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What do Ты think about my story? is there anything I should change? Here's the link: link
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dqwert said:
wonderful!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
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EgoMouse said:
One thing I hate about Чтение fiction, is when there's too many mystical creatures and not knowing much about it. Then whenever the name comes up, it flies pass the mind because of the lack of connection.
Anyhow, its only a prologue. I would probably provide some reference sheets to go along with it so there's a sense of connection. Unless Ты want viewers to imagine how the characters look. I'm not that type though. I would completely pass Чтение it.
Otherwise, I like the writing.
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There are two other parts in the prologue to explain all that and I'll try to add еще in that part too.
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