True Writers Article: From The Other Side, Prologue

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posted by 1999jacko

" Oh no, no, no and no again im losing it man I can't do it no more. I'm falling got it now leave me alone." I sat on my постель, кровати tears streaming down my face, the things in his vision were fighting me making me do things I didn't want, but he was fighting. Yet I was losing and all because I couldn't get anything to go right without a multiple of five или five, nothing went right without five. I couldn't find anyway one to help me in my fight, I can't believe my 4 Друзья had abandoned me(4 I told Ты nothing ever went right without 5). The sound of footsteps got louder and the doctor came in and started to talk to me, but I couldn't understand anything he was saying because of the figures who were screaming at me, punching my arm until I finally Остаться в живых it and stood up, rushed towards the window, dived out of it and waited for about 2 секунды before I felt the wind go out of my body and my vision to go completely black.

I woke roughly 2 hours later feeling different, loose. I shake myself and smile feeling the air through my fingers as if for the first time, yet in the back of my mind I could hear the screaming of a tiny figure wanting to be let out and escape from the figures. " HAHAHA" I laugh realizing im crazy and that im not myself, all of that lasts for hours and I feel the euphoria happiness, but I know its never going to last I feel the depressed me escaping and as he smothers my happiness I know I'll be back and do something in the time I have.

well I hope Ты enjoyed it and I know it might not make much sense right now but it will soon and just to know in case Ты dont know what the boys going through he has a mental illness
and cya Далее time

sadiebugz00 and alicia386 like this

alicia386 Okay, I did kind of understand what was happening. I am thinking that he is now on the other side. Like a whole different world like heaven. Am I right? Anyways, I was captivated from the first paragraph. It is interesting and it kept me reading until the end because I wanted to know. That is what keeps a reader reading a book. He becomes curious and wants to know mores I they keep reading. If you are able to do that in your writing then you are already becoming a great author, I have nothing bad to say, well. Yeah. Nothing that I can see wrong. Maybe it needs to be a bit longer but hey, it doesn't have to be.

1999jacko Thanx a lot and the reason it was quite short was it was half ten at night over here when I wrote Andd English treacherous wantede to do something about writing so I wrote this down in my jotter as well as here

The war of Color, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

Rick lay in hospital with stitches all over his face and his left eye swollen up, a small eye patch like thing barely covering it up. His best friends- Allan, Brandon, Kyran and Duncan- stood around his постель, кровати telling him what happened after he left, Kyran was mainly telling him about it though because everyone had bruises apart from him," and so everyone was fighting at lunch and som black kid had his leg broken, it was so cool Ты could see the bone sticking out and blood went everywhere over James, sp all in all we had a good first день of what they're calling 'the war'." Brandon smiled slightly...

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Inspired:Peacefully delicate

posted by Problematic129

I believe this is part 7, with another mixture of funny and inspiring pictures, cause let's face it. It's pretty hard to get fully serious, always have a happy funny mind to lighten everything in the middle of heartache and pain. Just a word of advice. Some pictures here come from pinterest hellobeliver.com, tumblr, gummy chocolates tumblr and deviant art (look for maryana02. deviantart .com), look for them, there awesome. I think one of these pictures is a repeat not sure, and too lazy to look fro the others.
Again I own absolutely nothing, and I do hope Ты smile laugh and get inspired because those are just wonderful feelings and it's the purpose of all of this.
Enjoy!

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The Deadly Sins ~PART TWO~

posted by malmcd

SLOTH

'Do Ты ever get off the couch, sir?
Do Ты ever get off the диван, мягкий уголок and stop watching TV?
Do Ты ever go for a run?
Do Ты ever simply walk around или exercise outside?
Do Ты just play video games all day, sir?
Do Ты even do any work?
Man, Ты are lazy! '

I would not be surprised if someone
Said this to you, my friend,
For I am the cause of it all.
I am one of the Deadly Sins,
As Ты humans call me,
For I am what makes people a lazy bum.

I am a daemon from the pits of hell,
As are all my other brothers,
But I must say,
That I am not a sin,
But rather a human instinct.
And it amuses me to see Ты sit around...

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Millions Of Miles Apart

posted by malmcd

Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there Ты have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same сердце strings as Ты and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep Ты apart from one another...But what if my one true Любовь isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him или her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first день of spring, March 20, 1998. And was...

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Sendoffs and Memories (Prologue to "The Spotlight Trained on Me," a Harry Potter Fanfiction)

posted by dragonsmemory

I looked around the platform, waiting. George leaned down and whispered in my ear. "Don't worry, Hailey. They'll be here."

I glanced up at him. He had changed after the battle, we all had. George, always the prankster, became еще serious. He had even talked about closing down Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. The hole in the side of his head, where his ear used to be, was still unnerving, but I learned to accept it as a part of him.

"I know, George," I said. "There's still a connection."

"You mean that old twin telepathy thing Ты had going is still there?"

I stood on my toes to Kiss him. "Always."...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
5
        Stilere
    It wasn’t like I was expecting anything to happen, but what happened when we opened the book did surprise me.
    “What in the world is that?” Alex asked, looking at the weird lettering.
    “I don’t know, it’s definitely not English, but it doesn’t look like other languages, and I know a ton.” Iris said.
    “Maybe it’s not even a language.” Darren said. “Sure doesn’t look like it.”
    “It’s...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.19

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 19
        I didn’t even need revenge
    I couldn’t help but feel giddy as I brushed my teeth and changed into еще prettier looking clothes than my bedtime pajama’s of Hello Kitty. The house was quiet and I was a little bit disappointed, but at least I’d get some time to myself, and I needed that very much. I was also glad I didn’t have to go to school either, not because I’d be embarrassed или anything, but because the минута I saw Meredith I’d go all Ninja...

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Remember me Ch.31

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Фэнтези :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, или at least Далее to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Chapter 2 Part 1

posted by CapShunsuifan13

His eyes fluttered open, and his muscles automatically tensed. For a секунда he was back in Afghanistan, alone, without his comrades, falling asleep unguarded behind enemy lines. He noticed how his arms were, like they had been holding someone, someone who is no longer there. Gemma.... The thought entered his head like a speeding bullet. The fact that she wasn't there made him think that she had never been, that he wasn't really home, and that he imagined the whole thing. But one look around the room, his eyes adjusting to the moonlight, he could tell he was in the club house. He really was...

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волк Girl: Chapter 13

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

(Fantasy)

I woke with a pounding head and a throbbing shoulder. A bright light was shining in my eyes so I couldn't see anything. “What happened?”
“You were shot.”
“Shot?” I couldn't see anyone. Suddenly, the light snapped off and the room was thrown into shadows. Rubbing my eyes, I saw that I was in some sort of operating room. “Yes, shot. Brett and Dalla brought Ты here, сказал(-а) I was the only one that could save Ты so I did the only thing I could.” I was drawing a blank, what was it Dylan could do? An image came into my mind. It was a stack of files, one flashing after another....

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A Wish on The Northern звезда Chapter Three

posted by Dhampires

I shook in fear as I felt him hovering over me it scard me out of skin I could already feel his hits coming. As leaned over me I heard angry load foot steps stomping their way towards us. My eyes were closed tight but snapped open when I heard his out burst.

"Dad! Stop!" He'd сказал(-а) firmly.

"This little witch" he stooped down so his mouth was level with my ear. "Was snooping on on our conversation I think I'll..." he chuckled "finish her off in one sweep."

I could feel the cold metal of the нож against my skin against my vocal cord. God, I wasn't even breathing I didn't didn't bother to think....

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Зачарованные and Dangerous Ch. 2

posted by alicia386

Action: Spy Fiction

Chapter Two: I May Be A Spy But Weather Can Kick My Butt Any Day

I and almost everyone else is the world takes life for granted. I didn't realize how good I had it until something hit our jet which immediately caught on fire. Years of training for disasters like this kicked in. I was on high alert looking for the nearest exit. My dad was already at one with two parachutes. Dang it. How could he have possibly have gotten those that fast? This would not seem impressive. Our pilot was already trying desperately to control the jet. It was like he wasn't afraid of those...

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Smith, Ron Smith,Prologue

posted by 1999jacko

4 weeks ago
Ron sat miserably in his apartment watching the new for something interesting, when a beeping noise butted into his little день dream. He ran over to the таблица where the phone was placed, he picked it up instantly hitting answer." Hello commander, is my dad back yet?" he сказал(-а) hopefully. The commander cleared his throat before answering," Ron I'm really sorry but we just received a message and its not good news... I'm afraid your father is dead and we need Ты to relocate away from Washington today. So pack your stuff and get ready for your escort to take Ты to your new home." All...

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What I Took From It, Chapter Three

posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Mystery, Drama/Romance

Claire and I unpacked our belongings and put them in our own dressers and waited for lunch to be ready.
After a little while, Leila hollered for us. As Claire and I reached the doorway, we observed the stampede as the six of them pounded down the stairs.
When my little sister and I reached the kitchen, Jeb greeted us and handed us a bowl and silverware. At the head of the table, Leila stood with a ladle and served us plenty of food. I sat Далее to Makayla, and Claire sat across from me, Далее to Joey.
The meal was spent in almost total silence, save...

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What I Took From It, Chapter Two

posted by flabaloobalah

Once we were all done swarming each other, Leila helped Claire and I through the little herd of cousins, upstairs, to our room. Where usually Ты would take a left and be looking at their bedroom doors and a bathroom, we took a right at the вверх of the stairs so we were faced with a room i hadn't seen before. The interior was a pale, almost skin like beige that was cracked and peeling in some spots, especially where our beds were pushed against the wall. Beside each постель, кровати was a small таблица with drawers and a lamp. In between us was a large window, creating a distorted patch of light on the scratched...

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Be Normal!...Not. (Chapter One)

posted by hgfan5602

Hi, my name is Jonas. I'm thirteen. I'm...well, not what Ты would consider normal.
I have twenty pairs of X-His from the Converse store Далее door, all pink. Okay, okay, see? I'm not normal. And that's not the end of it.
I have thirty T-shirts that say овца, овцы Вампиры Rock on them. Yeah, I Любовь the horror movie "Sheep Vampires." It's filled with овца, овцы that get tortured and wake up at midnight only to turn into овца, овцы Вампиры that suck the blood out of their shepherds. It's rated R, but my parents never notice. I bet they don't even know there's a rating system. Lucky for me.
So, this morning, I woke up, when my glass of Кока-кола left from an год назад shimmered. A misty face appeared.
"Jonas...come here to me...or Ты shall suffer the consequences...like your precious ancestors," the woman screamed.
Was it my imagination...or did I get sucked into my glass of Coke?

Jonas's glass of Coke

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A life of survival,prologue

posted by 1999jacko

because I like to have lots of stuff on at once heres a prologue of one of my new stories

The prologue
I ran вперед into nothing things being erased in the path of the other kids behind me, the world is crumbling before my eyes. MY Друзья that have already died bodies appear on the nothingness in front of me I shove them away from my eyes and jump high over them.Too high I feel the pain shoot up and down my leg searing a hole of pain in my head and then that's all I feel, think and hear..Pain and that's when I know they are right behind me haunting me for all the bad things I've done I just...

What I Took From It, Prologue

posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

There was this one summer I spent with my cousins, back when I was fourteen. My little sister, Claire, went to their house with me.
That first day, when we jumped out of the van, we were stunned. The house was this glorious, leaning, peeling, giant Главная on a winding dirt road. The paint was a soft baby blue, something that reminded me of rocking Лошади and winter nights. Our Auntie Leila stepped onto the rickety porch and waved and smiled. Cautiously, Claire and I waved and smiled back. Uncle Jeb came to give us hugs. We returned the hugs without complaining....

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.8

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 8
    That was not subtle
    “My reports so good! I’ll get at least a D!” I squealed as Beth and I walked towards the school.
    Beth frowned. “A D? Why not aim for B?”
    “Honey the last time I got a B, was when one stung me.” I informed her.
    “You can at least try, bubs, it can’t be that hard.” Beth reasoned as reached the school parking lot.
    “Impossible Ты know I- Эй, look it’s Grey!” I yell when I see him on his motor cycle. “Hi...

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The Inevitable Fate 6

posted by rory2011

David rode the man's car , the man drove to the police station ,when they arrived ,the man told David to go to ask for officer 12's office in the секунда floor
David ran towards the office as fast as he can ,when he arrived ,the officer looked at him asking " are Ты Mr. David miller ? " yes ,I'm sir " David сказал(-а)
" sit down please " the officer сказал(-а)
David sat on that black диван, мягкий уголок near the officer disk
" sir ,could Ты please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David сказал(-а)
" today there was a огонь in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all...