honestly Ты do need to work on anatomy, arm length and legs. It's a great start though, Ты can only improve just remember that and keep practicing. Ты did a good job on the face and hair though ^^. Yes I would say Ты need to work on detail but I would worry about detail еще after perfecting the body shape, anatomy, etc. But yeah for just doodling it looks really good keep going! I like the hair, Ты did a good job on the bangs and adding detail to the bottom of the pig tails!