How does it look?

it looks good for a begginner...

It looks quite good and neat. Really cool too. Keep up the good work with that drawing :)

It's very defined and your shapes are excellent.

What I would suggest is that Ты don't use such thick lines when sketching with pencil as it doesn't look as sharp and put together. If Ты want thick lines, thicken them when Ты use ink by using a pen that draws lines thicker. Ты should let your tools work for Ты instead of drawing over the same line again and again. When Ты sketch with pencil, the picture should look about as bare as it can be (for Манга drawing that is).

Overall, to me it looks like you're ready to start using еще than just pencil.

It looks cool but Ты should work on the eyes im a levi Фан so thanx for drawing him my день began so beautiful😝