Эй, this is the first chapter of a story i m writing. if u like it comment! if ppl like it i'll post more!

I was walking outside of my house when I saw him. He was unloading a moving фургон, ван across the улица, уличный with who looked like his father. His hair was a glistening golden-red color. I completely froze. I was stunned by the beauty that was standing a few yards away from me.
He caught me staring, causing my face to turn a bright shade of red. I could tell he was laughing at my cherry-colored face.
I rushed into my house almost running my face into the door, because I didn't unlock the door fast enough for the speed I was wanting to go.
I ran up the stairs into my bedroom on the секунда floor. I looked out the window to see if her was still laughing. He had a smile on his face as he caught my eye in the window. He gave a slight wave, and I quickly shut the curtains. My сердце was flying.
I saw the moving фургон, ван pull away, so I decided now was as good a time as any to come down from my room.
"Melissa? Is that you?" my mother called from the kitchen.
"Yeah mom. What's up?" I сказал(-а) walking into the kitchen. My mom was holding a bowl of Еда with tin foil on it. She grabbed her пальто and shoes and turned to me.
"Do Ты want me to go to the new neighbors house? I am going to give them some of my макаронные изделия, макароны salad." she сказал(-а) grabbing the doorknob.
"Um, sure." I сказал(-а) trying to cover my excitement and nervousness.
We walked across the улица, уличный and up the steps of the old blue house. My mom tapped lightly on the door. Nervousness completely consumed me as the door opened.