Bella's reaction to the nickname 'Nessie' was hilarious.

Sixth...Stephenie Meyer kept it clean. For the numerous sex scenes there were I was very surprised at how young adult appropriate she kept it. Big Cudo's for Stephenie Meyer

Seventh...Last but most diffinately not least...Edward and Bella. They are so sweet together. I felt really bad for Edward about the whole pregnant thing...poor guy/vampire/god. I liked that Bella still felt the same about Edward after she was changed and how in the end they lived happily ever after...forever and forever and forever!!!!

Over all Breaking dawn was amazing and great and I loved it.

jonas1fan, hellgirl223 and 4 others like this

sawabear i couldn't agree with you more on everything. emmett's comments had me rolling on the floor laughing. i didn't like rosalie to begin with but that was horrible, like she thought it was her baby or something. im glad jacob got his happy ending. my view for him changed in new moon by the way he helped bella through all that was sweet, but then dropped in eclipse, i know you should fight for your true love but you can't force someone to love you. then i ended up liking him again in breaking dawn. the whole imprinting on nessie thing was kinda gross, but at least bella was able to be calm about it, later on i mean. i actually thought for a second that he would imprint on leah but then i remebered that you can't imprint on someone you've already seen before. but i would have liked to see him fall in love with her or something. i agree that bella does not need permission by jacob to hold her own baby, i mean thats just crazy. i was completely balling my eyes out when edward and bella had to say goodbye to renesmee. when edward called jacob his brother i had to grab tissues and wait about 5 mins to read again because my eyes were so blurry i couldn't see the page. i think the cottage esme gave edward and bella was super sweet. and who could forget emmett's comment when they got back....priceless! i did love jacobs chapter names... "why didn't i just walk away when i had the chance? oh thats right, because im an idiot!" haha i love breaking dawn and agree completly with your comments

bodle an amazing overwiew of Breking Dawn, it's almost exactly what i thought of it although through the first three books i was really angry with Jacob, but that whole jacob part was amazing, and the blonde jokes, he is so sarcastic =] and the birth scene... "Twilight meets Saw" lol, great emmett's comment were probably one of the great hilights =] and before the fight with the Volturi, where Edward and Bella were saying goodbye to Rennesme, but her name.... was just wrong and your last comment about Edwar/Bella were so true, i'm a sucker for happy endings! =]

countrygirl2008 you are so right .the book was amazing. i was laughing so hard at emmet and bella as they arm wrestled,plus his jokes.it was funny when jacob and rose kept going at it. the honey moon scene was romantic.

krystalhale I liked hte fact there wan't a fight. I mean, I didn't wnay anyone to die, except maybe for Jane(:. But otherwise I agree completely with you. It was an absolutely amazing book. It was a great ending.

Amanda_Rae This isn't exactly a review, but it's a nice thought. The book was excellent. And most of the parts you liked, I enjoyed as well (though with less exclamation points...) Dunno if anyone agrees with me, but I enjoyed the fact that Esme was more involved in this book. She was written in many of the scenes, and even said SEVERAL things throughout the book. I just loved it because I always felt a burning love and attachment to all of the Cullens, but Esme always seemed a little... detached. We never really got her full-on as a character, and I liked that Stephenie included her in this book more often. There's my two cents.

jacob_is_amazin Actually Amanda_Rae I don't really think Esme was more involved than usual...though I would like it if she was because I do think she deserves a bigger part...but I don't even remember her saying more than a few words n the rest of the time the book just mentioned her crying or something like that...And I know its not exactly a review but I called it that for lack of better word.

tack94 I was disappointed in the last book "Breaking Dawn". I hoped that Edward & Bella would go to college and possibly meet up with others like themselves or find out that the college consisted mostly of Vampires. Too much of Jake in the last book. "Breaking Dawn" needs to be re-written. The 1st 3 books were believable that possibly spirtual & magically creatures do exist in our world. Maybe there is an Edward. Maybe their passion & true love does exist. But not in this 4th and final book. Please re-write "Breaking Dawn".

ECBCJB i love breaking dawn. i really liked emmetts comments. was so funny and jakes blonde jokes too. loved the stuff between him and rose. i never liked rose and i specially didnt like her in this book. all she cared about was the baby. she didnt care if bella lived or died as long as she got the baby. i like the birthing scene of course its gonna be bad its half vampire and if u couldnt breathe u would be freaking out like that and since she was so strong it hurt bella. i was alittle suprised that she had bella get pregnant after she said they couldnt have babies. but im glad she did it made a happy ending for everyone specially jake and he got to be part of the familty. also it kept the wolves from attacking the cullens. i wasnt upset when alice left i knew it was for a reason specially since she was seeing things ( like the jungle part) and edward was asking about it but she said she couldnt see. she didnt want him to know. and we know aro can see every thought uve ever had. i think it would have been better if they faught at the end. they would have kicked some butt and then they wouldnt have to worry about the volturi coming back which u know they will. they had the upper hand this time and next time they might not. i wanted bella and edward to go to college too. would have been cool and interesting for them to make friends. its awesome that bella was such a good vampire. she finally found a place she feels like she belongs. and my very very fav part is where edward finally gets to read bellas mind. hes wanted to ever since he met her. i cried when they said their goodbyes and when edward called jake his brother and son. he finally excepted him as family and not worried about jake im printing on his daughter anymore. im glad that bella got to keep charlie in her life but i think he would have freaked out more than he did. that just didnt seem like charlie to me. but it was awesome anyway. i also loved jakes POV. the titles were so jake and very funny. and i was glad to see exactly how jacob really felt and what he was going thru. i really love seth hes such a good person. dont like leah at all feel bad for her tho wish she could have had her happy ending too. SM rocks and i wish she would write more to the series. not just edwards POV but also more of the family. and jake and nessie. dont really like the name renesme but i like nessie.

twilight4ever97 I really likes all of the Twilight books, but I think that Eclipse was the best. Breaking Dawn was so great. I love Bella and Emmett. It's sooo funny when Emmett's teasing Bella, and I love when they have an arm wresling competition. I really hated how Jacob imprinted on Renesmee though. It's like, 'o my gosh Jacob, Bella hasn't even held Renesmee yet, and you're having a freaky werewolf connection with her!Get a life!' I loved the ending, except I really think that someone should go up to Marcus and Caius and just kill them! they are soo mean. Aro just lies to Renesmee! that is sooo wrong. I love how Stephenie wrote the middle section from Jacob's point of view. I can't beleive that Stephenie isn't going to write the 5th book, because I really like feeling what the characters feel. In the movie Twilight, I feel like they skipped out on to much, so when they make Breaking Dawn in movie form (which they might not) I hope that they get every detail that was in the book, because it was really good.

twilight4ever97 Man, I love Rosalie in Breaking Dawn. She's soooo funny! I was tearing up when it said that charlie was crying at the wedding. The best part in my opinion is when Bella's trailing with her sheild. I also love Jacob and his blond jokes.

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Tears of Love: Chapter Two – I don't Любовь my girlfriend

posted by Andressa_Weld

Kellan’s POV
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I put my Избранное t-shirt and my new jeans, I was going to meet Ash in a nightclub.
Ash was my girlfriend but I didn’t Любовь her! I was just tired of being alone! I Любовь Nikki, but she loves Taylor! That’s so obviously, I don’t know why they aren’t dating yet! She has a big smile for him! Is she blind? He’s so young! I like Tay but he isn’t the right man for Nikki! I think nobody is good enough for her, except me, of course!
My phone rang. It was Ash.
-Kellan you’re late! – I looked at the clock, I was half an час late
- I got stuck in traffic!
-Hurry...

TWILIGHT - chapter 13 - CONFESSIONS - My view of twilight :)

posted by PeppyAndFox

If I'd ever feared death before in the presence, it was nothing compared to now.
He streaked through the dark, thick underbrush of the forest like a bullet, like a ghost.
There was no sound, no evidence that his feet touched the earth.
His breathing never changed, never indicated and effort.
But the trees flew by at deadly speeds, always missing by inches.
I was too terrified to close my eyes, though the cool forest air whipped against my face and burned them.
I felt as if I were stupidly sticking my head out the window of an airplane in flight.
And, for the first time in my life, I felt the dizzy...

The Queen Bs Chapter 3

posted by lollipopszx3

After we finished shopping, we walked to Tim Hortons. We were going to order lunch there. The place was crowded though! It was really getting sweaty with all those people there, especially while we were carrying so many bags and wearing long-sleeved shirts.

"Oh there are my friends!" сказал(-а) Alice and started to wave at people. A group of girls and one guy were sitting on a big таблица hunched over ice caps. The people waved back.

Alice walked over to them with her drink. She took a сиденье, место, сиденья beside one of the girls with glasses.

"Guys, this is Rosalie and Bella Swan. Rosalie is my new roommate and Bella...

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The Past Will Never Change Chapter 2

posted by lollipopszx3

"Beautiful house, isn't it?" asked Eliza. She was looking at the new house that she built. It was far away from civilivation. It reminded me a lot like the Cullen's. But of course, I have to forget them.

"Oh my god! Eliza! How'd Ты get this house?" asked Nathan. He was always amazed to explore new things. Nathan wasn't really into exploring things when he was young. This was actually the first time he was going to school.

"Nathan! Want to go hunting?" asked Johnson. He was really eager to bring my son hunting. It was going to be his first trip. Nathan appears seven years old now. Johnson reminded...

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'Eclipse' Trailer: How Does Bryce Dallas Howard's Victoria Stack Up To Rachelle Lefevre's?

posted by shannon9396

The two Victorias

It's been almost eight months since Victoria-gate rocked the "Twilight" universe, but the "Eclipse" trailer refuses to let it fade away. Though Bryce Dallas Howard replaced Rachelle Lefevre as the bad vampire Victoria for "Eclipse" at the end of July '09, today was the first time we got a chance to see her in action.

Back in November when "New Moon" hit theaters, we сказал(-а) seeing Rachelle play out her last few moments as Victoria made the transition harder to bear. Granted, we haven't really had a chance to see Bryce in action and there's a possibility she might be able to pull off the character...

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My True Любовь Chapter 15. Nessies point of veiw.

posted by Twilightsauce

Hi,
I dont have much to say today but I hope Ты enjoy this chapter as I put loads of thought and hardwork into it. once again I hope Ты enjoy it and chapter 16 is on the way * i promise...*
LAmber/Twilightsauce....x

The wind blowing through my hair was an exhilarating feeling. Jasper had taught me how to ride his bike a couple of months ago; I was surprised when he сказал(-а) yes because he was usually quite responsible. I hadn’t been much good at first but after a few hours I had got the hang of it, no one else knew that I could ride his bike and it was nice to be able to take it out for a private...

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My True Любовь Chapter 13. Nessies point of veiw.

posted by Twilightsauce

This Chapter is dedicated to a great friend PC, thanks for all of your support...x

There were people rushing about everywhere but I could distinguish the difference between my vampire family and my werewolf family but the almost invisible flashes of light and the еще slow galloping thuds of my werewolf’s footsteps. Kate stood in the middle of Alice’s massive bathroom whilst Rose, Alice, Mum, Tanya and I all applied her makeup, pulled her hair up into an elegant bun and literally made every surface of her body look even еще beautiful than usual- which is extremely hard with a vampire. Esme...

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Juliet part 2

posted by kiwi12

part 2

The she-vampire who had grabbed me clamped a hand over my mouth and muttered something about just wanting to talk. Right. A small part of my brain noted that her eyes were not what I expected but I really didn't have time to think about that. I was stronger than the she-vampire expected me to be. She wasn't using any energy in holding me. I broke free for a трещина, сплит секунда and flung myself wildly. Whether it was because I was dizzy или because she moved I don't know but I flung myself right into her marble hard body. Everything went black.

When I came to I heard the she-vampire gasp. She whispered...

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Bella's Adventure -Ch4 - Hopless

posted by MadisonAmpt

Not sure how good this one is, sounded good in my head. But i will try to make them as interesting as possible. much love:) Xx

I lied there half dead in pain.
Then this guy with the milky eyes held out his hand. I heaitated but he сказал(-а) "No need to fear me young one" in that creepy voice he has. NO NEED TO FEAR!. i сказал(-а) in my head "Please just kill me i dont think i can stand much еще pain" i cryed wile grabbing his hand with my good one. i got into a sittig position but he just stood there with a puzzled expression "How interesting" he said. He pulled me to my feet "im sorry about Demetri he...

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my new moon chapter three

posted by Sarah234

Chapter 3

Everything is ready, Charlie thinks I'm going to see my grandma in Florida, and Jacob has told his dad the truth, how easy it is to be a werewolf and have no secrets for your dad. Were taking Jacob’s car as it would make it there quicker and we won’t have to worry about it breaking down, I run down the stairs with my little holdall and throw it into the boot of the car and turn to say bye to Charlie.
“Bye dad, I’ll call Ты soon” I yell into the house
“Wait Bella! Here’s some money to help Ты out. Have fun.”
“Dad, Ты don’t hav-“
“No Bella. I insist” he says...

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New Moon, chapter eleven, Clarifications. Part four

posted by New_Moon_Master

"Okay. I'll try." she сказал(-а) reluctently. She muttered something under herbreath that I didn't catch. The only things I hear were "he" and "kill".
"But Ты need to sleep. You're not immortal yet, so Ты need it."
"Alice, it's barely even dark out!" I argued. I was suprised that Charlie had not сказал(-а) anythig about the fact I was going to постель, кровати in the middle of the afternoon. He must have been really distracted.
"Right." She сказал(-а) sarcastically. "Because Ты got so much sleep last night."
She had me there. And I was exausted. Sleep would just be very difficult. Never the less, I climbed into bed.
"Will...

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PLEASE ANSWER THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

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So, if Ты have time on your hands, and Ты wanna read what I wrote (which has Вампиры and werewolves, and shapeshifters, witches, etc. (like in the actual series)) then follow this link, and tell me what Ты think in Комментарий if Ты have a Фан fiction account, if not tell me what Ты think down below this! Please do so, I really wanna know if its good или not...thanks for Чтение this and hopefully u follow the link!

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Остаться в живых memories ch 7

posted by SuperFunFan1001

Hi! So I have this fantastic Idea to give Bella a coven. She will meet up with the Cullens again don’t worry, it will just be later on in the story. Hope Ты like it! (If this doesn’t have enough drama then PLEASE tell me how I could add some.) Does it seem like I am making this story go by like way fast? It does to me.
DISCLAMER: I, once again, do not own twilight или any of its characters.

Bella POV
I stayed in the clearing for who knows how long when I heard it. The sound was horrible… a high pitched screaming sound.
I followed it.

The sound led me to find a large red-brown волк towering...

b5!!

posted by weluvB5

Iight my name is jocelyn! i luv b5! bryan is ma fav! i wish i could meet him and have conversation with him dhat wuld be extra raw! omg i wannna meet him so badly! but i also wanna meet da rest of b5! i luv dem ALL!

mY NAME NAOMI AND I AM PRACTICLY IN LUV WIT PATRICK!! oMG HE SO SEXi!!! i WISH i COULD TALK TO DEM SOMED день AND i'D LUV IF день CUD CUM TO cHI~TOWN 1 день AND HAV A CONSERT. iF THEY PERFORMED 4 ONE OF MY B-DAY PARTYS ID PROBABLY FAINT!! aNYWAY I LUV ALL OF B5 THEY GREAT SINGA AND день A CUTE BUT I LUV PATRICK DA MOST. mE AND MY FRIEND JOCELYN WANNA MEET THEM SO BADD!! wE LUV B5!!!

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Edward moment (Edwards POV) This is Edward in Italy (IMO)

posted by tayandkris4evr

The moment I left Bella, I've been hurting. This pain is like nothing I've felt before. Not having her overwelming scent that scorched my throat and cleared my stone lungs by me.
I booked a hotel room in Italy. Close to the Volturi. The days I was away from Bella felt empty and lifeless as they were before she came along. Yet, still, there were points of reason to stay alive. In this ink pool of life that hangs above our heads. I see shining points of reason to keep my pressence on this Earth. At this very moment, Bella is with Jacob. That stupid mutt. Deceasing him would lead Bella in the...

Red Chapter 5

posted by Twilight597

a/n umm...yeah someone прокомментировал(-а) and it made me happy..thanks! so heres chapter 5, and the Далее one isnt done yet, but it will prolly be done 2maro this ones kinda long too...
~Daniella

Chapter 5

Laurent grabbed me, and I gasped in shock. The Далее thing I knew we were standing Далее to the end of the clearing following the one named Carlisle and Esme. I don’t know what we were doing, but I was scared. Laurent followed them up to a giant house. Once again, I was thrown over his shoulder and on my feet. I screamed and fell down again, because it was so abrupt and it scared me.

“You сказал(-а) Ты were...

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Bellas Worst Nightmare-Chpt 8

posted by twilight_james

I woke up. Charlie was out. Good. That meant I could get this done so much easier. I grabbed a bite of тост and ran out the door. I knew that I couldn't phase, Sam couldn't possibly allow this. I felt like I was abandoning my pack, but I couldn't live without Edward. I knew that if he died, I would as well-wheather it be by the Volturi, или my pack, или the Cullens.
I hadn't seen how fast I was travelling, but i looked up and I was at the Cullen house. I thanked my luckly stars that Edwards bedroom was on the first story, otherwise it would raise no amount of wuestions as to how I got up to...

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Chapter Fifteen of Blood Lust by BuffyFaithfan1

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

{Hope Ты all had a WONDERFUL Thanksgiving Holday!!! And I hope Ты all ate ENOUGH turkey so Ты dont have to look at it for the Далее month! XD Please enjoy and comment!!! :)-BuffyFaithfan1}

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Chapter Fifteen: In Which We Stay At A Hotel
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An original quote by BuffyFaithfan1
"When someone's life hangs in the balance...what do Ты do to save that person? When life becomes a struggle, does that mean it's an easier way 2 give up on life? или is it a sign to do harder and succeed...

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What Would Have Been Chapter 13

posted by genyva

13. Reason

I felt rushed suddenly like I couldn't unbuckle fast enough. Here I was seeing Alice for the first time in 11 years. For a секунда I wondered how much she changed but then realized my dumb accusation. I redid the checklist in my head. Aly is безопасно, сейф with Charlie and Sue at Billy's house having a рыба Fry. Jacob is with them and he knows I'm getting my hair colored ad I сказал(-а) I would try to come back once I'm done. I looked in the back сиденье, место, сиденья at the bags of cloths for seeing Jacob and hanging with Alice. I changed right after I talked to Jacob and now I'm here.

I opened the door and smiled....

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IMPORTANT - STOP PETITIONING FOR MIDNIGHT SUN!!!

posted by 2468244

this is very important:
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Stephenie Meyer сказал(-а) that just because we keep wanting her to keep Письмо Midnight Sun is doesn't mean that she's going to. She сказал(-а) that SHE WILL NOT keep Письмо if we keep making petitions for her to keep Письмо или for her to Опубликовать it. so by doing this we are killing our chances of having Midnight Sun published. So please stop petitioning!