True Writers Article: From The Other Side, Prologue

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posted by 1999jacko

" Oh no, no, no and no again im losing it man I can't do it no more. I'm falling got it now leave me alone." I sat on my постель, кровати tears streaming down my face, the things in his vision were fighting me making me do things I didn't want, but he was fighting. Yet I was losing and all because I couldn't get anything to go right without a multiple of five или five, nothing went right without five. I couldn't find anyway one to help me in my fight, I can't believe my 4 Друзья had abandoned me(4 I told Ты nothing ever went right without 5). The sound of footsteps got louder and the doctor came in and started to talk to me, but I couldn't understand anything he was saying because of the figures who were screaming at me, punching my arm until I finally Остаться в живых it and stood up, rushed towards the window, dived out of it and waited for about 2 секунды before I felt the wind go out of my body and my vision to go completely black.

I woke roughly 2 hours later feeling different, loose. I shake myself and smile feeling the air through my fingers as if for the first time, yet in the back of my mind I could hear the screaming of a tiny figure wanting to be let out and escape from the figures. " HAHAHA" I laugh realizing im crazy and that im not myself, all of that lasts for hours and I feel the euphoria happiness, but I know its never going to last I feel the depressed me escaping and as he smothers my happiness I know I'll be back and do something in the time I have.

well I hope Ты enjoyed it and I know it might not make much sense right now but it will soon and just to know in case Ты dont know what the boys going through he has a mental illness
and cya Далее time

sadiebugz00 and alicia386 like this

alicia386 Okay, I did kind of understand what was happening. I am thinking that he is now on the other side. Like a whole different world like heaven. Am I right? Anyways, I was captivated from the first paragraph. It is interesting and it kept me reading until the end because I wanted to know. That is what keeps a reader reading a book. He becomes curious and wants to know mores I they keep reading. If you are able to do that in your writing then you are already becoming a great author, I have nothing bad to say, well. Yeah. Nothing that I can see wrong. Maybe it needs to be a bit longer but hey, it doesn't have to be.

1999jacko Thanx a lot and the reason it was quite short was it was half ten at night over here when I wrote Andd English treacherous wantede to do something about writing so I wrote this down in my jotter as well as here

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Hope in the Strangest Places Chapter 1

posted by dragonsmemory

Chapter One
A безопасно, сейф Place to Hide
Down in the town, humans lived their comfortable lives, untouched by most of the world. Tonight, the weather is particularly bad. A blizzard moved into the area. It isn't fit weather for man или beast. Yet, fighting her way through the swirling snow is something that is neither one nor the other.
Nemesis, a healthy dragon of five centuries, fought to keep her course in the storm. She may have gotten a bit стаут, толстый in her later years, but that won't keep her from her travels. The winds changed direction every few seconds....

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.23

posted by Problematic129

    23
    Brooklyn
    “No, no, no, no,” Terry assures. “Nothing bad is going to happen, Brook, или it already would have, don’t freak out.”
    “I can’t help not freaking out, I mean, I think everything is going to mess up because of the everything is fine. It’s not fine!” I say.
    Terry tilted her head at me. “Hey, it’s going to be okay, and if it’s not, we’ll get through it.”
    I nod, “together.”
    Terry nods as she turns...

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 9

posted by alicia386

Chapter 9: I Play Bad Cop And Ты Play Good Cop

Faye Martinez and Jason Rivers sat in Mr. Rivers' office in his house. They had readied everything for the interviews they were having that evening. They planned on interviewing anyone and everyone who saw Simone the день she vanished. This would take possibly all day. Faye had to literally drag Mr. Rivers from his luxury постель, кровати and to his office. He was sitting in the dark, staring out the window, while on the floor. It was ridiculous. Simone always complained about how her father never truly loved her. It is obvious now how much he truly...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.18

posted by Problematic129

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    Zaria
    “So we will not speak of или mention the unspeakable event that took place last night,” Darren told us, looking like a stern teacher reprimanding his class.
    “For the hundredth time yes!” Edith shrieked.
    The sad part was that she wasn’t exaggerating.
    We were all on edge, super tension ran from the air, we had left the park with a dispirited mood. Not because of the stupid stone. Iris was supposed to call us when she got home, but the call never came so we called...

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Зачарованные and Dangerous ch. 9

posted by alicia386

Chapter Nine: Escape Artist Can Escape But A Group Of Students Can't Even Escape From Their School

Everyone was ready for the escape plan the Далее night. If it was up to me we would have had everything ready within an час but tracking teacher schedules was harder then it looked. We were all set and ready to take off that night. I had learned that the school kept two emergency vans in the back. I nabbed the keys from the office when no one was around. I wonder how long it will take them to notice that a set of keys are missing. It was about midnight when our team assembled. Everyone...

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Everything Eden #1: Beginning Booklist

posted by dragonsmemory

Welcome to the official/unofficial newsletter for everything Eden. This is where you'll hear about exciting new projects as well as general news of the planet Eden and my musings. Everything Eden is your Источник for, well, everything Eden.
In this issue, I'll talk aabout the three serries of Eden Книги that'll be coming soon. The first Eden book is expected to hit shelves in the Далее five to ten years, with others following soon after. Let's take a look.

THE SHADOW TRILOGY VOLUME 1: HOPE IN THE STRANGEST PLACES
The first volume in the Shadow trilogy deals with an evil present in all beings, called...

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Зачарованные and Dangerous Ch. 6

posted by alicia386

Chapter Six: Two Goons, One Girl, One Man, and One Secret Room

The door immediately slammed shut behind me. The one thing I never do is panic. It was the perfect time to panic but I had to keep my composure. I wondered if Darrell was able to escape. He couldn't possibly wait for me. He has the opportunity to escape and save himself. I took one step вперед and tumbled down the stairs. It was so dark that I didn't even notice them. I had quick reflexives so I was able to stop myself before I crashed или made a sound to ward off the intruder. A light switch was to my left so I flicked...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.12

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Darren
    No matter the coaxing, Stilere stayed stubborn, she wasn’t being left behind. Ты see, it’s like really early in the morning, how early? Like friggin three a.m., that’s how! I am tired, and I certainly don’t want any spook in my life now.
    “I’m coming!” Stilere yelled defiantly, smirking when she saw Alex’s shoulder’s deflate. She’s won the battle.
    “Fine,” Alex said. “But be careful, oh and your on watchful tower.”
    Watchful...

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World of Shadows Ch. 18

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eighteen
Book Six- Zoe

How did the battle end? Well, Shane kicked some serious butt. I wasn't so bad myself. The guards may have been ghost but they were pretty easy to kill. All Ты had to do was kill hem like Ты would kill a human. It was that simple. It was what made the battle even еще serious then it already was. My sister. She killed herself. That is what it looked like. The odd thing was that The One was nowhere to be found. I searched everywhere in the замок but I couldn't find him. I soon gave up. He wasn't important. My sister was. The dream of my sister's grave...

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Remember me Ch.38

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Фэнтези :)~
Chapter 38
        The river that drowned tears
    I ignored the freaked out yells and warning’s as I went past the speed and nearly demolished the car, we couldn’t take our time, we had to be fast. We finally reached the river, which was very close to the river, and I turned off the engine and jumped out of the car running to the lake.
    I plunged deep into the water and I swam through it to find the victim, who I found though made me gasp. Jessica was tied to...

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The keeper of the forbidden light

posted by Annabeth788594

chapter one

When I was a little girl my dad suddenly left. I remember being really close to him. Sometimes he would act strange though. Like he never stayed in one place long and was always looking behind him like he thought someone was following him. And one день he сказал(-а) he had to go for a little while, and he never came back. He was the best father I could ask for. He was kind and always did what was best for the family. And that is why it broke my сердце to find out that he wasn’t coming back. At first I didn’t believe it and I didn’t want to. The only thing I wanted was my dad to come...

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Remember me Ch.35

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Фэнтези :)~
Chapter 35
        Qualities of a hero
    “I brought Ты your Избранное foods, deserts, etc. Should hold Ты for awhile.” Jess says, handing me a steamy plate.
    “What are Ты planning on doing, Jess?” I ask, confused, but grateful she wasn’t starving us. “What’s your motive?”
    “Sorry, can’t give Ты all of my secrets, you’ll know soon,” Jess paused. “But right now, eat, strengthen your bones.”
    I take...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Darren
    Now, I don’t hate school, no, not at all. But the thought of going to it for a place of safety, especially with no one but creepy janitors in there, yeah, I’m not liking it.
    “How are we going to get in?” Brooklyn asked, eyeing the doors that, in morning look friendly and welcoming, but at night look dangerous and ready to gobble up innocent kids.
    “Oh, please!” Stilere said, looking at our faces. “You cannot be scared of school,...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.4

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Iris
    I hadn’t been really surprised when we broke apart after that weirdness, being with them brought back all those memories. But I’ve been beginning to feel a bit lonely, all of us really bonded that day, and it feels like were sharing a secret. The bad part is that we don’t even know the secret either.
    I still can’t stop thinking of that book, it just popped up from where the lightning hit. Something happened that made it do that.
    “Hey Zaria,” I say as I walk up to her.
    Zaria...

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Don't Dance (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

Ya tell me,
Don't dance, don't dance,
Just stay inside and never go out
And scold me
All день long, all день long

What makes Ты think you're so damn awesome?
Don't ya know we have a life too, too?
We'd be sittin in watching TV
And I don't think Ты want that either

So what the heck can we do?
We're not just mindless robots with nothing else to do
We don't have time for homework
We just wanna have fun, fun, fun

We have a life, no time for homework
We can go ahead and play flag football
But I'm not goin inside

Why do Ты act like
There's nothin else better than
Doin homework all night long
I bet Ты never liked that when Ты were young

We've been playin outside
Now it's time to kick in and relax
No еще time for homework, just sit back and do the things I Любовь to do
Cuz I gotta enjoy my life when I'm young.

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 6

posted by alicia386

Crime: Dectetive Story

Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling или at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful...

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Remember me Ch.27

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Фэнтези :)~

Chapter 27
        Creepy doesn’t even begin to describe
    “The drowning man? Seriously creepy, considering how she died.” Jess said, shivering. “They’ve got to be the number one suspects now.”
    “It probably wasn’t all of them, just a few, или maybe even one.” Cadence said. “Think is, Dorothy was loved by everyone, and in that vision everyone wanted to be her favorite, what gives?”
    “What?”
    “Who would...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.10

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 10
    The smell of young Любовь in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of волейбол fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but сказал(-а) nothing more.
    Don’t Ты just Любовь the feeling of having the last word?...

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World of Shadows- Ch. 8

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES или LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost или anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
"Who are Ты and why did Ты attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...

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Друзья Until the End- Chapter Twelve Final Chapter

posted by alicia386

Chapter Twelve

"This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to Ты Joe."
Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived Главная to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...