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posted by MadisonAmpt
Having trouble. but this is a long one

I woke up on a hard freezing cold floor with a killer head ache. i slowly got up and stood there waiting for the dizziness to go away. Its pitch black i cant see a thing, am i dead? what the hell happened? where am i? i have a thousand Вопросы running through my head and i dont have an answer for any of them. I decided i had been standing here for long enough and started to walk around, until i ran straight into a Стена and fell right on my bum. "Shit" i whispered under my breath. i got up and felt the Стена with my hands. i kept walking wile tracing my fingers along the Стена looking for an exit. i hadn't been walking for long and already i had felt the four corners of this room. "great im in a box" i mumbled,the dizziness came back and this nausea rolled over me and i vomited on the floor before passing out.

i woke up lying face first in my vomit. "yuck" i screamed and sat up, then the door suddenly flew open. i couldn't see much but his eyes were so bright.I cant be imagining this they look so real! he has bright red eyes! i screamed my lungs out, but out of no where his hand was holding my mouth shut "We can do this the easy way или the hard way" he сказал(-а) in his deep hard voice. he removed his hand way from my mouth so i could speak "who the hell are Ты and where the hell am i" i screamed he just laughed and bent over so he was inches away from me "ok so let me get this straight, so Ты dont have to learn the hard way" he started to say but i was getting impatient.So i got up and tried to run, but i hardly moved when his strong firm hand was around my neck lifting me up off the ground. i could hardly breath. "i сказал(-а) Ты could learn this the hard way или the easy way, but im guessing your picking the hard way" he yelled "and im fine with that" he laughed wile throwing me across the room and hitting my back on the hard rock wall. i was on my hands and knees gasping for air but he was already there pulling my hair up so i could look into his eyes "so are Ты ready now или do Ты want to get playing?"he asked. i could hardly talk my throat was killing me! i had excruciating pain running up and down my back and my head was going to explode. "well" he asked again wile slapping my face. i was unable to scream but i had tears running down my face.I couldn't bare the pain. its eating me alive.He was still staring at me with angry eyes. i nodded through the pain and the picked me up, throwing me over his shoulder and walked out the door, hitting my head on the way out.I flinched at the pain and screamed but that only made matters worst. He started to squeeze my leg so hard i could feel him breaking my skin, and his nails digging right into my leg. i squeezed my eyes shut and slapped my hands over my mouth and tried not to scream but i was crying myself a river. What did i do to deserve this? I felt the blood running down my face and leg."Hmmm she smells nice" i heard another voice sigh.Then he looked at me "Damm Demetri did Ты lose your temper?" he laughed. "well she didn't listen, how was yours?" Demetri replied "oh she is fine" he сказал(-а) in an evil voice making me flinch " and Aro wants to see her" he сказал(-а) wile disappearing into thin air.We kept walking through this tunnel then stop to open what sounded like a door.Then we continued the door slammed shut and i got thrown on the floor. i tried to catch my self but my wrists went from under me and i heard a snap.I screamed and fell face first onto the floor. im not sure how long i can kept up with this pain. it was everywhere now. i felt like it was taking over. i rolled over and saw these three guys sitting in thrown's? They looked very ancient and dressed in black robes. The oldest looking one got up and walked over to me "Now what do we have here?"he asked wile boring his milky eyes into me.
1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt еще about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...
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posted by patrisha727
For certain comments, *winks* I thought who should be Bella's roommate. I hope Ты like the idea! ^_^


The dorm was larger than expected. My eyes were wide with shock. I'm not even sure this is a dorm! It could be as large as my living room back in Phoenix. There was one large white диван, мягкий уголок in the center of the room in front of me facing the wall. On the Стена was a flat screen TV. I check the number on the dorm. Room 34. Yeah, I'm in the right room. Is this the type of dorm that everyone has? On the left side on the room was one twin-sized постель, кровати and on the right, was another twin sized bed. Under...
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Chapter 8- Big News

January 1920

I had been feeling very under the weather lately. I was surprised... Charles hadn't hurt me at all since his arrival home. To tell the truth everything about him had changed. He seemed to truly care about my well being. Something I'd never thought I would see. This morning I told him I wasn't feeling well. He made an appointment with the doctor. Again... this doctor was nothing like the one human being I truly longed to see. Dr. Cullen. My personal angel.

I sighed at the moment I was at the doctors office waiting for the results of my many tests. There were a...
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posted by Alice_Cullen_
Newcomer to the Twilight saga, Jamie Campbell-Bower, dished to MTV about why New Moon will have a PG-13 rating. It isn't all because of shirtless hunks Taylors Lautner and Robert Pattinson, but due to some good lookin' naked guys:

" 'We just all sit there, completely naked, for one scene," revealed "New Moon" actor Jamie Campbell Bower, talking about a racy moment that was added into the upcoming film. "Yeah, it's me, Michael Sheen and Christopher [Heyerdahl]; we just sit there, naked'...

In actuality, the scene has a fully clothed Carlisle visiting the Volturi in Italy, only to locate Aro, Caius and Marcus in a bathhouse. 'It's a full-body shot, and then Peter comes in, and it all gets a bit awkward,' Bower said. "[Carlisle] is clothed completely. They're bathing in sort of a Roman bath kind of thing.' "
posted by rose_emmett
Okay so I think the Далее 2 chapters are going to be in Renesmee's POV. I dont really know what else to say so ENJOY!



Renesmee's POV:

Since I still had an час until I had to meet him at the пляж, пляжный I didnt rush. I walked slowly through the forest listening to the birds and admiring the trees and other plants. As I walked I came across my dad and Carlisle walking back towards the house. I didnt pay any attention to them, I just kept walking.

When I finally made it to the пляж, пляжный it was about 6:45 and I didnt think Jake would be there already but he was sitting on the sand facing the ocean.

As I walked...
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posted by TwilytCraze247
chapter one. unlawful death

It had been a warm день for Rochester. But not warm enough for the sun to come out. I was in a happy and in an up right mood, but why wouldn’t I be, it was a couple days from marrying my fiancé Royce, he came from a wealthy, and respectable family my father had chosen for me. It was only right Royce and I was betrothed together. It was all about how the public viewed the family, I was told that from my mother at a very young age, I was also told that I would make the family very pleased when I was older as I would be the most beautiful girl in all of the world and...
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posted by rose_emmett
This story is about Renesmee and Jacob's relationship. Renesmee is full grown now and of course Jacob hasnt aged. There is still a treaty so the cullens cant go on la push. The cullens left to go to college and Jacob and Renesmee havent seen each other in a long time. This is my first story so it might not be all that good, but i still hope everyone will enjoy it.



Jacob's POV:

I walked down to the пляж, пляжный and found the old piece of drift wood Bella and I used to sit on. I sat there for a momment remembering all the things we had talked about, but then my mind traveled off to thinking about Renesmee....
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
As i look out one of the planes windows, my mind shifts from one thought to the next. My new life ahead of me is strangely different. But as hard as I try I can't be excited. Ever since my parents deaths two weeks ago, my joy has been taken away. I haven't even seen my grandparents in five years.

"We will be landing in just a few minutes. Please fasten your сиденье, место, сиденья belts. If Ты are returning Главная then we welcome Ты back, if Ты are visiting we hope Ты enjoy your visit to Washington." I hear the captains voice boom throughout the plane.

Landing gives me all but joy. As I get off the plane...
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 THE сердце IS SO EASILY BROKEN
THE HEART IS SO EASILY BROKEN
This is my own version , I hope Ты like it and please remember to Комментарий
P.s. The beginning in italics is a flashback .





************Bella's POV**********

He took a deep breath and stared, unseeingly, at the ground for a long moment. His mouth twisted the tiniest bit. When he finally looked up, his eyes were different, harder-like the liquid Золото had Холодное сердце solid.

"Bella, I dont want Ты to come with me."


He spoke the words slowly and precisely, his cold eyes on my face, watching as I absorbed what he was really saying.
There was a pause as I repeated the words in my head a few times, sifting...
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posted by renesmeblack
15. Problems
Jacob




Renesmee stared at me while I glared at Mark. He has been messing with this family for too long. I really wanted to tear him to shreds. Then the unexpected happened. I started to walk towards Mark when I was blown back by an invisible force.
"Don't. Touch. MARK!!!" Karrie screamed at me. I flew into Edward. Both of us were on the floor, and then we were in the air.
"Karrie, stop, you're killing them!" Renesmee yelled.
I heard myself choking and it looked like Edward was burning. But there was nothing to harm us. No flame was covering Edward, and nothing was around my throat.
"I'm......
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posted by team_robward
Chapter 14.
New Arrivals:

I just sat there for a couple of minutes, Чтение that last paragraph over and over I was truly mesmerized by it. I couldn’t really get over how sweet it was no one ever talked to me like this and he’s handwriting also helped.
“When you’ve finished Чтение the letter please write a reply, this is the third last reply we’ll be doing in class” Mrs Anderson announced. The class began groaning. The noise woke me from my dazzled state.
“Well Ты honestly didn’t think we were only Письмо to pen pals for the rest of the term did you?” Mrs Anderson asked the...
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Okay, Here's all 8 of my chapters + my two Любовь stories.
[:

I've decided to make all my Twilight story chapters into a book like thing, So that's why i put them all together in this, I'm naming it "Breaking Twilight."
i was also thinking "Breaking Eclipse"
but I'm still thinking, but yeah.
I'm glad everyone likes my story! x]
theres еще coming!
-Yuki <3

Chapter One: The Game.

It was
Saturday evening, I was sitting on one of the couches in my new family’s house,
I was waiting for Edward to come back with Renesmee или as everyone else liked to call
her “Nessie” which I was getting used to by know....
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posted by renesmeblack
11. Casper's Fate
Renesmee




I couldn't help but cry. Aro has my baby, who may be one of the best weapons he's ever had, through his eyes. или he may be used as bait to kidnap the rest of us. Casper was going to live as part of the Volturi. Mark paced in the hall, trying to find where Casper was. Jacob had broken at least ten water glasses when he got a drink.
Now I was curious what he was looking for in the fridge. He came back with two bottles of formula.
"We have to feed the kids," he explained. Karrie rushed up to him and took the розовый bottle from his hand. After one sip, she threw the bottle...
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Эй, everybody. sorry its taken so long i've had quite a lot to do. its not long but i hope Ты like it anyway :) Cari i hope the last bits okay Ты logged off when i needed the answer so i just went with my instincts, i hope thats fine with you??

part 3
Carlisle wasn’t listening to much of our conversation. He seemed preoccupied in his own thoughts.
“Are Ты okay?” I asked him. Edward suddenly let out a growl, letting go of my waist, he stalked out.
“What’s the matter?” Emmett asked.
“I know who’s after us.” Carlisle сказал(-а) dully.
“Who?” Esme pleaded.
“Victoria’s sister,...
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Chapter 16: Unspoken избранное (Jake's POV)

As I was about to take my anger out on Edward, a crushing thought came into my mind.
My voice was unsteady. “I told her she would be ok… I knew all along that this was a bad idea and I went along with it. It’s all my fault… and here I am blaming everyone else. I’m sorry.” My head was spinning I had to get out of there. As I headed for the stairs a strange beeping started up in Amore’s room. A strange сердце began to beat furiously. I paused where I stood about to head down the stairs. I slowly turned around ignoring everyone else as...
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Эй, guys!!
So I kinda let the idea sit around for a couple days and now have a total of 7 people who would be interested in Письмо a piece for the contest.

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twilightGGlost
Edward_Bella234
_madz_
patrisha727
jamie_kataeff
Twilight597
dinosteph
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I am going to give this Список another 24 hours and then tomorrow night I will post word limits, themes, and how judging is going to work. I'll let Ты know right now that we're going to keep it short, probably around 1500 words.
posted by twilight-7
I stared at Alice, convinced I’d misheard what she just said. She’d seen Charlie? That was impossible....no one could see him. Not with the Shadow Hunters there. But Mitchell сказал(-а) the Shadow Hunters were gone. So that means Alice can see him.
I smiled widely and jumped with happiness. Mitchell stood up slowly, finding it hard to believe too.
“What did Ты see?” we both asked together.
She frowned then, looking up at Edward. He nodded once. I hated that. She was asking him permission to tell me. Why did people do that? Edward wasn’t my owner. They could tell me anything they wanted to,...
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posted by _madz_
okay guys, this is really short. im sorry, i've just had no time this week. please tell me what Ты think anyway :)


part 22
“If there was only some way to make Ты see that I can’t leave you.” I whispered. “Time, I suppose, will be the way to convince you.”
The corner of her mouth pulled up slightly. The idea must have pleased her. “Okay.” She сказал(-а) agreeably.
I was glad to see her happier again but the pain was still flowing through me at full force.
A questioning look came into her eyes before she asked “So—since you’re staying. Can I have my stuff back?” she spoke in...
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posted by AdaLove
Laurent was an original member of James' coven. When James and Victoria chose to hunt Bella Swan, Laurent told the Cullens everything about them.
After this, Laurent went to live with the Denali Coven; despite living with "vegetarian" vampires, Laurent cheated the diet as evidenced by his red irises.

******Death*******

When Bella visited Edward's meadow, Laurent stumbled across her, having returned to Forks as a scout for the vengeful Victoria. He attempted to kill Bella (he was currently hunting when he found her) and he reasoned that being killed by him was a better fate than being found by...
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Hey. two in one day! Here’s the Далее part.

part 2
“Are Ты okay?” esme asked
“no.” I replied holding Edward.
“What’s the matter Bella”” jasper asked.
I let go of Edward and turned towards the rest of my family. All of them had their faces full of worry. I couldn’t hurt them again, this is my last time I told myself. I took a deep breath that whizzed down my throat. “ I’m so sorry.” I told them” I’ve put Ты in danger again.”


Part three.
“Well there’s no surprise there then.” Emmett chuckled. Rosalie threw a look of pure disbelief I his direction. Emmet shut...
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