3 Best Ways For A Writer To Grab A Reader's Attention by Carole Kirschner

For Морская полиция - Спецотдел & Ziva centric Фаны only. или for people who wants to read some crap >.<


Its hard keeping up long distance relationships, but it’s almost impossible to keep up a very large friendship group when they were all трещина, сплит up in different parts of the world, and no one knew that better then the Ace Gang.
Ziva David, Tali David, Ali David, Ari Haswari, Natasha Haswari, Shmuel Rubinstein, Abraham Cole, Aaron Spike, Lauralie Gilmore, Christopher Hayden, Michael Rivkin, Zachery David-Addy, Ryan James, Ashley James, Chad Cooper, Sandra Long, Sam Long, Oliver Todd and Shina Coholan all...

Chapter One

Lily knew that her seventh and final год at Hogwarts was going to be the hardest yet. Not only was she just getting over the death of her parents in early March, but she had the N.E.W.T's coming up – and to add to all the stress of it, she had been chosen as Head Girl. She had tried to decline the position, politely of course, but Professor Dumbledore would hear nothing of it. The phrase he used in his last letter still made her smile when she thought of it: ”There is no other girl in the seventh год that I would entrust this position to, due to certain special circumstances...

hi so im a new writer so please tell me if i should contine Письмо this story. Please comment!!!!!
Rated: M


Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to the family camp that we help with every год and went here when we were kid’s but know were all teenagers so were counselors now. My brother Joey and I drive together every год and all of our other brothers drive up in there own cars или the young ones with the others. There was a new guy this год his name is Eddie. I think that I will like this kid as I get to know him. I don’t have to share a room because I am the only girl...

Chapter 1
THE SPOILED PRINCE

    In the land of Mayfair, lived a king by the name of Alfred and his wife, Queen Jasline. King Alfred and Queen Jasline had two children, the oldest Prince Harry and his younger sister, Princess Cilla.
    Prince Harry was a very happy little prince because Ты see Harry was very spoiled and rotten. Nobody, absolutely nobody was allowed to say ‘no’ to Prince Harry when he wanted something, или to punish him when he did something wrong или even to criticize him. Whatever Harry wanted to have, Harry had and whatever Harry wanted...

Ugh,I knew today was going to be terrible but seriously,does she have to completely suck his whole face like that.I wasn't talking about Lulu and Joel,luckily Музыка was the only class I didn't have those two lovers.No,I was talking about my friend Abby totally lipping her boyfriend Gabe's face off.It was completely sickening.Our retarded teacher never looked back so they spent the whole forty-five минуты in class sucking faces.Juan had the same look I did,the look that make the whole school know that I drank rotten молоко или something.A look that would make the janitors get a raise for their...

Belinda’s p.o.v

I heard unsettling laughter, I turned my head to what I expected to be Justin, but no instead I saw Millie sitting beside me with водка in her hand. She smiled once she noticed I was awake. “Hey there sleepy head” She said, I looked around and saw that we were in Justin’s shed but the buckles that were once around my wrist and ankles had been undone. “I thought I might just go ahead and undo those considering they were pretty tight” She сказал(-а) before taking a sip of her vodka. I closed my eyes and look down, the whole where Justin has stabbed me was gone. “How did...

PG13. I don't like this chapter... Kind of rushed.

Chapter 3

It has been a week since my detention, and the arrival of Megan. Jake hasn't been еще happy, now that he had a girlfriend. Brianna and Lilia have been on me еще than ever now. They don't know when или how to stop. I was getting really annoyed.

I walked into the school, looking quite pissed. As usual all the girls came and told me how great I looked, although I knew that I look like crap.

"Yo Joshua... Why the crappy mad face?" asked Ken. He was never subtle.

"Nothing. Fuck Ты and leave me alone." I told him.

"Eww.... I don't want it...

Jonas and Gabriel laughed as the ride ended. He could still hear something that he had never heard before. Perhaps it is what Giver called misuc, he though. Gabriel, who was smiling and chuckling with delight, was now quiet tilted his head in one direction as if he heard something. Then he yelled out, "Bird!"
Jonas, thinking that he meant that there was a plane near by, quickly picked up Gabriel and seeing that there was no where to hide, layed flat on the snow holding Gabriel tightly. He heard a cry, and looked up to see a white bird flying to the south. Instantly he remembered a time when...

Alec’s eyes opened as the день has started, he sitting up on his bed, remembering yesterday, how Grito basically gave them permission, no, forced them to create his group. Alec picked up the phone and gave Marley a call. He discussed what happened yesterday and if they should agree with Grito, Marley agreed, he hated the fact that innocent people were getting killed so he was glad to help. Marley informed Opal and she had the same idea. After he hanged up Alec got the phone book out and looked for the name ‘Norris’. After a few phone calls he reached her and explained the same thing. They...

She stepped into the flat sorely, gazing at his stuff. He’s left so soon, without saying he would do so, without mentioning any goodbyes with his deep, sad voice. Everything was the same, nothing has been moved, and nothing has been replaced. He took nothing with him but his endless tears. He took nothing with him but his sadness and misery. He took nothing … but the shattering hearts with its deep wounds.
She did fool him with her sweet words and enchanting look, but she’s never thought that such a smart person like him can’t be fooled with her stupid words. Her words did nothing but...

Serena

Finally Saturday came. Friday had dragged on forever, in opinion.

I'd been half there on Thursday after he'd asked me out, and as soon as I got home, I called Tia, and it might have been me, but I was sure she sounded smug. We started planning what I was going to wear, and we even made plans to go shopping on Friday after school.

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My dad had left my mom and I when I was barely two years old. My mom had had me when she was nineteen, she still had that faded prettiness. I was told I looked like her, but I'm not sure that's true. My mom was...

Selfless acts were uncommon in her universe... all human contact she'd gotten the last few months were Japanese tourists that wanted to capture the bad side of the city on their nice little holiday, by means of escaping the shopping malls, crowded museums and crammed amusement parks that were drowning in bliss and manic happiness.
Yeah, she was the bad side of the city... she was the part that was better left unseen and little people actually saw it. Some of them actually asked for her permission! Why? What would she do? Sue them? She was a stain on the face of society, something like a pimple...

Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, Ты three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" сказал(-а) Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" сказал(-а) Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and луч, рэй Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" сказал(-а) Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the вверх of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" сказал(-а) Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could...

Jeanette:Isn't it great going to high school on the first day?

Brittany and Eleanor:Yeah!
(The Chipettes climbing the bus)

Brittany:Hey,Jeanette.Wondering if Ты get to see your boyfriend,Simon again.

Jeanette:What!!!

(Eleanor laughing)

Eleanor:Yeah,Jeanette!Take note.

Jeanette:Whatever!

Brittany:Jeanette,sit down.(Brittany whispering in class)

Ms. Fredickson:Good Morning,class!!!
(Ms. Fredickson as she walked into the class)

Ms. Fredickson:Ok!!!My name is Ms. Suzie Fredickson.But Ты can call me Ms. Fredickson.And I will be teaching Ты english.Since its your first day,let us just do something easy.First,you...

In the years following the war the Ministry of Magic struggled to regain the public's trust whilst people struggled to find peace of mind in the uncertainty of Voldemort's disappearance. In 1985 letters start appearing with a very concerning или very hopeful kind of message, depending on your point of view and personal beliefs. They are so anti-establishment, in parts so truthful, and thus potentially dangerous that the Ministry controlled Daily Prophet won't Опубликовать them или any talk about them on the Readers' Column.

The letters lay out a vision of future where the Ministry no longer exists...

On the bus, I had to sit Далее to Natalie. Natalie was a little too friendly... especially towards me. When nobody was looking she mind controlled me and made me Kiss her. "Focus Natalie!" Chantal always сказал(-а) when Natalie started to flirt. Natalie scowled at Chantal then said, "You're no fun Chantal." Chantal responded by saying, "Damn right I am! Please stop flirting with him." Natalie smiled then said, "Why? Do Ты like him?" Chantal glared at Natalie then said, "Not in the way that Ты do." Natalie smiled for the секунда time and said, "Then why can't I have him?" Chantal responded. "Because...

The way Ты killed me…and so many more…
Why? What’s the point?
For yourself? Earning yourself money?
Is that it? That’s all?

You don’t care about us in the least!
You don’t care about the pain Ты put so many through!
How could you? How can you?
You’re just ruthless, and nothing else

You’re just doing it so Ты can survive!
You’ll do anything for that!
You don’t care about what Ты put us through!
You’ll steal our ability to survive so Ты can yourself!

Why?

Because you’re selfish
And careless
And if Ты want to stay like that, be my guest
By my guest to let me kill you

There is a price...

First Name: Sayori(you are called Sayorihime at your temple)
Last Name: Tsukine
Age: 16
Height: 5’7
Weight: 121
Eye Color: Pink
Hair Color: Black(straight short bangs, straight long hair that goes down to your knees and the end of the hair is straight)
Personality: Stubborn, clever, smart, tactician, strong-willed, kind and caring(but doesn’t admit it because of stubbornness)
Info: Ты are the descendant of a very strong and powerful miko* named Mizuhahime. Ты have strong powers, strong enough that if a demon absorbs you, its powers will increase by 100X and if mated with a half demon, the child...

White. White everywhere. i pushed myself farther, made pain ripped at my sides, as the cold stabbing breeze lifted the hair off my bleeding chapped lips. I stepped farther not knowing where i was going. Another sharp breeze burned my face as tears refused to fall from my aching eyes. Been so long since i laid my head to rest. My feet slowly going numb leaving me to face the cold alone. I was at war. A war with the icy breeze,and with myself. Trusting no one.

I tried so hard to impress them. To get them to Любовь me. To gain their friendship. No one knows me. No one will find me. No one is looking....