True Writers Article: From The Other Side, Prologue

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posted by 1999jacko

" Oh no, no, no and no again im losing it man I can't do it no more. I'm falling got it now leave me alone." I sat on my постель, кровати tears streaming down my face, the things in his vision were fighting me making me do things I didn't want, but he was fighting. Yet I was losing and all because I couldn't get anything to go right without a multiple of five или five, nothing went right without five. I couldn't find anyway one to help me in my fight, I can't believe my 4 Друзья had abandoned me(4 I told Ты nothing ever went right without 5). The sound of footsteps got louder and the doctor came in and started to talk to me, but I couldn't understand anything he was saying because of the figures who were screaming at me, punching my arm until I finally Остаться в живых it and stood up, rushed towards the window, dived out of it and waited for about 2 секунды before I felt the wind go out of my body and my vision to go completely black.

I woke roughly 2 hours later feeling different, loose. I shake myself and smile feeling the air through my fingers as if for the first time, yet in the back of my mind I could hear the screaming of a tiny figure wanting to be let out and escape from the figures. " HAHAHA" I laugh realizing im crazy and that im not myself, all of that lasts for hours and I feel the euphoria happiness, but I know its never going to last I feel the depressed me escaping and as he smothers my happiness I know I'll be back and do something in the time I have.

well I hope Ты enjoyed it and I know it might not make much sense right now but it will soon and just to know in case Ты dont know what the boys going through he has a mental illness
and cya Далее time

sadiebugz00 and alicia386 like this

alicia386 Okay, I did kind of understand what was happening. I am thinking that he is now on the other side. Like a whole different world like heaven. Am I right? Anyways, I was captivated from the first paragraph. It is interesting and it kept me reading until the end because I wanted to know. That is what keeps a reader reading a book. He becomes curious and wants to know mores I they keep reading. If you are able to do that in your writing then you are already becoming a great author, I have nothing bad to say, well. Yeah. Nothing that I can see wrong. Maybe it needs to be a bit longer but hey, it doesn't have to be.

1999jacko Thanx a lot and the reason it was quite short was it was half ten at night over here when I wrote Andd English treacherous wantede to do something about writing so I wrote this down in my jotter as well as here

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The Boy Who Cried волк паук Prologue.

posted by sawfan13

Prologue

Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital постель, кровати were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.

It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, Ты may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...

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Troy, The Almighty Fatty

posted by alicia386

Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a год and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Сиара wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a месяц before we started packing. Сиара is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane Еда is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.13

posted by alicia386

Wednesday

First день of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer или Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read Книги and she thought that maybe I could meet some new Друзья that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is by tomorrow.

An Introduction to my mystery novel

posted by adamk

After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at Письмо a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm Письмо is in the in the section below. If Ты like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen год old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.

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the keeper of the forbidden light chapter 7

posted by Annabeth788594

I got dressed and slipped my куртка with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. Эй, watch where you’re going! “Sorry Ты Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle сказал(-а) for Ты to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right Ты will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...

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Зачарованные and Dangerous Ch. 12

posted by alicia386

Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

Their headquarters was nothing еще then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger Космос and tons еще gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different Просмотры of the outside building. One monitor was Показ a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me.
Darrell stayed by my side...

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Change или Be Changed. Chapter 6

posted by IlovePatch97

Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to Комментарий :D

Chapter 6

“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are Ты bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris или Patricia...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy или anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...

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The Eye of the Beholder, Chapter 4

posted by 1999jacko

Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he сказал(-а) hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his круг and drew his...

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Beautiy is the Beast Prologue

posted by Dhampires

The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's сердце whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...

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Зачарованные and Dangerous Ch. 3

posted by alicia386

Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

"You're lying," I сказал(-а) but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
"That maybe, but would he really want Ты to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add еще to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
"You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most вверх notch...

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Smith, Ron Smith. Chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a подушка case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back сиденье, место, сиденья of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...

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A death in the forest, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if Ты don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours назад and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.2

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are Ты okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris сказал(-а) giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...

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The Dark Of Writing, Chapter 1

posted by 1999jacko

Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. селезень, дрейк was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to пересекать, крест the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that селезень, дрейк was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge by the...

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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?

posted by malmcd

Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?

Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked клубника red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm Kiss on the check and saying, “I Любовь Ты dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I Любовь Ты two.” As he turned into the Далее road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel холм, хилл Chapter 13

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk Главная или is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" сказал(-а) Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" сказал(-а) Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where Ты are I'm picking Ты and Leo up, From ur 'Also...

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Runaway Eagle

posted by hgfan5602

Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not Главная for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My сердце is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any еще of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.9

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and Ты are sinner, commit all, Ты are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...

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волк Girl: Chapter 7

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take Ты to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...