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The Deadly Bathroom Break (a short story {realistic fiction})

posted by Rae-Ash

There’s nothing I hate еще than being trapped, but that’s exactly what I am. All because of my stupid, small bladder, I just had to go to the bathroom. So I went into the bank to use theirs, because nothing could go wrong, right?

Wrong, which is just my luck. Just as I leave the bathroom a group of guys decide to rob the bank. Just peachy. One of the guys yells at us to get down on the ground and we obey. Then he tells us to give him our phones. Oops. I accidentally left mine in my кошелек in the bathroom. When he gets to me I tell him this, he’s not really happy about this. Now he’s threatening to shoot me if I don’t give it to him, but I can’t give him something I don’t have. Then another of the guys come over and asks what was wrong.

“She says she left her phone and кошелек in the bathroom.”

“Oh, well, she probably did. That’s Энджел and she’s always forgetting something.”

“What! I do not! Anyway, how would Ты know?” I demand.

“We dated just last year. We had a great time, and even learned a few new tricks,” he replies.

“I never, ever дата criminals! Well, except for that one time…..OMG!!! You’re Brian! The s.o.b. that just up and left for no good reason!!!! Ты jerk!” I ground out.

“Let’s go get your кошелек and then we can talk,” he quickly said.

So we retrieved my кошелек and then we went out into the alley at the back of the bank.

“I’m sorry but there’s no other way. Ты know who I am and I cannot allow that,” Brian сказал(-а) as he pulled out a gun.

Then I feel an agonizing pain just a little to the right my left shoulder. Everything goes black as I hear the sirens get closer and hope that they find me in time.

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Sutelc22 god u got such a great imagination.

alicia386 This story makes me wonder what goes on in ur head?!

Rae-Ash thanks, my creative writing teacher said it was evidence of a good imagination but that he worried about what goes on inside of my head

The Gregindorf Prophecies - Prolog

posted by PenelopeWolf1

Prolog;
The Gregindorf Prophecies

"Marinsa," Whispered Yanzo Jamleaf. "Where are Ты hiding?" Yanzo was looking for his friend and leader Marinsa Jackson. She had been in hiding for so long that Yanzo didnt know where she might be.
Marisa had hair so white it looked like a cloud, and eyes so green it looked like a forest. She was small but was fierce.
Yanzo was the opposite; He had black shaggy hair, blue eyes that looked like electric and was tall.
Yanzo heard a crack of leaves and a twig. He turned and saw Marinsa walking towards him.
"Hello my old friend," She сказал(-а) with a small smile.
...

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Stardom Chapter 2 - Elaine and Blaine, Mischievous Twins

posted by Vampiyaa

"This is beautiful!" Aiko breathed. Elaine beamed and laughed, "I knew you'd Любовь it!" Elaine had called Aiko's apartment at five in the morning, telling her (well, еще like yelling at her) to come to a spot in the park. In that spot was a bench facing a brilliant, crystal-clear waterfall that flowed around the bench like a sparkling moat. An authentic wooden bridge with white and blue Розы woven in the railings connected the park with the solitary bench.
"We're going to meet your brother in such a beautiful place?" Aiko gaped.
"Yeah!" Elaine exclaimed, flopping down on the bench and grinning...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 7

posted by Insight357

I saw black sneakers with purple shoestrings. Then tight black pants. Далее a draping black shirt, with small hands covered by fingerless, leather gloves. A пересекать, крест choker sat at the base of her neck. My eyes then fell upon hers. Those eyes, those piercing blue eyes, somewhat similar to my own. The black hair teased slightly, with choppy, side bangs, covering the outer corner of her right eye. It was the girl, from the hallway. The one who thanked me. I gasped softly.
“Hello, Lucy,” I сказал(-а) to her.
“Hello,” she сказал(-а) in the same small voice....

Fairy Tale Chapter 2

posted by bunnibunnibaby

"It's nice here. I don't know many people though..." Victor brushed his hair back, smiling again. "Well, by tomorrow, all of the kids at school will wanna be your friend." "Oh..." Jade turned slightly to see the raven haired boy deep in thought. "What is it?" "Hn? Oh, it's nothing. Oh, we're here." The blonde looked up ahead and saw her house. "Really? Cause my house is right there." She pointed, and Victor burst out laughing. "Haha-I live right Далее to Ты then..." The blonde looked at the house Далее to hers. It seemed normal. A little old fashioned, but definitely normal. "Cool! Well, I'll see Ты tomorrow then?" "Yeah..." The onyx eyed boy took Jade's hand, kissed it lightly, then walked off. "What was that?"

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 5

posted by Insight357

Today was my first день working for the mental institution. I woke around ten, and got a shower. I dressed in my black pants, shoes, and shirt. Over the рубашка was my white doctor’s jacket. The color white didn’t’ suite me, but it’s not like I hade a choice in wearing it.
I walked to work. The asylum was only three blocks away. As I walked I worried over people criticizing me. Or, making fun of me. What if I treated the wrong patient? What if I messed something up? What if I got lost?
My stomach started to tighten as I thought of the day...

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Hells Outlaw - Chapter 15

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 15

Jax felt he had been pounding on the door of Bone’s гараж for an hour. Finally, he heard the click of the lock and they door opened and he was greeted by the barrel of a shotgun.
“Whoa Bone come on its just me,” Jax сказал(-а) quickly with his hands up in surrender as Bone stepped closer to him without lowering his gun.
“Yeah I know it’s you, the hell Ты doin’ here?” Bone replied. His voice was raspy like he had a sore throat.
“I’m not drunk if that’s what you’re thinkin’.”
“No? Then why are Ты here?”
Bone kept his shotgun pointed at Jax.
“Look, I just escaped...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 4

posted by Insight357

    I stood from the brown couch, rubbing my eyes. I had slept on the couch. Grey was mad, and I had been stressed. It was a fight waiting to happen.
    Grey had already left for her job at the pharmacy. She was a secretary. Today, I was going to get my license, to practice psychology.
    I stood from the couch, I was dressed in last night’s clothes. I’d been at the bar, doing текила shots. I was trying to numb my mind from pop-up questions.
    It had been a week since I left the asylum. Since I left Dr. Anozi....

Hells Outlaw - Chapter 12

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 12

The late afternoon sun shined on Koda’s back as he headed further west. Soon the sun would be shining in front of him, slowly drifting its way down the western horizon. Night would follow…

The hospital grew quiet as the hours went by. Jax’s pain had subsided but his anger and vengeance did not. With each passing минута he grew еще restless and ready to leave his hospital bed.
He gently took the oxygen tubes out of his nose then gritted his teeth as he pulled the IV out his hand. Slowly, he moved his feet towards the edge of the постель, кровати but quickly pushed them back as he saw a nurse...

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Death Becomes Me: Luke Blade Story Chapter 2

posted by sawfan13

Sylvia took him to the hospital after his tantrum. He had a fever from it, and he became a little sick from his anger. She was a very good mother and taught her children well, but why would her Энджел of a son act so violently and moody? The doctor сказал(-а) it wasn't Sylvia's fault. Luke's real mother drank alcohol while carrying him which that means, Luke has fetal alcohol syndrome. It causes violent mood swings, temper tantrums, and compulsive behavior. Sylvia was worried about him because this can effect his behavior with everyone else around him, and his self esteem. A few days later, Sylvia...

Hidden Power-Part One, The Two Odd Visitors

posted by woofbark

Somewhere in the universe, a planet was dying.

The planet was Esphera, Earth's twin. Here lived people like on earth, who wore pants, shirts and dresses; they went to school and had emotions;they had their own currency. There were no cars here, but they had instead hovercrafts- spade-shaped vehicles that floated in the air. Most people on the planet were too poor to buy a hovercraft, one of the most expenisve items in Esphera.

But the thing that sets Earth and Esphera apart is the children.

Children on Esphera are all born with a special power-like invisibility-that vanishes at age 16. After...

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Dangerous Любовь Chapter Two

posted by M169

I украл, палантин fifty dollers out of my dads wallet. Okay...I'll pay it back I swear! Maybe he won't notice it's gone....

I used the money to go to a movie with my friend. I mean, if my parents won't willing let me, of course this is going to happen. They should be expecting it.

I walk into the movie theater, and wait for my friend. I wait for ten минуты before I get a text message saying that they won't Показать up...I turn around to head to the exit and I crash into a man. I take no notice of his apperence. I look him stright in the eyes. "Oh! Sorry Miss!" He stuttered. "It's okay....what movie are...

The girl Who cried волк Chapter 8

posted by greenstergirl

Ok I was REALLY bored this time so I drew ANOTHER picture of Danny. It took me forever and it STILL sucks.

Okay I just realized something. There's a movie called The girl who cried wolf. And I never knew there was until now so I think I should change this stories title. Tell me in my Комментарий as a vote. Should it be called

Wolf Girl
or
Ice Wolf
or
I'm no werewolf
(I don't know I just loved my first idea the original one but if Ты have any better ideas tell me)

Which one? Okay lets start the story.

**************************************************

Danny:

I moved in front of the group. Behind me I could hear Brenna and Kyla talking. Marcus trudged behind. I rubbed my tired eyes and told myself too keep walking....

The girl who cried волк chapter 6

posted by greenstergirl

My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible

Her scream was high pitched. The kind where Ты get a shiver down your back. The kind when someone scrapes their nails on a chalk board. The kind where the person screaming is in utter pain. But gladly it wasn't all the way like that.

Ты would think the water elementals would be еще careful around the giant sea snake. It's one of the many creatures that live in our vally's lake. Some of the water elementals are even рыба или sea snake shape shifters. Thats why I laughed when one of them screamed at the giant serpent.

Trixi yelled at me for my rude behavior and we ran towards the snake. From...

Through Their Eyes Chapter 1

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

Keaira: I was an early bird for one reason and one reason only sunrises and they early flow of the river in the morning. The river was a place where Ты could dunk your feet into its cool waters and it’d sound as if it were whispering your name или maybe it was just my brother playing a trick on me. Ты had plenty to do by the river. Swim in its waters, draw things in the wet dirt, или stare at the lilies floating on the surface. I remember scaring my parents to death each morning when they woke up and me, Kaden, Marshall, and my little 3 год old brother Johnny were...

The день I Died (Short story, Pt. 1)

posted by cute20k

BANG! BANG!A shill cry; a scream.

It's funny, Ты never feel your death creeping closer. It's not like Ты feel the silent breaths of your death tip-toeing toward you. And if Ты did, like it would matter. Most people reach out to grab their world when they see it falling... then again, I'm not most people.

Hi, I'm Ever Flarez. I was- I mean, I am? - an average girl. The thing is, my life kinda clashed with the whole average thing.

Here I am. I'm not alive. But I am something. I'm ... well- dead, Ты could say. But the thing is I'm not gone, gone. It's like my life is gone- not me.

I know you...

Kiely's new secret chapter 1

posted by melcu

"what should we do today Teki?" Kiely asked her tiny dog. Knowing that the dog couldn't posibly respond in any other way than wagging her tail или bark and that is exactly what the dog did.
Kiely sat Далее to her чихуахуа, чиуауа and ran her hand down her back feeling her soft black and brown fur."your a good baby girl" she crooned at the little puppy.
"Lets go to the park and then we could go to fred's,"Kiely finally desided Teki was still wagging her tail. Kiely made her way to the bathroom to freshen up and take a shower. She got out of the душ and headed toward the mirror to see if she had any...

A troulbed soul (the dark)

posted by neonstars

When I woke up July 15,2010 I had no idea what i was a bout to do heres my story:
I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock and it сказал(-а) 5am. Oh crap,Im gonna be late fr work! I сказал(-а) as i stretched my jeans on.I got dresed and ran down stairs.I opend my liitle sisters door to see if she was aslepp and as usaul she was.She was only 12 and i was 17.
I grabbed my keys and I ran out the door,I started my Red jeep and drove down the rocky drive way.10 минуты later ...I parked my car in the parking lot of SUzi Surf Shop.I saw my 39 год old boss suzie turining on the lights.I enterd and a cowoker name...

Holding on Chapter 1 : Family and Друзья

posted by TomboyWriter

If there’s one thing I cared about еще than my freedom it was my family. I loved my dad еще than anyone though it’s just hard not to Любовь my dad with his kind gentle nature. His eyes were big like a Щенки somewhat and were a deep dark Шоколад brown framed by long dark eyelashes and dark eye brows that matched his charcoal black hair that had a thick consistency but a silky feel. His skin was a medium оливковый, оливковое color and though many didn’t find him handsome I did. He was everything in a father and in myself. He was real shy and my Uncle Drew as I called him though he wasn’t my real...

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Finding Любовь : Chapters Five, Six, Seven, and Eight : Part One ; Casey's Story

posted by dancing_banana

X: Chapter 5

Matthew

I’m picking up Casey on Saturday and my сердце melts a little еще when I see her. She’s got her hair curled, her makeup done lightly, and a pale розовый недоуздок, бретель через шею dress on, and a white sweater to cover her shoulders.

“Wow, Ты look amazing.” I mean it too.

“Thank you, is the sweater okay? I think I might have something else if I can’t have any white on.”

“It’s fine, my cousin won’t care a bit.”

“Okay, good. Ты clean up nice.” She tells me well checking me out in my suit.

We talk some while we drive to the beach, but mostly we joke, and try to make it not awkward....

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away Chap. 1

posted by ButteBaby_K

An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")

Chapter 1: Остаться в живых in my own world of thought, a common occurrence, the rain left me like always. I remained standing moving with breeze, as the rain receded leaving me pondering my thoughts. I smiled to myself. Ilias, my name was derived from his. I was born in a great time of sorrow, called Ravasn; for that was the name of death, which there was much of nearly 15 years назад on the день of my beginning. A massive drought had plagued Phim for 7 years for the rain spirit was greatly wounded by the indecency of my people. They had Остаться в живых his trust and his respect, and I was the solution. My mother had...