This is a remade version of Ganta's Kurieitã. I talked with Ryuu for a while and it did turned out to be an extremely OP zanpakuto. Using elements of both my original Kurieitã, and elements from Ryuu version that he posted on the Make your own zanpakuto thread, I remade my zanpakuto.
Zanpakuto name: Souzounushi (Creator)
Appearance: On it’s sealed state it resembles a normal katana. The wrapping on the handle is black and golden with a pure golden frame.
Release command: Tsukuru
When released his blade becomes a parang (an indonesian sword), with a golden blade and handle, and a black ring down on the handle.
Shikai ability: His zanpakuto only displays its effects when its blade is used to hurt someone. If he manages to cut someone, it will open a wound in the person. Only the wound is not normal, but displays spatial distortion. The inside of the wound is pitch black and it has no known dept. However, the wound will grow more and more, slowly overtaking the body of the person slashed, until the person itself simply seizes to exist. If the wound manages to be closed however, the effect will not take place. By using a determined amount of spiritual energy, the wound may be kept from growing, or even heal. A wound caused on an opponent will take 10 minutes to completely overtake an opponent. Its growth can be halted by constantly channeling spiritual energy through the wound; if a victim with reiatsu equal in strength to the wielder constantly channels spiritual energy through the wound the growth of any wound inflicted can be reversed (i.e. the wound gradually shrinks in size until it no longer exists) or if a victim has weaker reiatsu than the wielder they must channel a considerably larger amount of spiritual energy through the wound to reverse the growth of any wound. Victims that have reiatsu stronger than the wielder automatically reverse the growth of any inflicted wound.
Bankai: Sekai no Souzounushi (creator of worlds)
An immense power surge will be noticeable in comparison to his Shikai form, but no changes are apparent, even on the sword shape or length. This is because the energy is used to create a pocket dimension to which only Ganta has access. Ganta can however bring any foreing object inside of it. To do so all that is required is to touch the object in question. No word, or phrase of incantation is required, only his mere intention. When he does so, both Ganta and the object that he touched will be brought inside this pocket dimension called Mirror World (Mirã no Sekai) along with any other object in a 45m radius. The pocket dimension receives this name because it is a perfect copy of the world from which they came. This, along with the inability of anyone noticing any form of change in energy, turns into impossible the task of knowing when being brought into Mirã no Sekai (with Ganta being an exception). While inside this dimension, Ganta can cause the same type of wounds as before. However, it now also constantly saps reyryoku from the one that was cut. Each wound saps approximately 0.5% of ones reyryoku every minute. Of course the number may be bigger or lower, depending on the person that was cut. While inside this dimension, anyone that was brought into it, including Ganta’s allies, will start suffering from spatial disorientation (again Ganta being an exception to this rule). He also gains the ability of creating portals to which he can channel Kido trough. Every portal needs to have a pair from which everything that goes into one, gets out the other. This can turn a Kido route virtually impossible to predict, especially if the person trying to dodge it, or block it, is under the effect of Mirã no Sekai for to long. Ganta can leave this dimension anytime he wants by touching one of the objects that were transported into his dimension and simply having the mere intention of leaving. Again, the transition is impossible to notice by anyone but Ganta himself. The object does not need to be the one that he touched in order to transport there, but merely any object that was brought into the dimension. However, while in order to bring someone inside the dimension, anyone in a determined radius will be compromised, in order to leave no such thing happens, and only Ganta and the one he touched will leave the dimension, leaving the others behind.
A person can also force Ganta and themselves along with any other object brought inside it, by depleting all of Ganta spiritual energy, killing him, or breaking his zanpakuto. Independent of the way Ganta and anyone else leave the pocket dimension and where they were while inside it, they will reappear in the original location from which they departed.
Mirã no Sekai can be only be kept by Ganta 10 minutes and no more. This time only counts when inside the dimension however. Whenever he leaves Mirã no Sekai, he needs to recharge in order to go in again. The time to recharge is equal to the time spent inside it. It is extremely dangerous to be inside Mirã no Sekai, after the time runs out, or coming back to it before recharging, as doing so will result in the dimension starting to crumble. If it crumbles, anyone left inside is destroyed along with Mirã no Sekai being Ganta no exception. The dimension can also be completely destroyed by sealing his zanpakuto or simply reverting it to its Shikai state but it is impossible to do so while inside Mirã no Sekai, as a safeguard to Gata himself, or while anyone else is still inside it, as a safeguard to any Ganta considers allies. This can turn this pocket dimension into an efficient prison as well.
In order to know how much time has passed, while inside Mirã no Sekai, the black ring in Ganta’s handle is filled with a golden energy. This golden energy will deplente counter-clockwise as time passes. When there is no time energy left, it means time has run out. Only Ganta is capable of seeing this energy though, so only him knows how much time there is left. When outside the dimension, the energy will start filling the gap inside the ring again, this time clockwise.
Zanpakuto name: Souzounushi (Creator)
Appearance: On it’s sealed state it resembles a normal katana. The wrapping on the handle is black and golden with a pure golden frame.
Release command: Tsukuru
When released his blade becomes a parang (an indonesian sword), with a golden blade and handle, and a black ring down on the handle.
Shikai ability: His zanpakuto only displays its effects when its blade is used to hurt someone. If he manages to cut someone, it will open a wound in the person. Only the wound is not normal, but displays spatial distortion. The inside of the wound is pitch black and it has no known dept. However, the wound will grow more and more, slowly overtaking the body of the person slashed, until the person itself simply seizes to exist. If the wound manages to be closed however, the effect will not take place. By using a determined amount of spiritual energy, the wound may be kept from growing, or even heal. A wound caused on an opponent will take 10 minutes to completely overtake an opponent. Its growth can be halted by constantly channeling spiritual energy through the wound; if a victim with reiatsu equal in strength to the wielder constantly channels spiritual energy through the wound the growth of any wound inflicted can be reversed (i.e. the wound gradually shrinks in size until it no longer exists) or if a victim has weaker reiatsu than the wielder they must channel a considerably larger amount of spiritual energy through the wound to reverse the growth of any wound. Victims that have reiatsu stronger than the wielder automatically reverse the growth of any inflicted wound.
Bankai: Sekai no Souzounushi (creator of worlds)
An immense power surge will be noticeable in comparison to his Shikai form, but no changes are apparent, even on the sword shape or length. This is because the energy is used to create a pocket dimension to which only Ganta has access. Ganta can however bring any foreing object inside of it. To do so all that is required is to touch the object in question. No word, or phrase of incantation is required, only his mere intention. When he does so, both Ganta and the object that he touched will be brought inside this pocket dimension called Mirror World (Mirã no Sekai) along with any other object in a 45m radius. The pocket dimension receives this name because it is a perfect copy of the world from which they came. This, along with the inability of anyone noticing any form of change in energy, turns into impossible the task of knowing when being brought into Mirã no Sekai (with Ganta being an exception). While inside this dimension, Ganta can cause the same type of wounds as before. However, it now also constantly saps reyryoku from the one that was cut. Each wound saps approximately 0.5% of ones reyryoku every minute. Of course the number may be bigger or lower, depending on the person that was cut. While inside this dimension, anyone that was brought into it, including Ganta’s allies, will start suffering from spatial disorientation (again Ganta being an exception to this rule). He also gains the ability of creating portals to which he can channel Kido trough. Every portal needs to have a pair from which everything that goes into one, gets out the other. This can turn a Kido route virtually impossible to predict, especially if the person trying to dodge it, or block it, is under the effect of Mirã no Sekai for to long. Ganta can leave this dimension anytime he wants by touching one of the objects that were transported into his dimension and simply having the mere intention of leaving. Again, the transition is impossible to notice by anyone but Ganta himself. The object does not need to be the one that he touched in order to transport there, but merely any object that was brought into the dimension. However, while in order to bring someone inside the dimension, anyone in a determined radius will be compromised, in order to leave no such thing happens, and only Ganta and the one he touched will leave the dimension, leaving the others behind.
A person can also force Ganta and themselves along with any other object brought inside it, by depleting all of Ganta spiritual energy, killing him, or breaking his zanpakuto. Independent of the way Ganta and anyone else leave the pocket dimension and where they were while inside it, they will reappear in the original location from which they departed.
Mirã no Sekai can be only be kept by Ganta 10 minutes and no more. This time only counts when inside the dimension however. Whenever he leaves Mirã no Sekai, he needs to recharge in order to go in again. The time to recharge is equal to the time spent inside it. It is extremely dangerous to be inside Mirã no Sekai, after the time runs out, or coming back to it before recharging, as doing so will result in the dimension starting to crumble. If it crumbles, anyone left inside is destroyed along with Mirã no Sekai being Ganta no exception. The dimension can also be completely destroyed by sealing his zanpakuto or simply reverting it to its Shikai state but it is impossible to do so while inside Mirã no Sekai, as a safeguard to Gata himself, or while anyone else is still inside it, as a safeguard to any Ganta considers allies. This can turn this pocket dimension into an efficient prison as well.
In order to know how much time has passed, while inside Mirã no Sekai, the black ring in Ganta’s handle is filled with a golden energy. This golden energy will deplente counter-clockwise as time passes. When there is no time energy left, it means time has run out. Only Ganta is capable of seeing this energy though, so only him knows how much time there is left. When outside the dimension, the energy will start filling the gap inside the ring again, this time clockwise.
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Ryuuikari
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That's much better Leleu ! I like your alterations too, makes the blade your own :)
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Leleu2
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I like that Ты liked it. I didn't properly thanked Ты for your help yet. So here it goes. Thank Ты for your help Ryuu. :)
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Leleu2
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I am also reviewing my latest zanpakuto (the aura based) to make it еще usable. I will probably just Редактировать it tough, instead of simply making another post.
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