Письмо Article: Sorrows BTW THIS IS 6 YRS OLD,

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posted by CullensFinest13

Ты hurt me I hope Ты die I cant belive I trusted Ты I cant belive I loved Ты I cant belive I stayed up and worried that Ты wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved Ты i trusted Ты and cared for you. im tired of Ты its time i let Ты go but your always there Ты wont leave me alone...its time for Ты to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let Ты back in stay out so i can be happy Ты need Ты need to die let me live my own life Ты shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, Ты were a waist of my life. and apart of my сердце im locking Ты out never letting Ты back in Ты should never say anything to me afain i cant belive Ты сказал(-а) that about me i cant understand why i let Ты in the firdt place makes me sick to my stomach i hate life i hate everything about Ты i cant ever talk to Ты normally anymore Ты live far away but i couldnt take it anymore...i used Ты and i got hurt in the process but i dont understand who Ты are anymore ive let Ты go so im going to lock Ты out never come back again...I want to be alone and so i am and im very happy...

im dying inside cause i miss the way Ты spoke in my ear...

Bibelot, rockzsanders and 3 others like this

Dearheart You should have listened better in English class. Your spelling and grammar are atrocious! Tsk tsk tsk... And the content itself is a bit...melodramatic? Splashy? Cliche? Repetitive? Redundant? Whatever the adjective is, it lacks power and true emotion (for the reader at least. I'm sure it felt real to you, but it's just not working for me as a reader. I'm not feeling it). But keep your chin up and keep working on it. Everyone has room to improve, both you and me. And the more we practice, the best we'll get. :-) Good luck!

r-pattz i guess dearheart didnt like it, but i think it was awesome. 5 out of 5. dearheart, i think it being repetitive was part of the point.

CullensFinest13 dearheart. btw this is about 6 yrs old. thanks asshole =]

Dearheart Thanks for telling me it was 6 years old in the first place, lol. You're welcome! (Ooh, never been called that one before...I kinda like it, actually. It's spicy.) =D How about we stop the name-calling and over-critical comments, cease fire and go sign a peace treaty? What do you say? *offers a chocolate chip cookie? And a handshake? And a cute smiley face?*

Primrose High: Chapter 5: Lost?

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

HIII, WELL WHAT HAS BEEN HAPPENING? ROBYN, RICK, JADEN EVEAN JOCE LILY Rose Zander AND LUKE, HAVE ALL WENT INTO THE WOODLAND TO FIND GEMMA AND BRINGHER HOME, BUT WILL THEY ALL MAKE IT BACK OUT?

I woke up groggily, and was startled when i felt someones arms around my waist, i gently rubbed my hands tentively up then. Jaden. He has to Переместить before anyone wakes up, i turned onto my other side so that i was facing him, "Jaden," i Whispered shaking him slightly, he snorted and opened his eyes, he seemed surprised to see me like i had, "You have to go back to where Ты where, if they see Ты the...

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.11]

posted by HarryPLover

"Aymen."
I finished my prayer and hopped into bed. I was just completely exhausted. So I wouldn't think about how much I missed Matt I kept myself busy. Though it was keeping me busy it mad me very tired. Matt had only been gone 3 days though. Meaning, four еще to dread. All I could do was sleep.
The Далее morning wasn't as quite, или as awful. I had gotten up way to early and figured I could watch some television. It was 4 in the morning; and just as I was falling asleep to Spongebob's voice a noise came from my computer went off. I skipped to the computer hoping it was Matthew. But, to my surprise...it...

Anoxia- Ch. 4

posted by Percysclique

Chapter 4- Near Death at Dawn
Princess Amorite woke to the sound of bells ringing throughout the castle. The warning bells. The guards knew Kaolin was missing.
Amorite’s сердце began to beat faster. It was beating to the rhythm of Kaolin running quickly out of the dungeon hours ago. She feared her сердце would leap right out of her chest. If the soldiers found Kaolin, he would be killed. Amorite couldn’t let that happen.
Outside the sun was starting to rise. Kaolin was probably almost out of the city.
Amorite had been Kaolin’s best friend since...

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Misty forest

posted by irena83

Throughout misty forest
Ты seek for spark of hope.
Your life held by
darkness thoughts,
anchor is
some place else.

Bad luck follows Ты
like a hook,
won't let Ты go,
won't leave Ты alone.

Ты smile today,
and cry whole eternity,
like that's your fate,
disturbing thoughts
to lie inside of you,
to take away everything
that Ты hope for.

Devil is calling your name,
leaves Ты not,
Ты don't see the Энджел on
your shoulder,
trying to give Ты a strength.

Ты long for life
that Ты don't know of,
Ты seek for peace,
trying to get away
from misty forest
that stains your heart
into black.

A girl called Hayly chp1 Something different?

posted by house_of_nightx

Hayly's gucci boots

this is my first marvel fanfiction.i have a great idea and i hope u like it - charly x

Hayly's P.O.V

I guess your wondering what this story is about well its my story.My name is Hayly McCarthy and i was just a normal kid living in London,England that was until the last week of my 10th год of school when i found out i was different than my friends,family and other students.

"Hayly wake up your going to be late for school." my mom called up the stairs.I moaned and forced myself out of bed,i took and душ and got ready for school.Today i decided to wear my rolling stones вверх with my cut off skinny...

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Away - Chapter 1

posted by AvaMarch

Away, I ran. Not caring about how cold it was или how bad my chest ached. All I knew was to run. To run fast and long. To get as far away as possilbe. My face and arms were getting sliced with passing branches but I didn't care. My legs carrying me further into the dark forest. My mind tried to process what had just happened, but I was still in shock. Both of my parents had just been murdered. And my father's last words were "Run, Lester, run." As any child, (I hope) I obeyed my father's last wishes, I ran. I didn't know if the murderers were after me или not. It didn't matter.
It was the middle...

Gilbert's Story Part 1

posted by grissomsgirl

This isn't a timeline story Gilbert is three and this is my first try at fanfiction, so please be gentle!

All C.S.I. characters owned by CBS except for Grissom Junior, he's mine, I hope!

Hello my name is Gilbert Arthur Grissom Junior and this is my story, I was born three years назад in San Francisco to my mother Sara who was all alone at the time of my arrival, as I grew up Mommy kept making references to my father whom she wanted to either strangle for the lack of help или Kiss him senseless, neither of which I understand about as I'm only three. Anyway after turning three that August I started...

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.4]

posted by HarryPLover

I can began to see the side view mirrors fog up as I sit alone the car. Matt was still in the front yard, pacing back and forth, and back and forth. A part of me just wanted him to get in the car already but the other part of me just wanted to stay alone. As I began to get Остаться в живых in my thought I saw the car door open. Matt got in and didn’t bother to turn on the car. he didn’t look at me and I didn’t look at him. He finally turned on the car…slowly..but he turned it on. He sighed low enough for me not start the conversation. As he pulled out and started off on the road I just looked out...

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch. 1]

posted by HarryPLover

The roar of the cafeteria was getting out of hand. Some teens screaming in horror. Others encouraging the fight. Some just speechless. i tried my hardest to push through the crowd to see what was going on. I heard the chanting of kids saying “FightFight!” Along with my best friend’s name somewhere in there in that chant. Matthew never learned. Matthew is my best friend and he can never seem to stop and think before doing something. He speaks his mind too quickly and always thinks that people should either put up или shut up. I’m not surprised that he would think that, I mean boys will...

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Just another Crush Chapter 1

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

I look around the almost empty room that is only filled with my Queen sized постель, кровати and стол письменный, стол with my laptop on it. I sit on the edge of my постель, кровати and свинг, качели my feet. I look down at the Converse’s on my feet. When I look up Gabriel’s standing in the door way. “Big house huh” he asks? “Yea.” “I figure well find a way to make it homey.” Gabriel and his optimisticness. He sits Далее to me on the edge of my постель, кровати and I lay my head on his shoulder and touch his flaxen blonde hair and rub his tan skin that matches my own. “Keaira it’s going to be ok mom at least talked Damon into coming with...

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Nick & Grace: Chapter Nine

posted by CullenProperty

Lola. I haven't сказал(-а) much about Lola. And now that she's gone, it's like . . . well, it's like I don't have to say anything about her. Like all the memories, great times, funny sayings that were made up along with her have now vanished. I didn't even go to her funeral. What kind of friend am I? How dissapointed her parents probably are of me. I don't know what I'm supposed to do, I'm too embarrassed to go over to their house and talk about their dead daughter. I don't know what I'd do if they came over here; What would I say? "I'm sorry about your daughter, my best friend. She was like a sister...

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Nick & Grace: Chapter Four

posted by CullenProperty

It's our week for spring break and I've thought about calling Nick, but every time I dial his number, that's all I do, I always hang up. Sometimes I just hold the phone in my hands and it never makes it to my ear.
But, one день my little Volkswagen breaks down and since dad doesn't know anything about automobiles, we have to take it Luy's Магазин - the place Nick works.
I drive our old Chevy, towing my bug to Luy's with Dad and he unhitches it when we get there.
"Grace, I gotta get to work, maybe Nick can bring Ты home," dad says, looking tentifully at the гараж part of the shop.
"But dad, what...

Making Memories: Chapter 3

posted by dancing_banana

Peter
After that argument everything changes. She’s always in my mind, always. Maybe she really was right I mean what she сказал(-а) about things getting better makes sense even if it’s hard to. Life is hard, she was right. I mean Carl and Anne aren’t so bad. Having the other kids in the house isn’t that bad either. I just can’t get Kristen out of my head, she reached out to me and cared when no one else did, because of her I don’t feel like I’m losing it all the time. Every time I see her at school I hide behind the crowds, I’ll admit I’m ashamed of hiding...

The 3 Розы (copaticion Entrey)

posted by Cries_Bloodlova

as i stand by the babbling brook i have 3 Розы in my hand. Red Black n White. i Start to think, Why would i need theese 3 things, i dont. Each Rose Stand 4 sumthing, i Throw The red rose first,its for my love.Then its the blk Rose, for my heart, last a White one,for my soul, none of these do i need. 4 i am dead useless apon This Earth These 3 Розы i No longer need. i watch as The Rose get torn up. my Любовь Then my сердце then my Soul. Dead but alive. Yrs Past n i am now 54. the Red rose Grows n n now placed in my living room. The blk rose grows n is now over my bed, the White one,O so rare...

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Hunter

posted by Cutebutcrazy--

Ummmm. Sorry it's another vampire/ vampire hunter story. But its something ive been working on for like 3 years and i want to see what people think before sending it off to get published. So once again sorry and bare with me.

Dear Whoever.
1864. That’s when all of the problems started but of course I wasn’t born yet. So I can’t tell Ты what happened then. I can tell Ты that it still affects me today. That’s why I’m here. So I can tell Ты my part in this.
I was born into a rich, and royal family daddy’s daddy hit it big in the oil field. At least that’s...

To Live, A Nightmare Indeed: Entry Two

posted by AliceKinsley

January 16, 1815

Journal,
    We have gotten fortunate, Journal! Nastea has found coats in the broken down train. She sits by Sasha now, covering her in them. And she took one for herself as well. I can see color returning to Sasha’s cheeks. Nastea coughs harshly, shivering nervously. Her toes are turning blue, and one has already fallen off. We slept in the train last night, getting as much warmth as we could. We have to start to Переместить tomorrow, find shelter. The berries Nastea fed Sasha seem to have made Sasha a lot sicker than she was before. She’s coughing up blood now. The snow around her is stained with red and pink. I attempted to make a огонь earlier, and let me tell Ты journal, it didn’t work out. It’s much to cold to start flames. For every time the огонь ignites, it extinguishes, the harsh winds blowing it out. I’m losing my teeth, journal. Nastea can’t talk anymore, and her and Sasha’s hair is mostly gone. Journal, what’s happening to us?
    Bye Journal,
        Nadia

Ellie's life in Califorina

posted by Charlieminster

“Uh, Monday mornings” Ellie groaned. She got out of постель, кровати slowly and looked at the clock, 10 o’clock, she had half an час to get dressed and walk across campus to her first lecture of the day. Ellie put on her Избранное pair of gray skinny jeans, a black t-shirt with I Любовь Чтение Готика Книги written on it, a pair of red all звезда Converse and a bag to match. When she walked pass the breakfast bar she picked up her English and History book and her pencil case and put them in to her bag with her кошелек and phone.
The Ellie made her way across...

The Pookie

posted by kitsine

The Pookie

The pookie fell from a дерево
upon hitting the ground he farted
scared at his own flatulence he tried climbing up the tree. But for every branch he grabbed he tooted. and for every twig he broke, he farted.

farting all the way up, pookie climed that tree. He had to make it to the вверх Ты see, cause that where pookie's make pee. Relief was almost in reach for pookie. till a stiring occurred within.. a rumbling sensation, and pookie knew.. with a tear, that he couldn't hold it in.

Till this день those who were near сказал(-а) it sounded like a cow mooing. The momentum of his farts became like a rocket and shot pookie up and out that tree! Up in to the sky..till pookie could not be seen.

moral of story? dont eat beans. O_o

Далее chapter "The pookie Returns"

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Immortal

posted by cutiegirl01

I was sitting on the sand down by the пляж, пляжный listening to my cousin Lora babble on about why she had believed in something I can’t remember. I was just staring at the clouds that had rain coming out of it. I was watching how every time I looked at them they seemed to get darker each time.
Then I felt someone push me onto my back and I heard Lora say, “You’re not listening to me.”
“Of coarse I am Lora the last thing Ты сказал(-а) was that Ты think that they are horrible things that shouldn’t be alive.” I guessed “Lucky guess. Don’t look...

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A LIFE WITH A VIEW

posted by juicyjossy9

Think
See
Remember

If we compare the world with a village of 100 inhabitants, taking into account all components, the village would look like this:

♥ 57 Asians – 21 Europeans
♥ 14 Americans – 8 Africans
♥ 52 women – 48 men
♥ 70 coloured people – 30 white
♥ 70 non-Christians – 30 Christians
♥ 89 straights – 11 homosexuals
♥ 6 people would possess 59% of the total global wealth
♥ 6 people would have U.S. citizenship
♥ 80 would be homeless
♥ 70 would be illiterate
♥ 50 would be dependent on someone else
♥ 1 would be dying
♥ 2 would be born
♥ 1 would have a PC
♥ 1 would...