This is the Twilight fanfic story I'm working on. I just finished the first chapter.Hope Ты guys like it and let me know what Ты think in Комментарии =)
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the Любовь of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he сказал(-а) quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her сиденье, место, сиденья and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle сказал(-а) worried.
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the Любовь of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he сказал(-а) quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her сиденье, место, сиденья and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle сказал(-а) worried.
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