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So, I am alway on the look out for Письмо contests with inspiring prompts for me to enter. I got really exited when I found this one:
link because I had an idea for it right away. I spent all afternoon researching the Battle of Little Bighorn, because I wanted to set it in the aftermath of that battle, and Письмо it, instead of Письмо a biography of William Blake that I was supposed to be doing for school :P. then, when I went to go Отправить it, I figured out the people wanted me to sign up for a membership to their website for $6.75 a месяц to enter the contest, which I don't really want to. So, please read this, guys, and give me feedback, because I feel like I worked realy hard on it for nothing.

Aiyana focused on the rhythm of her footsteps and prayed to the spirits of the Earth and wind that they would give her the strength to carry on her journey. Her brown eyes burned from the glare of the setting sun that lay right in front of her, but she refused to turn her eyes from the path in front of her. The dusty Montana soil filled her moccasins and chaffed her feat. Sweat matted wisps of her glossy black hair, tied in two braids, to her forehead. Her deer skin dress was tattered and smeared with dirt. Aiyana believed at a very young age in the Cheyenne principles of nature and living spirits that connected everything on Earth. When a person respects the land around them, the spirits would guide Ты and provide everything necessary for Ты to live contently and peacefully. Aiyana knew how to connect with the spirits of soil, crop, water, and sky, and learned to Любовь them, but she knew no one person could own nature as if it was there possession. When the moon-skinned men first came to the Sacred Hill, she welcomed them because they were part of nature just as she was. Soon after meeting them, her blood began to boil against them. They had no respect for Earth and talked to her father as if their intentions were to keep the soil of the Sacred холм, хилл to themselves, without sharing it with anyone else. Their lifestyle was stuffy, pompous, and boring; they never danced или told stories, and looked down on Aiyana’s people when they performed their ritual dances. Her dislike for them collected in her сердце and became еще and еще passionate every day. Then, on a summer day, the moon-skinned men, with their weapons of огонь and thunder, slaughtered her kin. She gritted her teeth as the visions of people she loved fell to the ground as the moon-skins unemotionally and ruthlessly went on with fighting. The survivors of the Cheyenne tribe were captured as prisoners; bound by the hands and ruffed into a rickety train car. They were to be driven to a new place, so the moon-skins could posses Sacred Hill. Aiyana was last in line to be forced on the train, right after her mother. Right before she was thrust into the car, she stomped on her captivator’s foot, whirled around, and spat in his face. He, in turn, cuffed her face with the butt of his винтовка and pushed her to the ground. He yelled something not of her language, and signaled for the train to start moving. Smoke billowed out of the train and the wheels started to pick up speed before Aiyana had the strength to get up. The last thing she heard from the train was her mother screaming her name. As soon as she got back on her feet, she went to the battlefield and picked up a spear from one of her fallen brethren.
Now, she had only two things on her mind; her mother and revenge. She knew that the train had to follow the path of its tracks, and eventually it had to come to a stop. All she had to do was walk along the tracks and she would end up the same place as the moon-skins brought her mother. For the past two days and nights, all Aiyana did was march between the rails, eyes foreword and head held high, battling hunger, thirst, heat, and fatigue, and she planned to do so until she got to her destination или dropped down dead. She was the face of perseverance, courage, and faith. Like her namesake, she was an “eternal blossom,” beautiful and graceful, but strong and powerful enough to make her mark in the universe, even after death.
posted by Insight357
I saw black sneakers with purple shoestrings. Then tight black pants. Далее a draping black shirt, with small hands covered by fingerless, leather gloves. A пересекать, крест choker sat at the base of her neck. My eyes then fell upon hers. Those eyes, those piercing blue eyes, somewhat similar to my own. The black hair teased slightly, with choppy, side bangs, covering the outer corner of her right eye. It was the girl, from the hallway. The one who thanked me. I gasped softly.
    “Hello, Lucy,” I сказал(-а) to her.
    “Hello,” she сказал(-а) in the same small voice....
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posted by bunnibunnibaby
"It's nice here. I don't know many people though..." Victor brushed his hair back, smiling again. "Well, by tomorrow, all of the kids at school will wanna be your friend." "Oh..." Jade turned slightly to see the raven haired boy deep in thought. "What is it?" "Hn? Oh, it's nothing. Oh, we're here." The blonde looked up ahead and saw her house. "Really? Cause my house is right there." She pointed, and Victor burst out laughing. "Haha-I live right Далее to Ты then..." The blonde looked at the house Далее to hers. It seemed normal. A little old fashioned, but definitely normal. "Cool! Well, I'll see Ты tomorrow then?" "Yeah..." The onyx eyed boy took Jade's hand, kissed it lightly, then walked off. "What was that?"
posted by Insight357
Today was my first день working for the mental institution. I woke around ten, and got a shower. I dressed in my black pants, shoes, and shirt. Over the рубашка was my white doctor’s jacket. The color white didn’t’ suite me, but it’s not like I hade a choice in wearing it.
    I walked to work. The asylum was only three blocks away. As I walked I worried over people criticizing me. Or, making fun of me. What if I treated the wrong patient? What if I messed something up? What if I got lost?
    My stomach started to tighten as I thought of the day...
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Sylvia took him to the hospital after his tantrum. He had a fever from it, and he became a little sick from his anger. She was a very good mother and taught her children well, but why would her Энджел of a son act so violently and moody? The doctor сказал(-а) it wasn't Sylvia's fault. Luke's real mother drank alcohol while carrying him which that means, Luke has fetal alcohol syndrome. It causes violent mood swings, temper tantrums, and compulsive behavior. Sylvia was worried about him because this can effect his behavior with everyone else around him, and his self esteem. A few days later, Sylvia...
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Somewhere in the universe, a planet was dying.

The planet was Esphera, Earth's twin. Here lived people like on earth, who wore pants, shirts and dresses; they went to school and had emotions;they had their own currency. There were no cars here, but they had instead hovercrafts- spade-shaped vehicles that floated in the air. Most people on the planet were too poor to buy a hovercraft, one of the most expenisve items in Esphera.

But the thing that sets Earth and Esphera apart is the children.

Children on Esphera are all born with a special power-like invisibility-that vanishes at age 16. After...
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I украл, палантин fifty dollers out of my dads wallet. Okay...I'll pay it back I swear! Maybe he won't notice it's gone....

I used the money to go to a movie with my friend. I mean, if my parents won't willing let me, of course this is going to happen. They should be expecting it.

I walk into the movie theater, and wait for my friend. I wait for ten минуты before I get a text message saying that they won't Показать up...I turn around to head to the exit and I crash into a man. I take no notice of his apperence. I look him stright in the eyes. "Oh! Sorry Miss!" He stuttered. "It's okay....what movie are...
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 My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible
My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible
Her scream was high pitched. The kind where Ты get a shiver down your back. The kind when someone scrapes their nails on a chalk board. The kind where the person screaming is in utter pain. But gladly it wasn't all the way like that.

Ты would think the water elementals would be еще careful around the giant sea snake. It's one of the many creatures that live in our vally's lake. Some of the water elementals are even рыба или sea snake shape shifters. Thats why I laughed when one of them screamed at the giant serpent.

Trixi yelled at me for my rude behavior and we ran towards the snake. From...
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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213
Keaira:     I was an early bird for one reason and one reason only sunrises and they early flow of the river in the morning. The river was a place where Ты could dunk your feet into its cool waters and it’d sound as if it were whispering your name или maybe it was just my brother playing a trick on me. Ты had plenty to do by the river. Swim in its waters, draw things in the wet dirt, или stare at the lilies floating on the surface. I remember scaring my parents to death each morning when they woke up and me, Kaden, Marshall, and my little 3 год old brother Johnny were...
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"what should we do today Teki?" Kiely asked her tiny dog. Knowing that the dog couldn't posibly respond in any other way than wagging her tail или bark and that is exactly what the dog did.
Kiely sat Далее to her чихуахуа, чиуауа and ran her hand down her back feeling her soft black and brown fur."your a good baby girl" she crooned at the little puppy.
"Lets go to the park and then we could go to fred's,"Kiely finally desided Teki was still wagging her tail. Kiely made her way to the bathroom to freshen up and take a shower. She got out of the душ and headed toward the mirror to see if she had any...
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posted by neonstars
When I woke up July 15,2010 I had no idea what i was a bout to do heres my story:
I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock and it сказал(-а) 5am. Oh crap,Im gonna be late fr work! I сказал(-а) as i stretched my jeans on.I got dresed and ran down stairs.I opend my liitle sisters door to see if she was aslepp and as usaul she was.She was only 12 and i was 17.
I grabbed my keys and I ran out the door,I started my Red jeep and drove down the rocky drive way.10 минуты later ...I parked my car in the parking lot of SUzi Surf Shop.I saw my 39 год old boss suzie turining on the lights.I enterd and a cowoker name...
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If there’s one thing I cared about еще than my freedom it was my family. I loved my dad еще than anyone though it’s just hard not to Любовь my dad with his kind gentle nature. His eyes were big like a Щенки somewhat and were a deep dark Шоколад brown framed by long dark eyelashes and dark eye brows that matched his charcoal black hair that had a thick consistency but a silky feel. His skin was a medium оливковый, оливковое color and though many didn’t find him handsome I did. He was everything in a father and in myself. He was real shy and my Uncle Drew as I called him though he wasn’t my real...
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WELL I AM CURRENTLY Письмо the wierd and wonderfull world of Belle, BUT I THOUGHT I WOULD WRITE ANOTHER SHORT STORY, SO I DONT GET BORED.


ANYWAY THIS ONES ABOUT A GIRLS LIFE,ROBYN. SHE DOESNT SEEM TO FIT IN, AND NOT FOR THE REASON SHE THINKS...

Panicking,I ran. And ran and ran. I didnt look back, all I knew was, I had had to run. They wont get me not now not ever, I wont be used.

2 Days earlier,

"Robyn! Get up now!" I faintly heard my mum shout from down the stairs, moaning I turned onto my stomach, and pulled my подушка over my head. "Robyn Stirling, if Ты dont get ready for school now, you...
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дата Night
By: moolah
Chapter Two: Party
    Haley sat at Anne’s feet and had Joey in her lap. Suddenly Haley’s iphone vibrated in her pocket. She picked it up and opened the text from Sean.
Sean- Ware r u? I’m @ home. Come Главная quick!
Haley sighed and texted him back.
Haley- I’m @ Anne’s house. Why what’s rong?
Haley sighed and got up off the ground. “Sorry. I have to go, Anne.” She сказал(-а) and hugged the kids and left. When she got Главная the house was full of chaos. “Oh my god, Sean! It’s a mess!!!” Haley screamed over the kids. “I know, honey.” He...
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posted by CullenProperty
I wake up with a feeling that something has been taken from me, but in a good way. I lay in my warm, comfortable, подушка surrounded постель, кровати for a little while longer before I decide to get up. I go into the bathroom and turn on the shower. The warm water that penetrates my body feels so good and after my thoughts wander to Nick, the water feels even warmer. I заворачивать, обертывание a towel around my body when I'm done and quietly tip toe into my room where I see Nick's hoodie lying on my office chair, where I put it last night. I pick it up and take in his essence, smells exactly like Nick. An aroma I can't explain...
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Chapter 3 The cult


“What are Ты on about?” I was shaking with anger. How dare she say what I am and what I'm not “Stuff you” I wanted to say much worse. I walked away from her. Suddenly James was in front of me, smirking at me then he slowly vanished. I had to get out of here. By the time I come back it will be too late.

I was walking down the empty улица, уличный the sun had set already. How long have I been walking for? I did not even feel tired. Some how I ended up at the park... thinking of Hannah, I walked past where it all happened Hannah screams echoed inside my head. I felt nothing...
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    Chapter 2
                    LUNCH
I sat where Jill was sitting. The same people from before. The blonde
Kid, the reporter with a few other people. They introduced themselves.
And I giggled when they all were done. I сказал(-а) "I laugh a lot...sorry"
Ken rolled his eyes. I cracked up. Mart the one who bumped into me asked me "so Estella--" "call me Stella" I interrupted. "So Stella would Ты
Like to grab обедающий, закусочной sometime?" I laughed "sure!" ken just rolled his
Eyes, it made me...
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Hello everyone! :] This is only a draft to a chapter of the first story of a series (Shattering Suns) I'm Письмо and, when I'm through, publishing. Since it's my first chapter, I want to be sure this story is interesting enough. Forgive me if there are any proofreading mistakes. I've been too busy to proofread every line. Please do Комментарий and tell me what Ты think! Thankies so so much for willingly Чтение and sharing your helpful thoughts. Take care sweethearts, and enjoy! :D ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blissful Ignorance
My name is Naomi Hart. I am a sixteen год old...
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posted by tayandkris4evr
 I'm thinking of this guy resembling Jack. *Disclaimer*
I'm thinking of this guy resembling Jack. *Disclaimer*
"Run, Ты idiot!"
"I am!"
Niki and I just robbed a gas station. We pointed our Colt's at the cashier, then tied him up. Sweat dripped off my face as we loaded our trash bags full of Еда and money. I didn't think we'd make it in time before the cops came. But, miraculously we packed up quick enough.
"Alright man, head over to those hills, here take this, I'm gonna go knock that guy out."
Niki nodded and took the two trash bags. His blonde hair falling around his head, soaked with sweat.
I ran back into the station, and went over to the cashier. I asked him if there was anybody else here and...
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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213
How is it possible for there to be possible to be еще trouble?

    “ Эй, Cindy” Thomas shouts from across the room. I put a finger to my lips. Just as Mrs. Fitzgerald turns to Thomas and says “ Mr. Carlson sit down.’ “ What eva teach.” “ Now class since its pride time we are going to come up with ways to ask your teachers things and what are things to ask.” Thomas then throws a paper airplane to me with a message when Mrs. Fitzgerald isn’t looking. I begin to unfold the paper airplane just when Jaylee the school brat snatches it out of my hands and shouts...
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posted by summer448
I opened my bedroom window to let in an evening brezee. All of the trees have been bare for a while, exposing the cloudless sky. Letting out a sight i rested my head on my hand and leaned out letting the wind whip across my face. Today is the very last день of winter break,then its back to school till spring. May as well enjoy it. "ARTIE JONES, GET DOWN HERE RIGHT THIS секунда I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE A WORD WITH YOU!" My mom yelled vioentley from down stairs. Sluggishly I stood up and walked out of my room. "Mom my name is amy." I сказал(-а) walking down the steps. She just glared at me. " Ты can change...
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