jacob and renesmee

I searched for my mom and dad as Jake and I left the plane for Washington.I spotted them and we made our way over.I let go of Jake's hand,running towards my mom to embrace her."Oh,Nessie!"She said,rubbing my back."How is he?"I asked,warily."She sighed."No better,no worse."
My thoughts swirled.Why did it have to be now?Why did it have to be him?I imagined him,pale,sunken,and frail on a hospital bed.I shuddered."What happened?"I asked.She grew rigged."Your father and I were going to visit him yesterday.His car was still there,but he wouldn't answer the door."She had to pause for a moment as...

I remember the день when i promised myself that i would never return back, the place where i am being forced to return. I have never been this scared before in my life. i would give anything right now to back to my dad, in my room, with Jacob, where i am безопасно, сейф in the slightest and not on a sunny,blizzering beaten road weaving throught the tropical streets of Jacksonville in the back сиденье, место, сиденья my mothers Commodore. Feeling my heartbeat throught my ears.
I can feel my lunch begin to rise as i started to remember the улица, уличный signs, the local bakery and smells of humiddity. My Mothers belly inferred with...

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“ I'm going to miss you”. My mother told me before I boarded the plane to Washington State. Two months назад I had agreed to Переместить to Forks to live with my father Charlie, to give my mother and her husband Phil some space. I hadn't seen Charlie in forever. When I was little I used to visit him every summer but that stopped around when I was...