True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

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The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

posted by rory2011

chapter (1)

it's raining outsaid ,david finished his work early today ,he took his sons from school and brought them back Главная
mary was daivd's wife and the mother of four children (kiven,poul, jack and kat ),when david and his sons entered the house mary was surprised seeing them in the house in that time
"you're early today "mary said
"yea ,mary can I talk to Ты in the кухня ?"david asked
"yea ,sure"mary said

mary and david sit on the sofa that their little where daughter sleep at night
"ok I don't know how to tell Ты this ,but we should Переместить "david said
"move to where ? and why? "mary asked
"this place is no longer our home" david said
"you Остаться в живых your job today right ?"mary asked
"no ,it's not about the job ,it's your father" david said
"david my father can't do anything ,he's not even my real father , he intimidated Ты that doesn't mean he's dangerous "mary said
"no ,listen your father want to..." david and mary conversation cutted by ringing the bills door
"oh my god ,they're here "david said

poul opened the door ,it was his grandfather with tow strange men
"is your father in Главная kid?"george (the grandfather ) said
"yes ,he's in the кухня "poul answered
"then let me see him please" george said
"ok"poul said

when george entered the кухня with those strange men david was very angry ,he was looking in george's face but george was smilling and standing afront of him
"so did Ты tell her? "george asked
"tell me what?" mary asked
"I was going to tell her" david answered
"tell me what ?,will somebody please explain what's going here ?" mary said
"I'll help your husband with make еще money by make this family lower "george said
"so you'll take our kids ?" mary asked
"no I don't want your kids ,your pathetic husband can't make money and he can't take this family expenditure ,so your life is useless ,If we killed Ты your husband can save еще money "george said
"but that's so overstated "mary said
"listen to me woman ,you're living in our money and we who decide who will live and who will die ,so Ты have tow choice ,you can save your family and die или Ты can die with your kids ,your husband will watching Ты with the kids when you'll all die and we will let him live to make еще money for us ,and Ты can't run away ,we have many men watching Ты "one of the men said
"you son of a..."mary cutted what david will say "I'll do it alone " mary сказал(-а)
"mary...no please no "david said
"ok we will take Ты after two weeks "the man сказал(-а) while he moving to the door

"are Ты out of Ты mind mary "david said
"we have no choice david " mary said
"I can save Ты "david said"
"if Ты saved me we will lose the kids ,it's ok daivd Ты did your best "said mary sad
"so Ты guys will still here или what "jack said
"we're here hunny ,ok act normal for the kids "mary said
"ok"david said

the days ran fast ,five days left for mary ,she was sitting with her kids everyday ,talking and playing with them to forget that she will leave them after five days ,her dream was watching her children growing up but unfortunately she can't be with them
mary's sons were sleeping in one small room cause the house is very old and small ,mary knocked the door before she went to sleep ,keivin opened the door ,"mom is there something wrong?" kevin asked
"can I talk to Ты inside ?" mary asked
"sure ,get in" kevin answered
mary sat down on kevin's постель, кровати ,"how old are Ты kevin ?" mary asked
"I'm almost 15 ,why ?" kevin answered
"you're a man now kevin ,you have to look out for your younger brothers and your little sister ,I want Ты to help your father "mary said
"yea of curse ,but why are Ты telling me this ?" kevin asked
"cause someday I won't be able to take care of all of Ты ,I just want Ты to understand that I'll be with Ты even if I'm not beside Ты ,I just want Ты to remember this " mary сказал(-а) wiping on kevin's hair
"don't worry mom "kevin said
"I know" mary сказал(-а) ,mary walking toward the door "good night hunny"said mary befor she closed the door
david heard what mary and kevin were talking about ,he can't take his life anymore ,he's almost losing his wife and he Остаться в живых his job today but he doesn't want to tell mary
"mary ,please don't be emotional in the last hours "david said
"I know I just.... can't "mary сказал(-а) crying
"I know it even harder for me but we can't do anything now ,I saw three men with Оружие looking at our house they were sitting in the empty building that near us "david said
"yea I know ,I just want to tell Ты something and please promise me to do what I'll say " mary said
"I'll do anything ,what Ты want ?" david asked
"don't let this happened to kat too in the future and don't tell her that I'm dead tell she been in school "
"mary what are Ты talking about do Ты think I'll do the same thing that your father did to Ты ?" david asked
"no ,I just think that she's just three years old girl but Ты don't talk to her или play with her just like when our sons were in her age ,don't hate her cause she's a girl and we are poor " mary said
"are Ты kidding me mary ,do I sound like a girls hater ? " david asked
"no ,I'm sorry I just... feel very angry ,I'm sorry I don't want to fight with Ты in my last days " mary said
"it's ok ,I think Ты should take some rest now "david сказал(-а)
"ok "mary said

ITF, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 Aww sad and very interesting. i have to say it really seems like a great book to read.

Zero_Delta Interesting that the father wants to eliminate Mary because of David not making any money...And I'm not trying to be rude, but I think you should go back and fix the capitalization. Otherwise I think it's good.

rory2011 no ,not just because of her husband can't make money ,cause mary's father can't take enough money from david because of the family expenditure ,and it's also a tradition ,fathers have to choose if they want their daughters to live more or not and george hate his daughter so of course he will choose her to die the money thing is just an excuse for goerge to kill mary

SweetHoneyBunny It's a good story so far and I hope to read more soon. To point out two things, remember to check your spelling and your capitalization. Other then that, it's really good. Keep up the good work.

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The Demon Within Chapter Five

posted by Dhampires

"Katlen!" Eric stepped вперед ready to rush to my aid.

"Whoa whoa whoa." Jarred сказал(-а) placing a hand over Eric's chest pushing him back.

Eric looked at Jarred with a кислый face then turned his attention to Eliza she looked down at the girl then at her blood on herfinger tips she smiled and as she turned to Eric she slowly ran her younger over her bloody fingers.

Eric pushed past Jarrred and rushed up to Eliza he took her by the рубашка and yelled "You bastard what did she ever do to you."

"The girls tired ya know. She doesn't even know what she is, such a pitful thing it's ashame she went on...

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Remember me Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the Комментарии :) Please don't copy and please read and review :)
Chapter 5
    Let’s get started
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    The лодка smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this лодка must be careless.
    “This...

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Forbidden: Prologue

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

Tears were rolling down my face. My сердце hurt, and my thoughts were scrambled.
It was a день that reflected my emotions. The clouds covered the sky completely and were threatening to rain, the wind was howling and my family was being ripped apart.

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A Wish on the Northern звезда Chapter One

posted by Dhampires

I flinched before he hit me I could already feel the nails from the ремень, пояс, пояса on my skin exactly where he'd hit before he really did. He hit that same spot at least five times—it was right above my butt bone.

I cried out in pain as he went up and down my spinal cord with the ремень, пояс, пояса he moved it to my arms that clinged to the вверх of the heater. Tears poured out of my eyes "Dad stop please dad!!" He whipped me harder saying "What did I tell Ты all about calling me Dad I'm your master Ты little runt!!" he changed to the other arm and and gave me a fine blow to the left jaw bone I fell on my back...

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Missing; Chapter Four!

posted by wantadog

Chapter 4

Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a минута of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, Ты bastard! What the hell!”
“Quiet! They’ll hear you,” he whispered frantically.
“Wait, so this is…real?”
Steve looked down. “Sorry, but yes, it’s real.”
Juliet clapped her hands to her mouth. “It can’t...

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волк Girl: Chapter 9

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 3

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

We were anxious to find out what was going on with the Jew. The Saumensch and I walked out and onto the streets, apart at a distance, careful of any danger around us. As we walked over onto Pariser Platz, we saw that there was a public execution today. A couple of Nazis were gathered around a feeble man, short and skinny, who appeared to be a Jew. The Saumensch and I stepped closer, seeing that it wasn't our Jew, but only to be halted by one of the Nazis on command. "HALT! What brings Ты here?" I answered calmly, "We've just come by to greet Ты fine men. Heil Hitler." The Nazi nodded briefly,...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.20

posted by Problematic129

*Thank for all the Комментарии :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 20
    Let the games begin
    “What are Ты doing here?” I ask.
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    Now right then, my сердце did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who Ты are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean Ты didn’t send me that...

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Друзья Until the End- ch.1

posted by alicia386

Abigail Dalton

Chapter One

The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 год old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved by her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it или not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those Комментарии may be true...

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World of the Shadows: parts one through Nine

posted by Zero_Delta

Okay, I'm positive Fanpop messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the Письмо spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what Ты like, tell me what Ты hate, as vehemently as possible.

“This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...

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And she was gone.....(short story)

posted by LadyEmzy16

The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...

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Tears of Friendship

posted by hgfan5602

I hold tears back...
The thought of such a close friend
Leaving you
Is horrible.

It feels like life is over,
Like...there's no point in living anymore,
If your best friend is gone,
There's no one to keep the warmth
With Ты anymore.

What's the point of life
If Ты don't have any friends
To share it with?
It's all over,
All of it.

No one's coming to calm me down,
And I'm not going to let them either.
I want to remember my closest friend...
But it's not easy,
If Ты have to leave them.

She will always be in my heart
She was an amazing friend to me,
She brought me so much joy
And happiness,
Even in the darkest of nights,...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 1

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

Like I said, it was a dark and foggy night. I thought my eyes were deceiving me. I think I saw a Jew. This time around, there are practically no Jews. They are either in concentration camps- awaiting their death, или dead already. The Nazis are not being easy with the Jews. This Jew was covered with a black cloth, and he appeared to be standing over a cowering boy, twelve years old of age at least. I moved in closer, cautiously, with my Saumensch, and we were both suspicious. The Saumensch's eyes met mine. "Is that...a murder, Carls?" Matna, the Saumensch, was definitely suspicious. She never...

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Survived (on the perspective of Evan Gary)

posted by hgfan5602

I fought through the process,
And I was determined through it all.
I was Храбрая сердцем and strong
And now I survived.

At first I was worried to death,
When the doctor сказал(-а) that I had cancer.
I stayed strong
Cuz I knew that my family and Друзья
Would care for me,
And spread the word
So I would survive.

My Друзья and I
Were always supportive of me,
And we could talk for hours,
Playing on our DSes,
Talking about Legos
Like great Друзья ever should.

Later, I was cancer-free
And I celebrated
We did everything great
It helped me cheer up.

I found out
That many people have cancer
Not only me..
And I'm...

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Missing; Chapter 3

posted by wantadog

Chapter 3

Juliet muffled her scream as she saw what was standing on the other side of the door. It was Phil, but not any Phil she had ever seen. Phil’s skin was black and bubbling, steam was being emitted from what used to be his skin, his pupils were gone, and he was giving off an awful odor, even worse than the cigarettes. He wasn’t looking her way so she dived behind the bar. “Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!” She clamped her mouth shut as her whispering rose to a shout. There was a grunt from the other side of the door and she heard a rattling noise as he beat on the door, trying...

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wen were together original song please read

posted by hugebleachfan1

baby i want Ты so bad but idk if Ты want me to i think about Ты everyday wen im around Ты i feel soo безопасно, сейф feel like no harm can be done to me wen ur here there the rain disappears to a bright yellow sun

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars lighting up the night sky were burning up inside i wanna make Ты mine Ты are the spark that ignites inside of me

youve been there for me for as long as i can remember now its time for me to be there for Ты and tell Ты how i trully and i hope Ты feel the same just dont want to let Ты go

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars...

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Unity of the Universe

posted by hgfan5602

Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and men,
And we shall work together,...

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Going Separate Ways

posted by hgfan5602

We are going separate ways.
We must leave each other,
Though I regret it,
There is nothing either of us
Can do.

We are going separate ways.
The bright light shines in our futures,
For the separate ways we go
Are the best for each of us.

We must leave for the good of it,
Though I don't want to,
And I know Ты don't either.
But it is important that we do.

It is never easy
Doing what we do the worst,
Leaving each other,
And the thoughts that we are...
Best friends...leaving each other...

We must go our separate ways.
For our own good.
And we pray that one day...
We will meet each other again.
And we will.

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Best of the Thrills: Chapter Two: Jake

posted by hgfan5602

Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the библиотека of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if Ты ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...

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Turn unto me

posted by princess_lucy03

On a starry sky
In the moonlight
At midnight
When I think of you
My сердце beats faster
For there is no one like you
Who makes my день perfect
Make my body to go numb
Lose myself
And forever hold that smile on my face

Its true that we are
Now on our separate ways
With the promises aside
That we'll meet again
For again might also mean
The Далее moment
или maybe never

Ты may Переместить on
Find your perfect princess
In this imperfect world
But to me
You'll always be
My prince charming

And thus the Вопрос remains
Should I Переместить on?
Should I forget?
Is this the destiny of my life?
Only time will tell
But until then
You'll hold a fragment of my soul
For my mind wants to Переместить on
But my сердце stays persistent
That you'll one день turn unto me