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The Eagle (this is a poem,a little dark too)

posted by CapShunsuifan13

THE EAGLE

Red splatters the walls, the floors...

The Eagles yellow eyes
His claws tear, his beak rips

His malicious intent present in its speech
His black shadow falls
Its darkness full and everlasting

Leaving no physical mark but
Its evidence in the eyes of the Knowing
Only they can see
Only they recognize the signs

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Pain is in the mind of the sufferer
Invisible and dangerous
It strikes silently
Clouding the mind

It consumes
It feeds
Never backing off
Happiness becomes the past
Anger the present
What of the future?

No one knows
No one can know
No one understands
No one can understand
The inflicted is left alone
Even in the presence of others
All is left behind

Red splatters the walls, the floors
Inside the сердце
All becomes dark and painful
In the mind
The world disappears
And the mirrors appear
Self reflected from within
Only the Sufferer can know

What really goes on
Within the mind?
Those who know
Are those long gone
Are those who've suffered the least
Are those who left behind the victims
And traded themselves in
For the hope of something better
A hope never realized

The Knowing are never there to end it
To stop it
To prevent it
To help it
And the future doesn't seem bright
Only the Sufferer knows
Only the Sufferer understands
Only they know what's in the mind
And only the Sufferer knows
When the Eagle will strike

hgfan5602, GINSDARKANGEL and 2 others like this

flabaloobalah *holds breath while reading, lets out big sigh when done.)) sweet juji fruits. that was gritty and beautiful.

CapShunsuifan13 WOW! Thank you flabaloobalah! I like your username btw

FonzFan82 I liked it. I thought it rhymed a bit.

CapShunsuifan13 Ha never realized it ryhmed :)

Heros_Shadow *looks at the first line, already loves it* ... *finishes it* That is the best free verse poem I've ever read! You are really talented!

Sinna_Hime_chan Truly very intense. Most poetry tell s us a story and yours did, however a bit dark & sad in the certain aspect from "the sufferer"...but that is part of your picture, and in real life, the wild is not always nice... (Though I hear bald eagles mate for life -maybe other eagles do & I like the golden too)... YOUR verse was very descript and I like that, it makes for a very good read to me. Thank you for asking me to read & for my opinion. I think you write well. I enjoyed the journey reading the illustration you wrote! I have some talented friends!! Indeed. 'And I do hope to become even better friends.

Shirohige1939 Wow it's a really good poem. I like it :) so thanks that you share this good poem with us ^_^

GINSDARKANGEL I REALLY LOVED IT. IT'S SAD, BUT AWSOME. I SAVED IT TO MY FAVS ON MY PAGE. YOU ARE GOING TO BECOME A FAMOSE WRITER ONE OF THESE DAYS. I REALLY HOPE YOU WRITE MORE SIS. IS IT OK IF I SHOW IT TO SOME OF MY FRIENDS. I KNOW THEY ARE GOING TO LOVE IT. I REALLY DID CRY AFTER READING THIS SO IT TOOK A LITTLE BEFORE I COULD POST A COMMENT. YOU DID GREAT. AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. LOVE YOU SIS!!!

hgfan5602 Very intense and sad. But it is also very strong. That's exactly what a good writer has. The ability to transfer emotions to the reader.

elizasmomma no it';s not dark at all in fact it looks and sounds like some-thing edgar allan poe would write>

Twincest...The Любовь That could never b (Chap 1 the begining)

posted by Cries_Bloodlova

This Story begans with a man. And his Brother Tom. Tom Was 20 yrs old n Played Gutiar in a band called Tokio hotel. Tom Was cacasin n had dirty blonde long dreads. Always Wore Gucci Close n Fifty59s (Type of hat) he Was 6,2. his Twin Brother bill on the Other Hand. had blk long Hair like a lion. Cacasin n Dresses Rocker Style 6'2. Wears Make up n Nail polish. n is The lead Singer in Tokio hotle. in That band r 2 Other mebers of That band Gustav n George
Gustav has Short Hair big Glases n is The Drumer. George has Shighty long hair down 2 his Sholders n Was The бас, бас-гитара Gutairest. This band n These...

The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 5

posted by Triscia95

This one is pretty short but I've been so busy, hope Ты like it Комментарий and tell me what Ты think.

Elena’s POV
I woke up to find the curtains being draw open and Stefan gone. Every thing seemed a little fuzzy. I could see a figure walked towards me. I sat up in постель, кровати and rubbed my eyes.
“Good morning sleeping beauty.” Damon spoke softly. When things came back to focus I saw Damon half dressed, wearing just a pair of sweats.
I ran my fingers threw my hair pulling it out of my face. “Where’s Stefan.” “Not here, in fact it’s just Ты and me. Hungry?”
He got up and headed for the...

just a twist in twilight chapter 1

posted by mia1emmett

Chapter 1.
I had just moved into forks, Washington, me and my brother Eddie were
close so after our parents died Eddie didn't leave me out of his sight.
I was unpacking and going through my things when I heard the door колокол, колокольчик, белл
ring. I knew who it was because every time I moved the people Далее door
would come and welcome us. Well I figured it was our neighbor.
I heard the door open and heard talking. I looked like a slob in my
baggy t-shirt and my shorts. So I changed into jeans and a long розовый
tank top. I walked down stairs and сказал(-а) my hellos I let...

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The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 4

posted by Triscia95

Katherine’s POV
I leaned off the Стена smiling. “I can tell that Ты didn’t miss me.” I сказал(-а) turning to Stefan my smile fading.
I turned back to Damon smiling. “I can’t tell much if Ты miss me with all that ‘I Любовь Ты Elena.” I glided my hands over his perfectly sculpted abs. His рубашка so thin Ты could feel every little curve.
My fingers moving up his stomach one by one. “You seem to Любовь Elena so much, have Ты ever wanted to tasted her blood, because I know I’ve been dying to.” I сказал(-а) running my thumb over his lower lip.

Damon’s POV
From the moment she spoke my body...

The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 2

posted by Triscia95

Elena's POV

"Why don't Ты sit down and we can talk." I was pressed tightly up against the counter. "No need to be scared." Katherine was smiling as she took steps towards me. "Katherine this is between Damon, Stefan and Ты not me." Katherine tilted her head and shook it tell me no. "Honey this is about you."

Damon's POV

"How the hell could Ты do that? Damon I asked Ты to do this for Elena." Stefan was furious. I just rolled my eyes. "Your just upset because she may also have feelings for me to, just like Katherine."

Stefan sat there shaking his head. "Don't Ты get it Damon Katherine never...

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I figured out I couldn't enter this in a Письмо contest after I wrote it...

posted by QueenVictoria73

So, I am alway on the look out for Письмо contests with inspiring prompts for me to enter. I got really exited when I found this one:
link because I had an idea for it right away. I spent all afternoon researching the Battle of Little Bighorn, because I wanted to set it in the aftermath of that battle, and Письмо it, instead of Письмо a biography of William Blake that I was supposed to be doing for school :P. then, when I went to go Отправить it, I figured out the people wanted me to sign up for a membership to their website for $6.75 a месяц to enter the contest, which I don't really want to....

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Still of the night ch.17 (Jack's POV)

posted by TeamRosalieHale

17: Wheel in the Sky

Dying is not what most people think it is-nothing flashes before your eyes, there’s no white light или what have you. The only thing I felt was pain, the blood flowing through my рубашка and fingers, making them sticky and beginning to form a пальто on my clothes. I couldn’t see much beyond the few feet in front of me, the sun had long such set and darkness had fallen on быстрый, стремительный, свифт wings. There was one sound: my blood pulsing like it was right in my ears. Eventually I made it to the трава холм, хилл where I fell, too weak to walk another step.
While I lay there, certain I was destined...

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Dark Hold: The Story Of Vampire Curse In A New Tale! Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

"You know... I'm not...the one Ты love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos

"You know... I'm not...the one you love...so...that's why...it's time for me... to leave......" -Zelos

There have been so many things that have happened to me in the past, present, and future, that I have had a hard time remembering them all. For a vampire, that would seem unbearably stupid; I mean, we live forever, so our brains should be еще adept at handling the hardcore memories. At times I actually thought I remembered my childhood, или even WWI if I took a deep thought into it. But no, the only thing that came into my mind as clearly as the darkness that surrounds me now is this:
Chloe's eyes.
Chloe Cassalani, the one person I knew from the start upon meeting, was a threat to me. The instant...

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The Sisters: Chapter 6: Dear Dairy

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Bobby’s p.o.v

After I had spent the night with Tayce I went back to the protector’s dorms, they weren’t as nice as the house или cleaner for that matter but it was a place to sleep. I noticed Kale sitting on his постель, кровати Чтение some chapter book Belinda had recommended earlier this week. He looked up and smirked. “Where did Ты go?” he asked, I coughed and sat down Далее him. “Walk” I said, his judgmental eyes followed mine. “Gee that was so convincing” He said, I playfully pushed him. “So what, it’s not like I’m the killer” I said, I could tell he believed me, but he still...

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a cursed story:chapter 8 & 9!: not a sweet life:(

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 8: not a sweet life
I woke up with Damien's arms tightened around my naked chest.ewww eww eww eww, I swear I’ll kill him! i slid myself out of his grasp and flew to my closet I quietly wore something to escape from him while I was putting on my jeans I was thinking of some place where Damien cant find me, I really couldn’t think of any where so I grabbed my bag and headed to the door hope fully Damien was still sleeping I opened the door and quietly closed it behind me I rushed to my car when jasper interrupted me
-Bella what's wrong? Your so scared and worried.
Not a good timing please...

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Jacob and Renesmee's Life -- Chapter 10

posted by BiteMeCullen107

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in еще pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET Ты жопа, попка UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 5 Hard Yakka Part 2

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Parvulo clapped his hands together, the cage closed in on the Karkadann, and then it just vanished, Parvulo then returned to Grito’s shoulder. “You did well; Ты lasted the full 10 minutes” сказал(-а) Grito. They understood that this was their first case, so really it was a test and they passed. “It is time for us to go” сказал(-а) Grito. Parvulo summoned the portal over them all, most likely that Alec was unable to walk properly. This time it was not cold, they saw each other and could talk freely. “How Ты doing over there, man?” Marley Asked. Alec gave him the thumbs up (Which still meant...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 4 An Honest Tale Speeds Best Being Plainly Told Part 2

posted by H-A-T-R-M

The four of them started walking straight ahead, if this was a large creature you’d think Ты could spot the thing. Grito сказал(-а) they can be quite the handful and we can’t kill it, just capture it. “See anything yet?” Opal Asked. “Grass, lots and lots of grass” Marley Answered. After giving Marley an evil look, they continued through the field. Little did they know, this field, was no normal flied. “It’s about time, right?” Parvulo Asked. As Grito washed his face, he answered “Yeah, the field will break apart soon”. Just after Grito spoke the ground shook. “What was that?...

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black moon chapter 18

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella Ты finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see Ты vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend или something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella Ты were sleeping here for 100 years!and now Ты finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

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The Stupid, Jackass boy everyone in my skool hates

posted by Nayeli53

Okay, so this might sound boring, but its been on my nerves for a long time and this is the only place to spill it out so here it goes.

So at my middle school whose name shall remain secret (La вилла Middle School), theres this kid whose name shall also be kept secret (jose guerro) and is real jackass. he smells horrible, he gets into fight with guys AND girls, says stuff that make us want to crack his neck, and he sent lots of people to the office for something he did, and the teachers dont do anything but tell him niclely tobehave and get after the people who he made pissed. the other day...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1-part 3

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
My first class was chemistry and I sat in the секунда row Далее to a skinny girl with short blond hair talking to another girl behind us. From their conversation I learned her name was Stacey and the other was Beonca and they were both cheerleaders.
The teacher started to talk about the rules and objectives for this год but no one was paying attention,they were much еще interested in texting on their cell phones или passing notes to the person Далее to them. I wasn't that interested in what the teacher сказал(-а) ether so my mind wondered off....
The колокол, колокольчик, белл woke me out of my день dreams. As Stacey...

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Forbidden Любовь - Chapter 4

posted by ashesandwine

Sorry for just posting it in this spot now:( If Ты want Ты can Присоединиться my spot and Чтение it as soon as it's ready:D

"Daniel POV"

We wrote so much letters to each other, even if we were just a few blocs away... I still remmember our first letter; I had so much to say, so much that I wanted her to know, how could I put all of my Любовь into one letter? So I сказал(-а) the only thing I could say:

"I only know that I belong where Ты are!"

Her response was something that I will never forget:

"You're my fragement of light in the end of the tunnel, you're my reason to fight when everything is getting dark..."...

Untitiled Spanish medieval historical fiction Chapter 1

posted by anujmulik

Ximena knelt down besides the majestic bed. She could no longer hold back her tears. Her hands were wrapped around the lifeless form of the Cid. The cruel wound had finally extinguished the light which had burned bright and guided the people of Valencia through the dark times. Their beloved Cid was no more.

Rodrigo Diaz de Bivar, El Cid had commanded the Spanish conquistadors against the invasion of Yusuf‘s Berber armies. A mighty leader he was, who fought with Сверхъестественное vigour and whose energy was transmitted to all who fought beside him. Many legendary battles he had waged and won. Undefeated...

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The adventerous killing of Duncan

posted by Katiegirl

Narrator: Macbeth slowly entered the crept room were Duncan was sleeping soundly. Macbeth quietly began to reach for his sharpened dagger. Macbeth pondered many thoughts regarding the demise of Duncan, but never to this degree. Now, the time had come to fulfill the quest to be crowned king. Duncan suddenly returns to reality. Visualizing Macbeth by his bedside withholding a dagger pointed at his wretched chest. Would this mean the end of Macbeth’s planned tragedy или the end of Duncan’s existence?
Duncan: Cousin, why hast thou forsaken me?
Macbeth: Forsaken you? Thou hast forsaken me. Thou...

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Trapped in my own time chapter 5

posted by dragonrider

I pull into the parking lot of the country council men office and get out. Hmm what should I do with Elliot? I can't leave him in the car he'll die of heat. I could leave the air on. Nah I'll just put him behind stage when I talk to the councilmen.
I pull out Elliot and put him over my shoulder. Everybody is strong in the future.
Elliot murmurs something like "Oh I Любовь Ты too Starr!"
Aww how sweet. I take out duct tape and tape his mouth shut. Ahh that's much better
I carry Elliot towards the building and when I get inside I don't see Whitney. Hmm that's strange she works here shouldn't...