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I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be

I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have Опубликовано it over there too.

here are Ссылки to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. Ты will recognize many scenes I kept. Ты will notice some things that I have combined. Ты will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.

There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for...

First of all, DO NOT READ THIS IF Ты HAVEN'T READ THE KAYLA SERIES FIRST!
Second, this is sequel to Kayla which is entitled Kayla's Secret.
The sequel is set nearly a год ahead, not far from graduation. As Ты should all know, Kayla is a год younger than the rest of her год so do not tell me that she should be eighteen because she shouldn't be. If Ты do not live in England Ты will have to trust me on this one.
I will not be posting the stories on as fast as the first series because the sequel is harder to write. There will be a lot еще detail involved plus a lot еще thinking. I will try...

I untangled myself in the graceful knot that Edward and I got in. Last night was 1 of the most amasing nights of my life and Edward wouldnt let me forget it. I looked around to see what happened to my night платье, бальное платье and again it was in shreds on the ground.
"Seriously Edward? how many gowns do Ты need to rip before Ты notice that I can't look sexy if Ты keep ripping everything i own." I nearlyshouted but i couldnt because Emmett and the rest of the family was at the Cullens house which was over a brook a quarter mile from here. And Renesmee was over there sleeping over with Alice she would...

“I thought Ты сказал(-а) she was fine.”
“She is.”
“Why isn’t she waking up?”
“Give her time, Edward. Her body needs to recover.”
I was on the edge of consciousness. Just before I opened my eyes. I hated that part. All of your senses come back at once and bombard you. I recognised the voices that were speaking Далее to me. I think they were discussing me. But if it was me, what did my body need to recover from?
“It is all gone, isn’t it, Carlisle?” Edward sounded hesitant, unsure.
“I am positive,” Carlisle said, in his calm and reassuring voice. “Jasper got rid of all the venom,...

Sorry this one is so short and it took so long to put up. like i сказал(-а) i'm a horrible typer.

Chapter Three- Stranger

    The душ was hot. I didn’t take long because I knew he was waiting. When I got out there was a bandage on the sink counter. Supposedly he left this for my head. I put it on the cut carefully, so it wont smell as good to him. I’d have to be careful on cutting myself around him. As I walked back to the диван, мягкий уголок to find Keith looking at the food.
    When he saw me walk in he said, ”How do Ты stand eating this?” I shrugged, “ I...

“Sleep, my love.” I whispered softly in her ear.
“Stay.” She pleaded like a child. My lifeless сердце doesn’t seem so lifeless anymore. It swelled with hope. She still wants me to stay – with her.

A soft sob escaped her lips. She was trying hard to be tough.

“Shhh…I’ll be here with you, Bella, I promise.” I сказал(-а) soothingly – ALWAYS, FOREVER, As long as she wants me to. I won’t leave her anymore.

I brushed her hair away from her face and gently kissed her cheek. I hummed the lullaby I made for her. After a couple of bars, her breathing became even. Her lips slightly parted....

I know this is short but I didn't have a lot of time. I had stuff to do but Ты don't want to hear about it. I will write a longer part for Chapter 26. Enjoy! (And just something else, I appreciate and value all of Ты Комментарии and opinions but please don't say Ты hate my fictional characters. They don't like it and neither do I. Thank you!)


I threw my arms around his neck and kissed his snowy lips. He wrapped his arms around my waist and picked me up and kissed me back. The passion that was behind that kissed only proved to me еще that he loved me. I couldn’t believe that I had doubted...

today was terrible,slow,depressing.i had just found out my baby died.i plan to jump of a cliff in la push.it was raing when i started to drive.but then the rain cleared so i could jump.nobody noticed.i looked like any normal cliff diver.i jumped i head first.i hit the water.the waves were thrashing me in and out,back and forth.but i hit a rock.i was o.k.the waves were getting worse.i hit my head on another rock.i blacked ourt.i was dead.or,was i?i woke in a постель, кровати souronded by police officers."hope dr.cullen gets here fast."one said.who's dr.cullen?"oh!dr.cullen,her she is.could Ты take over...

"Sometimes Любовь isn't enough"

Those were the last words I ever heard Jacob Black say. At first, I didn’t care. For three years I didn’t care. I was too dark and thirsty to care about any of my past. I almost forgot some of it. I almost forgot him.

It’s been ten years and those fears of mine came true. The Volturi wanted me to Присоединиться them and I refused. But they didn’t play nice. No, they didn’t, not at all. Instead of letting me walk away, sorry that I had refused their offer, they gave me an ultimatum. Either I joined them или the Cullen’s died. This time, they didn’t find a way out....

This is my first Twilight Фан fiction. I started Письмо it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started Письмо it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.


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Unchained Melody

“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped или screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide...