Edward

End of Chapter 9:

“Its fine Love, Let’s get back and figure this out. Love, Ты know Ты can talk to me about anything right?”
    “Yes I know. I just needed time to think without having to worry about Jasper felling my Emotions или Everyone looking at me and I think the family needed Ты and Neisse needs Ты to pick her up so I thought Ты were needed there еще than here with me.”
“Okay but don’t be scared to ask to talk. Let’s get Главная until Neisse gets very worried and Alice and Emmet come looking for us.” He сказал(-а) with a make shudder .I laughed.
    “Okay....

When Ты really think about it, Twilight consists of 50% talk about how hot Edward is. 30% of the word "chagrin" and 20% other. Even my English teacher сказал(-а) that it's written at a 5th grade Чтение level, to which I completely agree. Bella and Edward aren't "in love" all they're experiencing is lust, obsession, infatuation. What good does Edward do to Bella? The whole time Ты hear about how perfect he is. It's easy to make a perfect character, anyone can do it. Besides, according to SMeyer, Bella is an "independent woman." Well, how is she independent? All of her decisions are based on Edward...

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella Ты finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see Ты vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend или something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella Ты were sleeping here for 100 years!and now Ты finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I сказал(-а) and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how Ты do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm Цвета like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my...

I've got writers block. NO! And the world comes crashing down around me :(

No really I do have writers block. Письмо this chapter was hard so, I hope it turned out good!

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When we got into Alice's car she was about to burst. I could just tell that she wanted to know everything that had happened when she was gone. And knowing Alice, she wouldn't be happy until she knew every last detail.

"So tell me, how did it go?" Alice сказал(-а) while trying not to sound too anxious.

"AMAZING!" I blurted out before I could contain myself....

The Character

Name: Riley

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: None

About Them: Riley was among the first humans that Victoria changed into a vampire as she formed her army. Victoria convinced Riley that she loved him and convinced him to serve her faithfully. Riley's job consisted of corralling the other new vampires, telling them what their mission was, and what they were supposed to do. It was Riley who came into Bella's room to get her scent in Eclipse and spared Charlie's life because he was mature enough to resist a human's blood. It was Riley that had to face Edward in the clearing. Edward tried...

bellas' pov

"if Ты promise to explain yes" i сказал(-а) that made him laugh

"yes i promise i have to tell Ты even though that will mean i will lose you" edwards сказал(-а) and put his hand on my waist and we started to walk into the garden

we walk silently for a while until we arrive to a bench and we sat there

edward look at me and he touch my cheek
"you look extreamly beautiful is not fair" he сказал(-а) and i laugh a little

"look whose talking" i сказал(-а) while i blush an intense red

he look deeply with intensity my eyes my breathing speed and i was getting light headed i had to look away from his golden eyes...

bella's pov

i quickly felt asleep when we arrive Главная
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i was in the woods
i was wearing my Избранное dress it was a white cotton dress i wasn't wearing any shoes and my hair was free the sun make it look like it had red in it and the wind make it Переместить ......
this was my happy place
then i saw that edward was standing by a дерево in the shadows
i run towards him and he open his arms
i jump and hug him tightly he hugg me by the waist also tighlty and sigh happily

"i Любовь Ты edward" i сказал(-а) he smile brightly at me
he Переместить clser until our lips touch when our lips touch i suddenly felt uncomfortable...