What do u think of my poem?

i had a really bad день w/ my bf so i wrote this poem thinking he would break up w/ me. we made up so things are fine now but i still want to share it w/ u guys:)

the soft moon light
glinted on our faces
i looked straight into his eyes
the moonlight shadowed his face.
As a tear silently rolled down my cheek,
a whisper slipped from my lips
"this is it, isn't it?"
he pulled me close
looked deep into my eyes
drownding all my thougts
bearly audable, he whispered:
"i Любовь you"
then pulled me down
for a kiss

what do u think?