Письмо Article: Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 10

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 10

“It appears an animal attacked him but the claw marks look almost….human,”
“How could a person do something like this?”

Voices echoed in and around him. They sounded so distant like he was under water.
His face burned like something tore the skin off and left it bare to the elements.
A light glowed around his eyes; a strong smell of oxygen filled his nose as he took in a deep breath.
The voices became louder as he became еще awake.

“He’s starting to wake up.”

“What’s going on?” he winced. Talking made his face hurt.

“You’re in the hospital, Ты were found this morning and it appears Ты were attacked by an animal. Do Ты remember anything at all?”

The voice was female and was warm with kindness and concern. He was able to relax еще but he strained to remember the following night.

“It was cold…”

“My friend’s body was on the ground. He was killed by something.” He managed to remember.
“A figure came at me; I tried to shoot it but missed. It killed my friend’s mother as she tried to shoot it herself.”

He felt warm tears form in his eyes.

“Then it came for me and it was too strong. It was no animal.” The tears fell as he choked out those last words.

“Are Ты sure it wasn’t an animal?” the warm voice said.

Jax opened his eyes, the light burned them but he looked straight at the woman who stood by his side. She was middle-aged with short brunette hair. Her eyes were dark green but they held a strong intelligence to them. He couldn’t read her ID badge but she definitely was a doctor.

“No. Not an animal.”

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