True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

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The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

posted by rory2011

chapter (1)

it's raining outsaid ,david finished his work early today ,he took his sons from school and brought them back Главная
mary was daivd's wife and the mother of four children (kiven,poul, jack and kat ),when david and his sons entered the house mary was surprised seeing them in the house in that time
"you're early today "mary said
"yea ,mary can I talk to Ты in the кухня ?"david asked
"yea ,sure"mary said

mary and david sit on the sofa that their little where daughter sleep at night
"ok I don't know how to tell Ты this ,but we should Переместить "david said
"move to where ? and why? "mary asked
"this place is no longer our home" david said
"you Остаться в живых your job today right ?"mary asked
"no ,it's not about the job ,it's your father" david said
"david my father can't do anything ,he's not even my real father , he intimidated Ты that doesn't mean he's dangerous "mary said
"no ,listen your father want to..." david and mary conversation cutted by ringing the bills door
"oh my god ,they're here "david said

poul opened the door ,it was his grandfather with tow strange men
"is your father in Главная kid?"george (the grandfather ) said
"yes ,he's in the кухня "poul answered
"then let me see him please" george said
"ok"poul said

when george entered the кухня with those strange men david was very angry ,he was looking in george's face but george was smilling and standing afront of him
"so did Ты tell her? "george asked
"tell me what?" mary asked
"I was going to tell her" david answered
"tell me what ?,will somebody please explain what's going here ?" mary said
"I'll help your husband with make еще money by make this family lower "george said
"so you'll take our kids ?" mary asked
"no I don't want your kids ,your pathetic husband can't make money and he can't take this family expenditure ,so your life is useless ,If we killed Ты your husband can save еще money "george said
"but that's so overstated "mary said
"listen to me woman ,you're living in our money and we who decide who will live and who will die ,so Ты have tow choice ,you can save your family and die или Ты can die with your kids ,your husband will watching Ты with the kids when you'll all die and we will let him live to make еще money for us ,and Ты can't run away ,we have many men watching Ты "one of the men said
"you son of a..."mary cutted what david will say "I'll do it alone " mary сказал(-а)
"mary...no please no "david said
"ok we will take Ты after two weeks "the man сказал(-а) while he moving to the door

"are Ты out of Ты mind mary "david said
"we have no choice david " mary said
"I can save Ты "david said"
"if Ты saved me we will lose the kids ,it's ok daivd Ты did your best "said mary sad
"so Ты guys will still here или what "jack said
"we're here hunny ,ok act normal for the kids "mary said
"ok"david said

the days ran fast ,five days left for mary ,she was sitting with her kids everyday ,talking and playing with them to forget that she will leave them after five days ,her dream was watching her children growing up but unfortunately she can't be with them
mary's sons were sleeping in one small room cause the house is very old and small ,mary knocked the door before she went to sleep ,keivin opened the door ,"mom is there something wrong?" kevin asked
"can I talk to Ты inside ?" mary asked
"sure ,get in" kevin answered
mary sat down on kevin's постель, кровати ,"how old are Ты kevin ?" mary asked
"I'm almost 15 ,why ?" kevin answered
"you're a man now kevin ,you have to look out for your younger brothers and your little sister ,I want Ты to help your father "mary said
"yea of curse ,but why are Ты telling me this ?" kevin asked
"cause someday I won't be able to take care of all of Ты ,I just want Ты to understand that I'll be with Ты even if I'm not beside Ты ,I just want Ты to remember this " mary сказал(-а) wiping on kevin's hair
"don't worry mom "kevin said
"I know" mary сказал(-а) ,mary walking toward the door "good night hunny"said mary befor she closed the door
david heard what mary and kevin were talking about ,he can't take his life anymore ,he's almost losing his wife and he Остаться в живых his job today but he doesn't want to tell mary
"mary ,please don't be emotional in the last hours "david said
"I know I just.... can't "mary сказал(-а) crying
"I know it even harder for me but we can't do anything now ,I saw three men with Оружие looking at our house they were sitting in the empty building that near us "david said
"yea I know ,I just want to tell Ты something and please promise me to do what I'll say " mary said
"I'll do anything ,what Ты want ?" david asked
"don't let this happened to kat too in the future and don't tell her that I'm dead tell she been in school "
"mary what are Ты talking about do Ты think I'll do the same thing that your father did to Ты ?" david asked
"no ,I just think that she's just three years old girl but Ты don't talk to her или play with her just like when our sons were in her age ,don't hate her cause she's a girl and we are poor " mary said
"are Ты kidding me mary ,do I sound like a girls hater ? " david asked
"no ,I'm sorry I just... feel very angry ,I'm sorry I don't want to fight with Ты in my last days " mary said
"it's ok ,I think Ты should take some rest now "david сказал(-а)
"ok "mary said

ITF, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 Aww sad and very interesting. i have to say it really seems like a great book to read.

Zero_Delta Interesting that the father wants to eliminate Mary because of David not making any money...And I'm not trying to be rude, but I think you should go back and fix the capitalization. Otherwise I think it's good.

rory2011 no ,not just because of her husband can't make money ,cause mary's father can't take enough money from david because of the family expenditure ,and it's also a tradition ,fathers have to choose if they want their daughters to live more or not and george hate his daughter so of course he will choose her to die the money thing is just an excuse for goerge to kill mary

SweetHoneyBunny It's a good story so far and I hope to read more soon. To point out two things, remember to check your spelling and your capitalization. Other then that, it's really good. Keep up the good work.

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posted by Problematic129

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posted by malmcd

SLOTH

'Do Ты ever get off the couch, sir?
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As are all my other brothers,
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posted by malmcd

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(Fantasy)

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